VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[k1n5l4y3r]

Was Neil a pirate or something? Why does he have silver teeth?

 

[KАRАMBA]

Y'all keep saying beard and that is literally nothing more than a five o'clock shadow.

Oh no, don't underestimate it. It's a damn brutal beard. Beard made of steel rods. But for Fuckface, given his lifestyle, it's dangerous. After all, how can he lick someone's pussy or ass (what he usually does often), with such a deadly tool on his face?! He can cause serious injuries to someone. That's why a beard is a problem for Fuckface.

 

[DarkKiller]

pretty sure that finally giving the MC some stubble is mainly just DPC's way of indicating a significant enough time jump occurs. the fact that MC will at least look less like Tommy probably didnt even matter to him

Agreed, kinda doubt he's able to grow a stubble like that in just a day or two, this looks like a 19 year old who hasn't shaved in like a week.

 

[dalli_x]

I don't remember DPC talking about a emotional scene I know he talk about scene long and short scenes but things are often not what they seem to be in previews

"I had a good flow when writing this week. I spent a long time writing scenes for one of the biggest parts of the episode. Writing some of those scenes made me feel physically and emotionally drained."

That's what he wrote. The only question is whether and if so, what kind of drama it is. One thing is certain in any case. DPC is very emotionally attached to all of his characters. When I look at the MC in the preview with Riona, it is something that has thrown the MC off balance.

 

[AchedCroissant]

 

[Bobhanw]

pretty sure that finally giving the MC some stubble is mainly just DPC's way of indicating a significant enough time jump occurs. the fact that MC will at least look less like Tommy probably didnt even matter to him

I mean kinda makes sense for some kinda time jump always imagined we were gonna see the Mc graduate by the end of Dik so a few time jumps are inevitable i think

 

[JJ1960]

pretty sure that finally giving the MC some stubble is mainly just DPC's way of indicating a significant enough time jump occurs.

Riona locked him in his DIK library room and banged him for 3 days straight until he finally gave her an orgasm. MC didn't stop to do anything but nap and consume Josy and Maya's leftover Popsi Max and fruit and what was left of the jar of peanut butter from Derek to replenish his energy. He had no opportunity to even think about shaving. He was lucky to get out of there alive.

 

[Darkwen]

"I had a good flow when writing this week. I spent a long time writing scenes for one of the biggest parts of the episode. Writing some of those scenes made me feel physically and emotionally drained."

That's what he wrote. The only question is whether and if so, what kind of drama it is. One thing is certain in any case. DPC is very emotionally attached to all of his characters. When I look at the MC in the preview with Riona, it is something that has thrown the MC off balance.

I couldn't remember how it was phrased which going back to the preview MC looks to be in deep thought so something might had happen. The question is for me was the scene draining just because it was a lot of work to do or was it a lot of work and emotional. Could the preview be apart of that scene or after it. There's a lot of guessing that can be done but with out context of the whole scene its hard to know whats going on other then what we can see happening. DPC likes to mess with us think back to Jill preview in ep9 MC had the same look on her face I mean his face and it turn out to be nothing but Jill over reacting this could be the same thing

 

[ChipLecsap]

pretty sure that finally giving the MC some stubble is mainly just DPC's way of indicating a significant enough time jump occurs. the fact that MC will at least look less like Tommy probably didnt even matter to him

Now he is a mixture between Rusty and Tommy.
But seriously, IMO the Beard suit him, He looks a bit more Mature, more Bad Ass, I like it.
But you right, that probably it's also a couple of week Time jump. I mean at least in ep 12 we will reach Xmas time, if not before and may be episode 11 is already Winter, December.

SnowBall Fight Mini Game , Here We come.

 

[Rythan25]

No. They will open their own drug store... with blackjack and hookers

Wait they are taking Quinn with them and also a deck of cards ? (Quinn satisfies both requirements, the drug store part, and the hooker part).

 

[Bobhanw]

Now he is a mixture between Rusty and Tommy.
But seriously, IMO the Beard suit him, He looks a bit more Mature, more Bad Ass, I like it.
But you right, that probably it's also a couple of week Time jump. I mean at least in ep 12 we will reach Xmas time, if not before and may be episode 11 is already Winter, December.

SnowBall Fight Mini Game , Here We come.

Yeah ep 10 is probably gonna focus a bit on preparing for Christmas then ep 11 is when we'll celebrate it kinda curious how that's going to turn out like are we gonna stay at the college during the holidays with the Diks and girls or head home for a bit

 

[Nultron]

Yeah ep 10 is probably gonna focus a bit on preparing for Christmas then ep 11 is when we'll celebrate it kinda curious how that's going to turn out like are we gonna stay at the college during the holidays with the Diks and girls or head home for a bit

Oh so we are going to skip Thanksgiving where everyone says they are thankful for MCs dick? Uninstalled thumbs downed.

 

[AchedCroissant]

MC in Sage's branch

 

[toobextra]

I googled "banana png" to make this, now I'm getting targeted ads from Walmart to buy bananas.

 

[walker188]

Swolebalt

I would LOVE it if Tybalt, learns some humility and some moves, hits the gym and turns his life around.

The watermelon looks tasty, not sure about his choice of girl though.

MC in Sage's branch
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It's funny. If you manage to avoid Jade, Sage's path makes ZERO sense.

MC is still supposed to feel 'guilty', but there's nothing to feel bad about. It comes off super weird.

That beings said, as much as I LOVE Sage, I don't think I can suspend my disbelief that she (or ANYONE) in a semi-realistic story would ever be able to get past sleeping with their mom. It just feels like something that would weigh a relationship down until it broke. Which leaves only two options (imo);

1 Sage somehow gets over it after she finds out. Which wouldn't feel real or honestly a decent payoff to one of the most enormous revelations in the story so far. Players may want to end us with Sage, but the story isn't going to work out if they get her.

2 Sage does not forgive. This is incredibly realistic, especially so if DPC goes the brutal route of her rejecting the MC, him winning her back, because they are a perfect couple, then slowly, over time, the awkward unshakable weight of this mistake just drags them down until they both give up. I don't particularly want this ending either, though I will say it makes a ton of narrative sense and would be a very well done, mature story. I think the biggest problem is that an AVN is a game and in a game a player feels entitled to having an 'winning' option. This would very much be losing, and that means the player would be forced to lose.


I don't envy DPC, he's put himself in a difficult position with (as far as I can see) no winnable option, all for the sake of a twist that didn't need to be there. It reminds me a bit of GRRM. Everyone thinks he's this amazing author for breaking all these narrative rules, but the truth is that narrative rules exist for a reason, and by breaking them, he's essentially made his story ASoIaF, unwritable.

I truly hope DPC hasn't done the same. Perhaps he has a bold plan to avoid the coming apocalypse. I sure hope so.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

I googled "banana png" to make this, now I'm getting targeted ads from Walmart to buy bananas.

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Should know by now never to use google..

 

[robrize2169]

in regards to Tybalt being redeemed..yeah no chance. entitled rich pricks with mommy and daddy issues like he has are forever doomed to pissing off every decent person they meet until they get fed up and jump off the first bridge they find to end their pathetic little dick existence. and no one will care or notice he is gone..

 

[cheldon]

so riona will be a love interest. so does that mean sally could be too or is she meant to just be a little scene and be a joke like becky

 

[shazba]

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I just took a look at it again. Looks like it's the same park bench that MC was talking to Jill on.

That bench will have some story at this rate

Or it is goodbye. Nothing good in short

No, this is a new bench altogether!

For all bench references so far:

https://f95zone.to/threads/being-a-dik-v0-9-1-dr-pinkcake.25332/post-8304854​

If you look at the so-called "Dumping Bench" (I realise now I should have called it the "Closure Bench", but whatever):

Spoiler: dumping bench

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You'll see the bolts are at the extremity of the planks, and the top horizontal plank is removed from the rest of the horizontal planks, and also on a 45 degree angle.

Not so with our new bench!

Oh, this is so exciting!

I'm gonna call the new edition the "Homeless Wino" bench, until further information comes to light...

 

[Kazami]

Of those remaining 22 parts, 4 are free-roam events (two small ones, one medium-sized, and one long)

Oh... not again. Episode 9 shitty freeroams flashbacks.

Takes me back to my banger review of Episode 9:

Everytime a new freeroam section started i wanted to kill myself, it had 3 FUCKING PHASES with you just moving around and clicking stuff until something happened, that's dogshit. Why would you spend 1 year creating an update that only revolves around a fucking halloween party, and release it 2 months late?. The girl's branches don't go anywhere, they made such a big deal about Zoey but she ended up being a background character, i swear she spent more time with Jacob than with the MC lmao. Party planning minigame is such a waste of time and resources, it's like a Madam 2.0.

I don't want to see the DIK mansion ever again, I have PTSD after playing these shitty freeroam sections (which is 99.9% of the fucking update). If you're one of those cringelords that have multiple saves for every branch (yikes) and want to play through that shit again, i take pity on you, i've been carrying on with just one save using my trusty tool URM (#AD jk) so i can see, change and get everything that i want in one single playthrough - And even then I got bored after phase 3 started. Encountered a loop bug with Bella and Jill, easily fixing it by jumping to the next label. This update is hot garbage story-wise (which is what we nedeed).

Scenes are:

Spoiler: JUICE

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See you guys next update in 2 years after I get over my newfound phobia of frat mansions and freeroam sections (I get shivers just by writing those words).

Rating 2/10: Would check my Task app on the phone for the 10th time to see who do i have to talk to again.