VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Ricthequick]

Why DPC gotta do Maya like that? It's not really a bad style just a bad style for her, she had an almost messy but sexy style before! This on top of the fact I kind of like Riona now when it sounds like pain is on the way with her(I'm behind everyone on this but chose to spoil myself). I really do think castrating Tybalt is the only thing that will make me feel better.

 

[ZenoMod]

She wish she was 1/2 as hot as Patty!

EDIT
mate you opened up for me one of those weird rabbit holes... Maya actually has something of a Patty Bravo

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Ehm... Even if in Ep10 her hairdo is out of fashion by 54 years, I still prefer Maya

P.S. It's Patty Pravo with a P

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Mister Spock, can you remind this crewmember when the date with Nora is and how to obtain it? I totally forgot its existence.

If you got Nora's number in Episode 8, she'll ask you on a date in Episode 10 while at the gym. Beware, it is mutually exclusive with Nicole's date, so if you're seeing both women you can only choose one.

Hold on. Something does not fit in your explanation. You criticize the lack of drama/character dumb comedy and underline your position with the example of a cat showing down a wine glass as an act of poor storytelling and then you do not connect the dots you just have presented to us?



This. I tend to agree with him.

If something (sensibel) gets damaged or ruined you have a strong sentimental or another kind personal bond with you get mad, sad or something else. This is indeed an act of drama. You complain about something and point something else out in the same sentence which actually contradicts your statement.

I do believe you that there a some poorly written places in the story and we surely can dispute about it all day but your example does not count in my opinion. Different personalities, experiences and views to certain topics distinguish us all and explains different opinions but tis doe not justifiy it. I do not mean i t as an attack. All i want to show it that this scene do not fit.

My issue is primarily with the cat manufacturing some drama.

Cats are assholes, but also it really was contrived, like DPC needed to inject drama into an otherwise great date and couldn't come up with anything better. It's also rather pointless when some actual drama comes in later, as they find out they are teacher and student.

I don't want dumb comedy drama. It's cheap and easy to have some friction arise by destroying sentimental possessions, I would be saying the same thing if Fluffy knocked over an antique vase that's been in Nora's family for generations. Or Fluffy knocked over her mother's urn. Fuck, it doesn't even have to be Fluffy, MC could've done it by accident by turning around and his boner knocks over the thing in question. Might as well be watching The Three Stooges.

Discovering they are teacher and student is still rather sitcom-y, but that's more legitimate drama. It results in a tough conversation and the dissolution of their relationship. And if Nora did get pregnant, that's even more drama down the road.

I will kink shame as much as I please. If you like feet you're a fucking weirdo.

I made this for you

 

[Ricthequick]

Ehm... Even if in Ep10 her hairdo is out of fashion by 54 years, I still prefer Maya

P.S. It's Patty Pravo with a P

Yeah my bad in the name, my mom used to love her, don't ask me why since of my 2 parents she wasn't even the Italian one.

 

[MiltonPowers]

It took a while but now we have turned reality upside down.

no one mentions it, not even that intrepid hero Jacob, not even Sage when she asks him to accompany her

but then exactly, if no one tells you, how are you supposed to guess someone's surname?

an autistic college where MC is above average, not by much....

When Tremolo is above average that says so much about the students in the college.

 

[TheNowhereWolf]

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He knows what he did... little prick.

 

[Gunizz]

OK, it probably works for movies.
But I just know too well how it all happens.
I love Quinn so damn much. I would never wish her anything bad.
But I'm a realist. And sometimes I see what she's doing and I think, damn it, girl, what the fuck are you doing?!
This business is not for her. It hurts me to see her, a seemingly smart girl, doing stupid things.
When she couldn't resist Lily's offer, it was painful to see.
She has no support, no protection. What is she thinking?
Even if it's not Vinny, then someone else who does business in this neighborhood will definitely run into her in this.
And what will she do?
What will she do if several guys come up to her in the alley and say - You will pay us as much as we say.
She can't do anything. She's counting on Buddy, and that guy who hangs out in his kennel, Mick, I think.
But as it turned out, it was a stupid calculation on her part.
I'm annoyed that she doesn't see this, doesn't understand that she's alone, and no one needs her.
She's deceiving herself by thinking that she's badass. Unfortunately, in reality, such self-deception is very expensive.
It's the grave or jail.
For a young guy, going to jail at a young age is not too scary. That's ok. For some, it can even be a useful experience.
But for a girl, it's a broken fate. Female beauty is very fragile, like a flower.
In harsh conditions, this "flower" withers very quickly.
And after jail, they become of no use to anyone, except for some dregs of society.

Karamba forgive me but you really let me down, you're a total fraud! You should have supported Quinn's entrepreneurial spirit, appreciated her willingness to take risks by playing outside the box of the swampy bourgeois society. Instead you come out with the judgments of a retired man more suited to hanging out with God-fearing bigots than a mob queen who just needs a virile partner to give her support and encouragement.
Quinn, if you read this, know that I am ready to assist you in any criminal endeavour.

 

[felicemastronzo]

When Tremolo is above average that says so much about the students in the college.

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Arieth could be a coincidence, Arieth and Dawe are an unequivocal sign

 

[Crusader of Romance]

When Tremolo is above average that says so much about the students in the college.

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There are different types of intelligence. Just because he sucks at putting things together and seeing how it's connected, doesn't mean he's an idiot in everything. While it's weird that he doesn't know who Sage's parents are when everybody else seems to know (it doesn't help that she never uses her last name and uses Morgan), I can kinda relate to that. I have always been the last to find out things. But he has a much more social social life than I've ever had. I guess he simply doesn't listen to gossip and misses a lot because of that. He's not really into small talk.

 

[Ricthequick]

There are different types of intelligence.

 

[Ray_D]

Our guy can barely see anything, he didn't even think to find out Sage's last name after hanging out with her for two months. Everyone around him knows the obvious.
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Come on man don't be hard on the poor MC, he's just a victim of a classic writing problem. The protagonist and the other characters will only be as smart as their writer.

It took a while but now we have turned reality upside down.

no one mentions it, not even that intrepid hero Jacob, not even Sage when she asks him to accompany her

but then exactly, if no one tells you, how are you supposed to guess someone's surname?

an autistic college where MC is above average, not by much....

That university is miraculous, it can turn the stupidest people into machines of logic and common sense and in the next chapter they lose their capabilities.

When Tremolo is above average that says so much about the students in the college.

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He's not retarded, he's just a victim of bad writing and plot holes.

 

[Ricthequick]

He's not retarded, he's just a victim of bad writing and plot holes.

One could also remove "plot"
Again to be completely fair, there's plenty of VN that are worse in this regard, and while I'm certanly not the smartest man on the planet... when I was chasing "holes" at that age I couldn't care less of their family names.

 

[KАRАMBA]

Karamba forgive me but you really let me down, you're a total fraud! You should have supported Quinn's entrepreneurial spirit, appreciated her willingness to take risks by playing outside the box of the swampy bourgeois society. Instead you come out with the judgments of a retired man more suited to hanging out with God-fearing bigots than a mob queen who just needs a virile partner to give her support and encouragement.
Quinn, if you read this, know that I am ready to assist you in any criminal endeavour.

Yes, I know, it probably looks pathetic from the outside.
But I don't really give a fuck.
I'm not judging Quinn. But she needs to stop.
Not because what she's doing is illegal -I don't give a fuck about the laws.
Not because her actions are harming anyone -I don't give a fuck about those people.
But because it's too dangerous for her.
Yes, I'm afraid for her.

 

[Ray_D]

One could also remove "plot"
Again to be completely fair, there's plenty of VN that are worse in this regard, and while I'm certanly not the smartest man on the planet... when I was chasing "holes" at that age I couldn't care less of their family names.

Let's be honest if the MC was inquisitive and asked questions this probably would have been over by season 2.

 

[Ricthequick]

Yes, I know, it probably looks pathetic from the outside.
But I don't really give a fuck.
I'm not judging Quinn. But she needs to stop.
Not because what she's doing is illegal -I don't give a fuck about the laws.
Not because her actions are harming anyone -I don't give a fuck about those people.
But because it's too dangerous for her.
Yes, I'm afraid for her.

All you need is love!


And since I opened the Quinn folder found this labeled as "impossible choice"

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[Ray_D]

Goth Maya is kind of Hot, but I would still prefer if this was only with Josy. or it would have been a separate scene for each
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Jesus, I hadn't noticed but that's a lot of oil, did they steal it from madame or what?

 

[Ray_D]

Ep 10 isn't kind on many girls' hair if you ask me

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Southern Maya is the best Maya.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Come on man don't be hard on the poor MC, he's just a victim of a classic writing problem. The protagonist and the other characters will only be as smart as their writer.
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That's true, and you know if MC was in this thread, his first comment would be "When the update?"

 

[ChipLecsap]

All you need is love!
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[Ricthequick]

Jesus, I hadn't noticed but that's a lot of oil, did they steal it from madame or what?

You know...