- May 19, 2017
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While I would love to have another version of AWAM with actual action, the writing in this is terrible.
Probably NTR.future tags any idea?
I thought that was Gollum looking for his precious!You don't say Mr.Holmes.
PS: By the way, is that an illegal alien on the last screenshot or something?
You're onto something here.I thought that was Gollum looking for his precious!
Welcome! To the F95Zone!story looks like it's written by a 12-year-old serial wanker.
In other words, it's the same as other games with female protagonistI've played it, it seems similar to AWAM, but i'm hoping that there will be sex soon (it's only an intro) and that there will be also a sharing/cuckold path
Cuz, english is not my native languageHell no, the engrish is killing it big time - syntaxes are wrong, dialogues are stupid and the story looks like it's written by a 12-year-old serial wanker.
Hard pass. but good luck with your game.
Maybe he lives in service sectors."Her husband works in different city which is too expensive that's why, she lives in different city near that one with her family."
The old "two households are cheaper than one" ploy. Completely plausible.
I would suggest getting a proofreader then. The dialogue is jarring, trying to read it in it's current form. Also, need to tone down the brightness on many of the images. Last thing, what have you done to Goro Majima? Did he make a deal to sacrifice all his meat for two good eyes? Never seen the name Karel either, maybe you meant Carol?Cuz, english is not my native language
Old Landlord (rubbing his hands together): "I've been saving this nut for decades for this!"Due to the high cost of living, she lives in a different city than her husband,