VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[NebulousShooter]

What's baffling is that there are still people who think you can pay for uni with a part time job.

Now I don't know what is wrong with America, but the rest of the world you can, I did. 3rd world shit hole, but still.

American university system do be kinda poopy

MC could have in-lore two part time jobs, Bella and Pink Rose/Elder Home and I'm ignoring the bulletin jobs he does for Mansion Restoration Minigame and somehow manages to do just fine with school, while also fucking half the campus. What does Maya do all day? Sits in her room, being bisexual.


Seems to me her escape plan from Patrick is to wait for Elon to build his Tesla Rocket and go to Mars instead of looking into the reasonable solutions to her problems, like working/getting a scholarship. I doubt B&R offers scholarships only for sports(Chad).

 

[vogelbeest]

Since it is an American school, the loan would have been paid to the school and Maya's dad would not have any control of the money anyhow. I'm not sure if this oversight was intentional for the story or if it's just another case of a foreign author not properly researching how American colleges actually work. The gender studies class only lasting for half of a semester is another argument in favor of a lack of research.

The Maya loan is actually very simple, Maya believes she signed a contract that gives her father power over her. Her father is a used car salesman, she got screwed over and didn't even get a car. Is it naive? Yes, is it impossible? No...

Instead of her getting a job, breaking up with Josy, lawyers fixing her problem she is trying to get "free tuition", a choice that already got her (and Josy) into the HOT's, but without any doubt will lead her into a situation she feels her only choice is to have sex with an old man to solve her problems with her dad or seek another escape. (possibly a very bad ending)

Maya's blackmail situation, Quinn's restaurant and Burke's sex for tuition are effectively the same storyline, there's simply not gonna be any story progress if Maya's problem is solved before its time.... The restaurant girls suck happy ever after and Burke will make many girls happy with free tuitions. And we all know it's not gonna be like that...

It's a game, not a legal documentary, Maya believes this is her situation, just believe in Patrick's power of convincing...
If there's a law there's a used car salesman (or a telemarketeer) that knows the way around it...

 

[felicemastronzo]

The Maya loan is actually very simple, Maya believes she signed a contract that gives her father power over her. Her father is a used car salesman, she got screwed over and didn't even get a car. Is it naive? Yes, is it impossible? No...

Instead of her getting a job, breaking up with Josy, lawyers fixing her problem she is trying to get "free tuition", a choice that already got her (and Josy) into the HOT's, but without any doubt will lead her into a situation she feels her only choice is to have sex with an old man to solve her problems with her dad or seek another escape. (possibly a very bad ending)

Maya's blackmail situation, Quinn's restaurant and Burke's sex for tuition are effectively the same storyline, there's simply not gonna be any story progress if Maya's problem is solved before its time.... The restaurant girls suck happy ever after and Burke will make many girls happy with free tuitions. And we all know it's not gonna be like that...

It's a game, not a legal documentary, Maya believes this is her situation, just believe in Patrick's power of convincing...
If there's a law there's a used car salesman (or a telemarketeer) that knows the way around it...

 

[vogelbeest]

MC could have in-lore two part time jobs, Bella and Pink Rose/Elder Home and I'm ignoring the bulletin jobs he does for Mansion Restoration Minigame and somehow manages to do just fine with school, while also fucking half the campus. What does Maya do all day? Sits in her room, being bisexual.

Again the problem is her father, he just will not allow her to have a job, the guy has a key to her room, he's basicly a stalker.
She even tells MC she isn't allowed a job....

By now it should be pretty clear where the story is heading....
Maya needs a scholarship, Quinn runs a brothel, Burke supplies scholarships for sex....
You see any event Maya gets a scholarship without Quinn or atleast Burke being involved?

 

[felicemastronzo]

Again the problem is her father, he just will not allow her to have a job, the guy has a key to her room, he's basicly a stalker.
She even tells MC she isn't allowed a job....




By now it should be pretty clear where the story is heading....
Maya needs a scholarship, Quinn runs a brothel, Burke supplies scholarships for sex....
You see any event Maya gets a scholarship without Quinn or atleast Burke being involved?

so after much discussion restaurant and scholarship are the same thing?

the night will have brought you advice

 

[vogelbeest]

so after much discussion restaurant and scholarship are the same thing?

the night will have brought you advice

The same STORYLINE, come on Felice, sometimes i think there's too much lost in translation....
Maya has problem, Maya needs Money, Maya hears HOTs give free tuition, Maya meets Quinn,..... then all the way to where we ended after the interlude.... the talk with the Burke's....

 

[vogelbeest]

This could only happen if the MC does not warn Maya about Quinn in EP2 and the MC is not on his way to Josy/Maya. Otherwise, it comes back to NTR.

By the way, I watched the preview two again. Whose hand is the one shaking Maya's hand? Purely from logic, it would have to be Stephen. But the sleeve that matches that hand is black. My guess is a black shirt and jacket. However, Stephen always wears a white shirt during the game. It has been mentioned several times so a lawyer could come into play. We know a lawyer from the game. Trend. What impact that could have, I don't even want to think about. One thing is for sure though, it would explain everyone's reaction in Preview 2.

Being in the position Maya feels she is forced to make that choice is not NTR, only actually doing it is....
It must make sense Maya would consider it, we know there will not be any NTR but that only means she will pick option B, whatever that is.... (marry a Burgmeister but only platonic, it's just for the money or rob a bank or sell Derek to Madam or...)

Highly unlikely there will be a lawyer present at the meeting, we know Burke's solution for girls who need free tuition.
Not that it would even matter since most likely Maya signed a bogus contract and her father is paying himself, it's not even clear how he got Maya's room key, so Patrick being in contact with Burke isn't really far fetched....

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

The only thing that I miss in the game is a martial arts club/mini game(outside of the phone fighter game). And a guitar mini game.

 

[Klopdwerg]

I'm actually 29, which at leaast isn't as bad as 25.

But let me impart some wisdom on you guys...

Spoiler: Listen to Neil!

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So there are still posts which let my jaw drop to the floor.
Didn't expect to come across them anymore.

Still in the prime of your life, damn i miss those years

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

Imagine that out MC has multiple affiars and the women don't feel jealus, I hope it changes in the upcoming episodes. I want to see some cat fights. I want to see sage, bella and the other women feel pist.

My mc is a smooth oprotor that lets his dick do the thinking, and he is on YOLO mod.

 

[vogelbeest]

Many suspect Burke wants sex for tuition. But we don't know for sure. Maya probably wouldn't even think about it because she already feels like a prostitute if she fulfills the hot list.

If there was a connection between Patrick and Burke, Burke certainly wouldn't offer Maya a tuition for sex, let alone think about it.

We know for sure he's either providing old geezers with sex or he gets it himself, but there's no doubt he's involved. Now even if another person is the only one knowing about the sex, well besides the girls themselves ofcourse, it would only mean Burke is even more likely to follow that road... He arranges scholarships for needy girls, it's simply what he does...

Not likely he will even mention it to him, but somebody in school got Patrick that key to Maya's room. So who has access to these keys? And what did Patrick pay to get it? It's not like staff will be giving out free keys to dorms to middle aged men...
Aslong Patrick isn't presenting himself as a possible sponsor he will not get any information involving Burke's "free tuition" plan.

As for making assumptions on what Burke would or would not do, just don't start with that. The guy is involved with sex for scholarship deals with his students, of whom we are certain several are in the sorority where his daughter is president.
He arranges the sponsoring and the actual sex in the fraternity mansion where his son is president and on top his wife is parading around the same party where this all happens. Do you really expect a guy like that will make sensible decisions?
You really have too much hope for humanity...

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Sadly, Kylie and Christie still allude to the MC as a player even if he's skipped every girl, too. Doesn't fill me with confidence for how the game will handle Zoey or the crossroads going forward.

Seriously? That sucks I thought the game actually registerd your choices in that regard. Overestimating this game again lol but man seriously tho that sucks I hope this won't effect other parts of the game.

 

[fasdfaq123]

If Maya's goal is to save her relationship with Josy, then, why would she do something that would jeopardize their relationship?, come on, if she fucks with Burke it would generate an "elephant in the room" in their relationship (assuming that Maya's only possibilities with Burke is to fuck or not to fuck with him and, also assuming that Burke assuming the risk that she has not gone through Quinn's "kitchen"). Also who knows, if Jade will intercede for her (although it can already be predicted that Maya and Josy's relationship, may break, because of that choice in chapter 5 ).

I think all of this, in my opinion depending on their previous choices will turn out: Burke would be a "no" to getting tuition, Jade on the other hand would mean a "yes". Simply the MC can mean a help, if Jade likes him, he is not done with her in chapter 8 and Burke doesn't have the video.

 

[vogelbeest]

If Maya's goal is to save her relationship with Josy, then, why would she do something that would jeopardize their relationship?, come on, if she fucks with Burke it would generate an "elephant in the room" in their relationship (assuming that Maya's only possibilities with Burke is to fuck or not to fuck with him and, also assuming that Burke assuming the risk that she has not gone through Quinn's "kitchen"). Also who knows, if Jade will intercede for her (although it can already be predicted that Maya and Josy's relationship, may break, because of that choice in chapter 5 ).

I think all of this, in my opinion depending on their previous choices will turn out: Burke would be a "no" to getting tuition, Jade on the other hand would mean a "yes". Simply the MC can mean a help, if Jade likes him, he is not done with her in chapter 8 and Burke doesn't have the video.

No matter what choices MC made or what path he is on the result of the meeting will always be the same. There might be some different expressions for MC or slightly different texts but it's simply not doable to write 2 totally different outcomes for Maya.

Maya's goal is to get out of the blackmail situation, she hopes for a scholarship, she simply does not know what will happen.
We know what Burke does, Maya still needs to find out.... Maya been chasing free tuition from the first day we met her and so far we've seen her managing to avoid the Quinn restaurant trap, we will have to see how she manages to avoid the Burke one. But i don't have much hope she really gets a scholarship after this meeting, the solution is still far far away...

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

Asking you guys, who is the best girl in the game?

 

[DarkKiller]

Imagine that out MC has multiple affiars and the women don't feel jealus, I hope it changes in the upcoming episodes. I want to see some cat fights. I want to see sage, bella and the other women feel pist.

My mc is a smooth oprotor that lets his dick do the thinking, and he is on YOLO mod.

With Zoey entering the picture I think it's highly likely there's going to be tension.
I don't expect full on fights, but if Zoey tries to publicly flirt with MC there's going to be some mean stare contests between her and the LIs for sure.

 

[Redd23]

This could only happen if the MC does not warn Maya about Quinn in EP2 and the MC is not on his way to Josy/Maya. Otherwise, it comes back to NTR.

By the way, I watched the preview two again. Whose hand is the one shaking Maya's hand? Purely from logic, it would have to be Stephen. But the sleeve that matches that hand is black. My guess is a black shirt and jacket. However, Stephen always wears a white shirt during the game. It has been mentioned several times so a lawyer could come into play. We know a lawyer from the game. Trend. What impact that could have, I don't even want to think about. (Yes I do, but I have to think about it first.) One thing is for sure though, it would explain everyone's reaction in Preview 2.

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Could it be Tybalt? That would be explain Sage being pissed about her brother stepping in, Maya and Josy being neutral (they don't really know much about Tybalt), and MC trying to no look at him to not provoke him.

 

[JETracktor]

Could it be Tybalt? That would be explain Sage being pissed about her brother stepping in, Maya and Josy being neutral (they don't really know much about Tybalt), and MC trying to no look at him to not provoke him.

No fake tan on the hand.
Judging by reactions it must be Stephen.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Seriously? That sucks I thought the game actually registerd your choices in that regard. Overestimating this game again lol but man seriously tho that sucks I hope this won't effect other parts of the game.

The 'Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!' at the end of EP8 happens no matter how you play. The same with MC overreaction after Jill's recital, even if your MC is a 'virgin' and kept contact to a minimum with all girls.

It might have been minor in past episodes but the Crossroads episode shit the bed in that regard.

 

[vogelbeest]

Could it be Tybalt? That would be explain Sage being pissed about her brother stepping in, Maya and Josy being neutral (they don't really know much about Tybalt), and MC trying to no look at him to not provoke him.

Why would Tybalt even be there? He has his room in the prep mansion, is either busy feeling sorry for himself or trying to look interesting for the other preps. Sure it could be some random visit that happens to be the same day Sage brings some friends. But i don't see a reason why MC would be the one avoiding to look the other in the eyes if it was Tybalt shaking Maya's hand... Plus Tybalt would probably only even greet Sage and ignore everyone else if not bursting into tears about "his Jill".