VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[daxil94]

In short, it's not my job to come up with an antagonist for this story, it's above my paygrade, let the DPC do his job. "Here we are now, entertain us"

Being serious, I can't point to a specific person and say "that's the antagonist". Vinnie looks like a proper villain material, he is chaotic and dangerous, and can easily become the spark that burns to the ground the fragile world of B&R. But I don't think he's too important to be the main antagonist, he's more of a chain of events fuse. Something like Vinnie hitting hard or shooting at the MC. Or he aims at the MC, but shoots someone near him, someone who is dear to the MC, Jill for example. Hello drama, my old friend!

Anyway, after the incident, the cops intervened, the investigation begin, the Quinn's buisness is exposed, the connection with Burke is revealed, a huge scandal, everything is ruined in B&R. Headlines: "B&R University was front for drug dealing and prostitution.", "Dean Burke denies any involvement in buying sexual services from students. Several students had previously accused him of harassment.", "New evidence of drug-dealing activity on campus grounds has been unearthed, including on a fraternity house run by the son of one of B&R's co-founders." (same goes for the sorority house, run by the daughter of dean Burke). I'm sorry here for my English, I feel that I may sound ridiculous but I can't correct it myself.
I think there is more than enough fuel for the drama. The Sage's arc alone is worth something! Her father is a predator in disguise, her sorority is a whorehouse and drug store, her university has gained a reputation, her mom cheats on Sage's dad with Sage's boyfriend. Hey Fuckface, antagonize this

Another direction an antagonist might come from is the MC mom's lineage. I find it hard to believe these conspiracies about Jill's blood relation to the MC through his mom. But we know almost nothing about his relatives from his mother’s side, only that they have been assholes to Neil and the MC all their lives. Maybe one of them is going to interfere and ruin the MC's life.

I think of this scenario too, it would fit for every single branch and it would fit why DPC is going to tell the story of just 1 year because after 1 year of college there's no B&R anymore or no frats & sororities. But it think if story is going this way it can only be in season 3 ending or first episode of season 4 not until EP12-13. And Mona can testify for prostitution rig.

Sage: Devastated, knows what quinn did behind her while she thought she was her friend, her father.
Josy & Maya: No school to go ? (least ones maybe ?) (**Edit oh no i fuckin forgot the tuition fee)
Jill: Family name tarnished and it will be chaos in Royce family
Bella: Workplace & Where she can be with MC is gone ?
Quinn: Jail (probably ?)
Rio: Jail (Probably ? Oh now i'm sad. for people who're going to ask she was a middleman between quinn and buyer)
etc.

People who think if this is dark how do you think this story ends ? With this branching & all the stuff, we need a story conclusion that's going to hit all of em MC, MGs, SGs, DIKs, HOTs.

 

[KАRАMBA]

The Sage's arc alone is worth something! Her father is a predator in disguise

Oh, yes, that's Stephen.

But we know almost nothing about his relatives from his mother’s side

There is a high probability that we do not know anything about Fuckface's relatives on the maternal side because they are very influential people, which it is better not to mention unless absolutely necessary. For example, I wouldn't be surprised if someone like the chairman of the Bilderberg Club turns out to be Fuckface's grandfather . In fact, the person who controls the world. And when the time comes, Fuckface will have to take his place. But, we all know perfectly well that Fuckface has already found his true vocation - to play mini-games on his iPhone. Thank God he has Quinn. The love of his life. She will take over the management of the world, so as not to distract Fuckface from the mini-games.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

One thing I've been wondering about, and I'm not sure if anyone's tackled this one yet but, has anyone ever wondered why Jade is being openly and willing to be hostile towards Chad, her daughter's "main squeeze"? In the following screenshots, you can see she's practically eager to reprimand Chad.

Spoiler: Something ain't right here.

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Both Cathy And Stephen look annoyed by Jade stepping in and giving her 2 cents on that matter. Jade strongly suggests taking stern disciplinary actions against Chad, while both Stephen and Cathy are offering a more 'hands off' approach by suggesting to "talk it out" with Chad.

This scene is always bugging me. In reality for something like this would end with some form of suspension. But clearly Stephen and Cathy are thinking about who it is that's on the other end of that 'hook' while Jade doesn't seem to give a fuck and shows she's willing to go the extra mile to drop the hammer on Chad.

Thoughts?

 

[daxil94]

One thing I've been wondering about, and I'm not sure if anyone's tackled this one yet but, has anyone ever wondered why Jade is being openly and willing to be hostile towards Chad, her daughter's "main squeeze"? In the following screenshots, you can see she's practically eager to reprimand Chad.

Spoiler: Something ain't right here.

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Both Cathy And Stephen look annoyed by Jade stepping in and giving her 2 cents on that matter. Jade strongly suggests taking stern disciplinary actions against Chad, while both Stephen and Cathy are offering a more 'hands off' approach by suggesting to "talk it out" with Chad.

This scene is always bugging me. In reality for something like this would end with some form of suspension. But clearly Stephen and Cathy are thinking about who it is that's on the other end of that 'hook' while Jade doesn't seem to give a fuck and shows she's willing to go the extra mile to drop the hammer on Chad.

Thoughts?

With Sage said "was mom right?" i think she knew or had an idea what might be going on. That's probably why she's extra harsh with Chad and don't forget she's trying to make a move on MC too.

 

[KАRАMBA]

Thoughts?

Why these questions ?
How will this help Quinn gain power over the world ?

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

With Sage said "was mom right?" i think she knew or had an idea what might be going on. That's probably why she's extra harsh with Chad and don't forget she's trying to make a move on MC too.

Yeh I've thought of that, but it still doesn't feel like it would be just that. It would be a pretty petty thing of her to do. We already know it took at least 3 indiscretions from Stephen for Jade to start acting out in "revenge".
When sage mumbled "Was mom right", I believe that's just about Chad's sexual preferences. Not because he's a complete arse hole. The entire Burke Family is based on complete arse holes. And yes that include Sage. Because she didn't outright return MC's guitar once she found out it was stolen. It was a rather cunty move to demand something in return for what she clearly knew wasn't hers.

 

[curiousdog585]

Why these questions ?
How will this help Quinn gain power over the world ?

Take a rest day tomorrow, you've earned it

 

[KАRАMBA]

One thing I've been wondering about, and I'm not sure if anyone's tackled this one yet but, has anyone ever wondered why Jade is being openly and willing to be hostile towards Chad, her daughter's "main squeeze"? In the following screenshots, you can see she's practically eager to reprimand Chad.

Spoiler: Something ain't right here.

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Both Cathy And Stephen look annoyed by Jade stepping in and giving her 2 cents on that matter. Jade strongly suggests taking stern disciplinary actions against Chad, while both Stephen and Cathy are offering a more 'hands off' approach by suggesting to "talk it out" with Chad.

This scene is always bugging me. In reality for something like this would end with some form of suspension. But clearly Stephen and Cathy are thinking about who it is that's on the other end of that 'hook' while Jade doesn't seem to give a fuck and shows she's willing to go the extra mile to drop the hammer on Chad.

Thoughts?

Well, it's really simple. Jade sees that Chad doesn't treat her daughter the way she deserves. She doesn't like it and she wants to destroy this relationship in any way possible. So she's trying to use this opportunity to kick Chad the fuck out of college. But for Stephen, Chad is the main hope of the college in the competition, and therefore he does not like the fact that Jade insists on punishment. There is nothing secret here.

 

[KАRАMBA]

It was a rather cunty move to demand something in return for what she clearly knew wasn't hers.

Wow. I didn't think about it from that point of view. This is bullying. Real damn bullying. With a capital "B"

 

[ProxyGist]

What makes you think Tommy would even know that MC is Josy's boyfriend? He only saw Josy and Maya coming out of the hallway, which incidentally also leads to Jacob's room. We remember that he assumed that Sage was fucking Jacob in Sage's way, so he'll probably assume the same thing. Besides, if Jacob denies it, both Josy and Maya can say they fucked together. Yes he saw Maya and MC, but he hardly remembered her at all.
Besides even if MC admits he's Josy and Maya's boyfriend, the trouple breakup will be Tommy's fault. He can probably accept MC as Josy's boyfriend, but he's unlikely to accept trouple. He will probably give MC an ultimatum. I'm generally guessing that Josy, MC and Tommy will go to her parents' house together for Thanksgiving.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Wow. I didn't think about it from that point of view. This is bullying. Real damn bullying. With a capital "B"

Now I'm not sure if you're just being a sarcastic twat or if you're serious.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Well, it's really simple. Jade sees that Chad doesn't treat her daughter the way she deserves. She doesn't like it and she wants to destroy this relationship in any way possible. So she's trying to use this opportunity to kick Chad the fuck out of college. But for Stephen, Chad is the main hope of the college in the competition, and therefore he does not like the fact that Jade insists on punishment. There is nothing secret here.

You raise an interesting point.

 

[ProxyGist]

One thing I've been wondering about, and I'm not sure if anyone's tackled this one yet but, has anyone ever wondered why Jade is being openly and willing to be hostile towards Chad, her daughter's "main squeeze"? In the following screenshots, you can see she's practically eager to reprimand Chad.

Spoiler: Something ain't right here.

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Both Cathy And Stephen look annoyed by Jade stepping in and giving her 2 cents on that matter. Jade strongly suggests taking stern disciplinary actions against Chad, while both Stephen and Cathy are offering a more 'hands off' approach by suggesting to "talk it out" with Chad.

This scene is always bugging me. In reality for something like this would end with some form of suspension. But clearly Stephen and Cathy are thinking about who it is that's on the other end of that 'hook' while Jade doesn't seem to give a fuck and shows she's willing to go the extra mile to drop the hammer on Chad.

Thoughts?

Yeah, I think Jade has hit on Chad before, or at least tried to seduce him, but he ignored her. Jade is a pretty vindictive woman and if MC rejects her she reacts pretty negatively to it, so this could be a little petty revenge of disappointed Jade. She has no other reason to treat Chad this way. He is Sage's boyfriend after all. Unless he has some sort of conflict with Tybalt.
MC was apparently the first one who wasn't afraid to flirt and flirt with her and the romance quickly took off. I generally assume Jade will be the hidden antagonist driven by revenge. Revenge on her husband, revenge on MC, etc. Jade has a pretty common type of bossy and frustrated woman who isn't used to being rejected.

 

[daxil94]

What makes you think Tommy would even know that MC is Josy's boyfriend? He only saw Josy and Maya coming out of the hallway, which incidentally also leads to Jacob's room. We remember that he assumed that Sage was fucking Jacob in Sage's way, so he'll probably assume the same thing. Besides, if Jacob denies it, both Josy and Maya can say they fucked together. Yes he saw Maya and MC, but he hardly remembered her at all.
Besides even if MC admits he's Josy and Maya's boyfriend, the trouple breakup will be Tommy's fault. He can probably accept MC as Josy's boyfriend, but he's unlikely to accept trouple. He will probably give MC an ultimatum. I'm generally guessing that Josy, MC and Tommy will go to her parents' house together for Thanksgiving.

Maybe that's how throuple ends ? Tommy finds out tells Monica and Monica to Pete(we saw him as a nice guy) and they will not approve of the relationship and we know Josy is daddy's girl so you can guess the rest ? But it was a bad move from Josy if Maya just walked out of that room they would've just think MC fucked Maya but now, everything can go wrong or maybe right ?

 

[KАRАMBA]

Now I'm not sure if you're just being a sarcastic twat or if you're serious.

Look, I understand perfectly well that this is of course bullshit. But, this is a great argument in disputes with those who constantly accuse Quinn of bullying. For Quinn, I'm ready for any lie and forgery.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

And yes that include Sage. Because she didn't outright return MC's guitar once she found out it was stolen. It was a rather cunty move to demand something in return for what she clearly knew wasn't hers.

Well. Putting myself in Sage's shoes... She's talking to a guy who broke into her house stole something and then says that something her boyfriend she loves and has no reason to lie about says has given her it's his. At least I would doubt the MC there.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Look, I understand perfectly well that this is of course bullshit. But, this is a great argument in disputes with those who constantly accuse Quinn of bullying. For Quinn, I'm ready for any lie and forgery.

lol Fair enough.

Yeh Quinn is a special animal.
DPC said it perfectly and it's an exact reflection of how I feel about her.

I love to hate her when not on her path for what she does.

And hate to lover her when on her path, because that's when you see that she can clearly be more than a simple bitch and can show an interesting side to her.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

We remember that he assumed that Sage was fucking Jacob in Sage's way, so he'll probably assume the same thing.

You say what now?

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Well. Putting myself in Sage's shoes... She's talking to a guy who broke into her house stole something and then says that something her boyfriend she loves and has no reason to lie about says has given her it's his. At least I would doubt the MC there.

That's all Bullshit because she is fully aware that is part of the hazing that is set-up by the frat and the sorority. So that one doesn't fly. It's not because it's set up by Tommy and Quinn that she can claim ignorance of that "tradition" Sorry.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

That's all Bullshit because she is fully aware that is part of the hazing that is set-up by the frat and the sorority. So that one doesn't fly. It's not because it's set up by Tommy and Quinn that she can claim ignorance of that "tradition" Sorry.

The important part is the second part of the sentence. She trusts Chad, she doesn't trust this new guy. If some guy you've barely ever met before came saying that your boyfriend you've known and been in a relationship for years stole something from him you would at least question if that's true or not. I'm surprised she gave him the guitar that quickly, I wouldn't have until I confronted Chad about it.