VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

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felicemastronzo

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Lostanddamned said:
I think that Zoey joining the HOTs is a bit of a stretch anyway. To be honest, her making it into B&R is a stretch either. If she does, I think that she'll be Maya's roommate and will be involved in the Maya/Patrick scenario in some way.
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Zoey has to go at BR, otherwise how would she interact with MC? and also all the premises of high school graduation and attempts to get into other colleges would not be revealed

I don't think it's that important who she goes to live with, and I don't think she's going to tie herself closely to any other LIs (broken dreams for AchedCroissant :( )

after all these vicissitudes what sense does it make that Zoey is living with Maya and not Josy?

easier to end up with Envy at this point...
 
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felicemastronzo said:
Zoey has to go at BR, otherwise how would she interact with MC? and also all the premises of high school graduation and attempts to get into other colleges would not be revealed

I don't think it's that important who she goes to live with, and I don't think she's going to tie herself closely to any other LIs (broken dreams for AchedCroissant :( )

after all these vicissitudes what sense does it make that Zoey is living with Maya and not Josy?

easier to end up with Envy at this point...
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If our homie Stephen does not solve Maya's loan issue, then DPC can and probably will integrade Zoey into that storyline. With Zoey as Maya's roomie, she has proof that she's not staying with Josy and on the throuple route MC can act as her boyfriend in front of Patrick.

It's not a logical storyline, but the whole loan thing is not logical anyways, so I wouldn't be surprised if DPC pulls it off.
 
felicemastronzo

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Lostanddamned said:
If our homie Stephen does not solve Maya's loan issue, then DPC can and probably will integrade Zoey into that storyline. With Zoey as Maya's roomie, she has proof that she's not staying with Josy and on the throuple route MC can act as her boyfriend in front of Patrick.

It's not a logical storyline, but the whole loan thing is not logical anyways, so I wouldn't be surprised if DPC pulls it off.
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we've already got Sage involved, now Zoey...

"Being a Loaner"
 
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felicemastronzo said:
Zoey has to go at BR, otherwise how would she interact with MC? and also all the premises of high school graduation and attempts to get into other colleges would not be revealed

I don't think it's that important who she goes to live with, and I don't think she's going to tie herself closely to any other LIs (broken dreams for AchedCroissant :( )

after all these vicissitudes what sense does it make that Zoey is living with Maya and not Josy?

easier to end up with Envy at this point...
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Everything is going according to my plan
 
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Arigon

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Can't quote the last 5-10 pages, but retcon is not an issue.
DPC is not a great writer folks. He will write what he writes, and then he will gloss over it.
You have to suspend logic in a lot of cases to get to the actual root of the problem.
That is ok. His renders make me not care so much. I have mellowed on the page...

I still predict all you poor fuckers are going to be sobbing as this thing wraps in 2 more episodes and shit.
When he tosses it over to Steam you will see incest... Patreon will set him free!!!!
Quinn dies
Jill is his auntie
Sadly Bella will axe murder someone and go to jail.
Jade will leave Stephen and you will get to keep Sage and Jade.
Maya and Josy will be in a dorm fire, save only one.
Zoey will become a crack addicted whore who works for the Restaurant

Fanbois will cry, snowflaking their way to Sweden to gang bank DPC's sore butt for screwing the pooch on another story, but his epic fappables will make him a wealthy dude with a drooping anus...

Peace!
 
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Walter Victor

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Arigon said:
Can't quote the last 5-10 pages, but retcon is not an issue.
DPC is not a great writer folks. He will write what he writes, and then he will gloss over it.
You have to suspend logic in a lot of cases to get to the actual root of the problem.
That is ok. His renders make me not care so much. I have mellowed on the page...

I still predict all you poor fuckers are going to be sobbing as this thing wraps in 2 more episodes and shit.
When he tosses it over to Steam you will see incest... Patreon will set him free!!!!
Quinn dies
Jill is his auntie
Sadly Bella will axe murder someone and go to jail.
Jade will leave Stephen and you will get to keep Sage and Jade.
Maya and Josy will be in a dorm fire, save only one.
Zoey will become a crack addicted whore who works for the Restaurant

Fanbois will cry, snowflaking their way to Sweden to gang bank DPC's sore butt for screwing the pooch on another story, but his epic fappables will make him a wealthy dude with a drooping anus...

Peace!
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Why did I read this?

There must have been a reason...

Nope.
 
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Well if you read my comments I already said that I didn't finish it and that I was deleting it. And protect him from what her dumping him? That just sounds so caring of her :rolleyes:.


What happened with Josy isn't the same thing, with Josy he didn't think she would get into that college at all. With Zoey all she had to do was wait until the MC graduated.

And it would be selfish of the MC to ask her to stay and not chase her dream at all but the MC wasn't asking her to stay and not go at all he was just asking her to wait until he graduated which she wouldn't do.

Any relationship a person is in is about compromises, about give and take but Zoey didn't care enough about the MC to wait until the next year to go. I don't know what to tell you but to me she is selfish.
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You are simply delusional. That's how people end up wasting years because they just sacrifice for someone else who isn't gonna do the same for them. Say they wait another year. And MC would join her then? What about college? Would he get accepted to a college there? we don't know. Why is it so selfish of her to be in a weird situation when a person she adored just died and her last words were 'use this money for your dream'? She is selfish but MC couldn't just transfer schools for the last year? I don't see how either of them is selfish in that situation. It's all about how deep their feelings go. MC stated he thinks he was not in love with her. Zoey on the other hand wanted to see him again. After all, even if you were right and Zoey was such a selfish person as you describe her that you can't even play the interlude so what? People lose someone and they don't have the right to feel whatever they want? I didn't know someone needs permission for that. The place they lived didn't have waves for her to chase but I bet the place she moved to had at least one high school for MC to transfer. Transfer for the last year, get a job to cover his own expenses and then they would see. Nobody's even selfish in the given situation because none of them ever claimed they wanted a romantic relationship, so no point for such a take
 
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Arigon

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AchedCroissant said:
It's Arigon is DavDr clone


My only drugs are in my sig :oops:
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Now now
You and Walter Victor both know that I harbor these feelings but.....
I write very positively on DPC's renders and animation and of course his music catalog.
I just shit, justifiably on his writing, but I praise writers in other threads, and ding them if needed in other ways, and on some.....GASP.... I am a total fanboi!!!!
I just call it like I see it, and it is fun to get reactions when my opinions are not shared...
Admit it, I have become far less nasty than I used to be, and my dude DavDR and also Kellermann are keeping the thumb screws on!
Peace
 
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