VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Alfagrem]

ok, she's broken, but this maybe the cause, the consequence is that she asks for sincerity but does not give it in return, repeatedly

otherwise it becomes a defense of principle. Maya can do whatever she wants because she is broken ...


they have sex, more or less, of course there is attraction.

but the relationship with Josy is a true relationship (where Josy's betrayal has no impact), the relationship with MC is precarious from start to finish (without M&J path)

since you refer to the M&J path, in case the girls refuse, there is a big difference between the attitude of the two girls

Maya doesn't really want to have doubts between the two, Josy instead confesses them, but decides to choose Maya, because in the end she always felt like her girlfriend.

MC has filled a void (not only in a physical sense), when this void no longer exists its importance for Maya (and Josy) is completely reduced

My sense with Josy, which I think she voices herself if you follow a certain route (Library+Friends & Meeting with her dad+Luggage), is that her overiding concern is not to be the 'odd one out'.

She has after all commited the time to both relationships in being the initiator at the campsite and having the long-distance relationship with Maya and spending the summer working with and finaly spending some one on one time with the MC prior to the home visit on the first weekend. Therefore I can easily see how she feels a serious relationship with either is possible and worthy.


With Maya, my feeling is that (as you say) I was filling a void.

I'm not the one she was willing to risk a schism with her family over to the point where joining Quinns restaurant is a solution for her and as mentioned previously we don't have that bond of trust/full understanding with her.

She wants Josy and I'm only a part of that relationship (if I choose that path) as she doesn't want to force an ultimatum with her and therefore defers the decision to others.

 

[felicemastronzo]

My sense with Josy, which I think she voices herself if you follow a certain route (Library+Friends & Meeting with her dad+Luggage), is that her overiding concern is not to be the 'odd one out'.

She has after all commited the time to both relationships in being the initiator at the campsite and having the long-distance relationship with Maya and spending the summer working with and finaly spending some one on one time with the MC prior to the home visit on the first weekend. Therefore I can easily see how she feels a serious relationship with either is possible and worthy.


With Maya, my feeling is that (as you say) I was filling a void.

I'm not the one she was willing to risk a schism with her family over to the point where joining Quinns restaurant is a solution for her and as mentioned previously we don't have that bond of trust/full understanding with her.

She wants Josy and I'm only a part of that relationship (if I choose that path) as she doesn't want to force an ultimatum with her and therefore defers the decision to others.

It is probable that in the strong bond that Josy feels with Maya a part is due to the responsibility of having upset her life.
without her perhaps Maya would still have a "normal" relationship with her father without tuition problems.

It is clear that it is not Josy's fault, but she could still feel the responsibility

 

[cryhwks]

She has trust issues, and while it might seem one-sided, she needs to know she can trust the MC before she can be honest with him because she's clearly been hurt before when being honest with others about herself. We know about her Dad but it's also possible she was by others, maybe people she knew at school who weren't very accepting of her if things about her and Josy came out when they were still at school.

Trust and honesty do go both ways, but some people, especially those with emotional scars, need to feel that they can fully trust someone else before they can let them in and that's what happened with Maya.

If she has trust issues that's fine, but don't be like "Never lie to me." If your not also prepared to do the same in return. But thing is for me I feel like she told the bigger secret that she was into women, I just don't understand why it's difficult to make that next step in saying you have dated or are currently dating a woman?

And for the MC, I honestly don't think it would have mattered as much as it did if didn't turn out to be a person he knew. And to be fair to Maya she was going to tell him as well before Josy showed up out of the blue.

But honestly I don't even know why I'm debating this topic, guess I'm bored? Because whatever problems there were? Have been squashed.

I think both Maya and the MC did act stupid, but their like 18/19 yo teenagers, so their supposed to not have all their shit together. And also we have to remember that this is a narrative.

 

[mpa71]

Cosmetic poll, Sage

What should Sage wear in episode 6?

I would vote #3, I love yellow on women and it's also give more diversity.

 

[AvatarStormBringer]

Surprised to see DPC seemingly paying attention to some valid constructive criticism as well. Story obviously shouldn't be bent to all the random complaints but when there is some actual valid constructive feedback pointed out by many people good to see it seemingly acknowledged.

So just wondering, feedback from patrons, or is he lurking in here?

 

[lemonfreak]

So just wondering, feedback from patrons, or is he lurking in here?

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[Holy Bacchus]

With Maya, my feeling is that (as you say) I was filling a void.

I'm not the one she was willing to risk a schism with her family over to the point where joining Quinns restaurant is a solution for her and as mentioned previously we don't have that bond of trust/full understanding with her.

She wants Josy and I'm only a part of that relationship (if I choose that path) as she doesn't want to force an ultimatum with her and therefore defers the decision to others.

I guess a lot of this does come down to personal interpretation based on personal feelings because to me, whilst the MC did certainly fill a void by being someone that Maya needed at that time, I get the feeling that this allowed her feelings to deepen in a very short space of time and that as much she wants Josy, she also wants the MC and that this is true whatever path you take.

The non-M&J path, while it might not be the best explanation/reasoning, says that she does feel something for him but she didn't feel like she could act on it because of Josy and because she's not accustomed to making her own choices but instead goes with what others want, or in this case what she thinks another person wants.

In the M&J path, I'd agree that he's part of that relationship because she doesn't want to force a difficult choice and that she's deferring this decision to the others, specifically the MC, but I don't see it as the only reason and that she's also doing it because she does like the MC and perhaps has this hopeful optimism that they can make a throuple relationship work.

 

[Zirael Q]

O nice, next one's going to be a long boi. Let's see if it's gonna be as long as MC's magic baseball bat

 

[TundraLupus]

In the M&J path, I'd agree that he's part of that relationship because she doesn't want to force a difficult choice and that she's deferring this decision to the others, specifically the MC, but I don't see it as the only reason and that she's also doing it because she does like the MC and perhaps has this hopeful optimism that they can make a throuple relationship work.

Hey, it isn't impossible, but they are young so they'll make mistakes like hell, i think the right answer would be for them to date each other individually instead of the trouble, at least in the begging.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

So just wondering, feedback from patrons, or is he lurking in here?

For as much as he allegedly doesn't like this place, this is a very active thread with a very active and passionate fanbase who often do provide constructive critiques and suggestions, possibly moreso than they get elsewhere, so perhaps they aren't avoiding this place as much as we might think.

I've seen other Discords for other games and a lot of what goes on there is just banter and meme-posting, whereas here, not just in this thread, you get better quality discussions, so I don't think it really benefits them to ignore this place.

 

[Alfagrem]

I guess a lot of this does come down to personal interpretation based on personal feelings because to me, whilst the MC did certainly fill a void by being someone that Maya needed at that time, I get the feeling that this allowed her feelings to deepen in a very short space of time and that as much she wants Josy, she also wants the MC and that this is true whatever path you take.

The non-M&J path, while it might not be the best explanation/reasoning, says that she does feel something for him but she didn't feel like she could act on it because of Josy and because she's not accustomed to making her own choices but instead goes with what others want, or in this case what she thinks another person wants.

In the M&J path, I'd agree that he's part of that relationship because she doesn't want to force a difficult choice and that she's deferring this decision to the others, specifically the MC, but I don't see it as the only reason and that she's also doing it because she does like the MC and perhaps has this hopeful optimism that they can make a throuple relationship work.

Big emphasis on the "very short space of time" as we are talking less then 2 weeks (10 days?) in game terms till Josy showed up and all the cards tumbled down.

Maybe if there was some big event during those first few days such as (out of my ass) sticking up for her in front of her dad then I could buy the acceleration but.......she was bribed/blackmailed into letting me stay at her dorm, we watched a movie, she straddled me to allow my abduction..........now she loves me?!?!

 

[always86]

I would vote #3, I love yellow on women and it's also give more diversity.

I voted for 3. Looks like 1 will win. I think 3 suits her, but I get why people like the green.

So just wondering, feedback from patrons, or is he lurking in here?

I’d imagine he does lurk here. It’s probably the most active community, with the possible exception of his Discord. For me 5 was fine, though I did find it the least replayable of any chapter so far. I Think it easily could have taken place over a few days, with almost the exact same events, but he needed chapter over before Monday due to the Cathy situation. I doubt he changed much he was planning, just making it clear it won’t be a bottle episode.

interesting to see what sex scenes we get. So far my favs have been;

Both of Josy’s. Her BJs with eye contact are the sexiest, plus plus she’s the only one to really be manhandled in a sex scene so far.

Quinn and Riona - good threesome if a little ‘porny’ cum kiss at the end is great.

Quinn - Roof top. Just a great scene with some important character stuff for her.

Isabella in the shower - great erotic scene, awesome build up between the bikini reveal and the sun tan lotion. Sauna wasn’t bad, but it was designed to blue ball the MC (and us).

Honourable mentions -
hot tub BJ. Getting cum on Heather after she started playing with her self. Gonna be tough not to cuck Tommy.

Maya at the party - breaking her in is going to be fun. Getting her to swallow perhaps after swapping cum with Josy will be phenomenal.

Jill in the shower - it’s a fun scene, but what tips it over the edge is Jill’s face when she sees MC‘s dick. I wish the game had a few more ‘fucking hell are you kidding‘ expressions when MC pulls his rod out.

In chapter 6 I would like... Another Quinn scene. Maya x Josy threesome. Bella BJ. Jill mutual HJ and possibly Oral on her. More Jade and some progress with Heather. Also a devils threesome with Elena.

 

[felicemastronzo]

But she did caveat that with a "I only say that to stop boys falling in love with me".

Looking at that with my positive hat on - she was slowly opening up to me and perhaps at some point she would of got to the truth of the matter.

Problem is that when we all decide to put our cards on the table, I still (based on these past interactions) have some reservations that she is actually being truly honest rather then by admission.

I think Josy's arrival has already changed Maya's behavior (positively).

at least let's say I hope so.

I, I repeat, cheer for her, but she must shake herself before Quinn shakes her

 

[mpa71]

New Dr.PinkCake full avatar on Discord!

861x861 this time.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

I voted for 3. Looks like 1 will win. I think 3 suits her, but I get why people like the green.

Just says to me that the voters are either non-observant of the fact she wears green all the time, or it's just the general lack of male fashion sense to recognise the importance of variety.

Both of Josy’s. Her BJs with eye contact are the sexiest, plus plus she’s the only one to really be manhandled in a sex scene so far.

I'm still so disppointed that we had to choose between Maya and Josy because it feels like such a dick move on both parts (letting Josy lug her cases to the dorm by herself or leaving Maya alone when she's needing comfort), but moreso in the case of Maya. That scene with Josy is awesome and probably in the top 3 sex scenes so far, but even though going with Maya feels more right at that time, it still suck to have to sacrifice one of the best sex scenes for it.

Maya at the party - breaking her in is going to be fun. Getting her to swallow perhaps after swapping cum with Josy will be phenomenal.

I am about 95-99% certain we'll get a M&J threesome in this next update (on their path, of course). They'll realise that faking it is no good and that they have someone they both like who they'd be comfortable with, so it's a total no-brainer to just do it with him.

In chapter 6 I would like... Another Quinn scene. Maya x Josy threesome. Bella BJ. Jill mutual HJ and possibly Oral on her.

Yes to these, although I'd go further with Bella and say full sex since she was pretty much primed to hop on his disco stick in ep 5 so it shouldn't take much to get her there again, and I would say that mutual masturbation with Jill (her giving him a HJ and him fingering her) is as much as I'd expect/hope from them.

 

[JohnDelfino]

I am about 95-99% certain we'll get a M&J threesome in this next update (on their path, of course). They'll realise that faking it is no good and that they have someone they both like who they'd be comfortable with, so it's a total no-brainer to just do it with him.

I get the feeling that the reason they are still trying to go through with this whole faking thing even when on their path is so that DPC can have them use the same method to get into the HOTs on either path.

If not then it will probably end up with the MC convincing Sage to lie for them or the HOT's troubles end up blowing up before the end of the scavenger hunt.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I am about 95-99% certain we'll get a M&J threesome in this next update (on their path, of course). They'll realise that faking it is no good and that they have someone they both like who they'd be comfortable with, so it's a total no-brainer to just do it with him.

DPC would have to be reported to the authorities if something like that didn't happen after creating this situation

 

[Holy Bacchus]

I get the feeling that the reason they are still trying to go through with this whole faking thing even when on their path is so that DPC can have them use the same method to get into the HOTs on either path.

If not then it will probably end up with the MC convincing Sage to lie for them or the HOT's troubles end up blowing up before the end of the scavenger hunt.

Or it could turn out like the Hell Week tasks and even if they fail the threesome task by faking it, they'll get accepted anyway because they've done enough or because Quinn just says, "fuck it", and lets them in because she wants them in.

 

[lemonfreak]

Or it could turn out like the Hell Week tasks and even if they fail the threesome task by faking it, they'll get accepted anyway because they've done enough or because Quinn just says, "fuck it", and lets them in because she wants them in.

Tricky that one, she probably wants Josy in as it's a way to fuck with Tommy but once Maya's in she's subject to the HOTs code, meaning Quinn can't really fuck with her any more

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Tricky that one, she probably wants Josy in as it's a way to fuck with Tommy but once Maya's in she's subject to the HOTs code, meaning Quinn can't really fuck with her any more

Quinn fucks with everyone, even other HOTs. The code basically just means don't fight, bad-mouth, or snitch on other HOTs, so Maya being in the HOTs would be beneficial for Quinn because then Maya is bound by the code to not snitch on Quinn.