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Yeah, I think Guy1100 has a point there too. I just replayed that section and Tremolo does say one too many lines that make it seem like he cares about Chad/Troy getting hurt just as much as Sage getting hurt. I don't think that was the intent behind the entire scene.Hmmmm.... I see your point. I think DPC just wanted to write up the dialogue in a way that would make it seem like the MC actually worries about Sage and her feelings, and for some people, it did have that effect, but seeing you chew out that section of dialogue like that, he could've done a much better job with the wording.
I think I ignored it unconsciously because the overall mood seemed to be about Sage not feeling hurt with a side note of exposing them being a dirty means to go about it.