VN Ren'Py Between Identities [Development thread]

[voronkov]

Читал комментарии и описание игры. Честно говоря не всё понял, но выглядит интересно.
Отдельные временные линии, немного фантастики, персонажи и разные пути. Путь домой персонажа. Я так понял финал игры примерно готов по сценарию. Может не так понял или пропустил в описании, но мне не понятно в какой атмосфере будет происходить сама игра. То есть где будет главный герой, попадёт в какое то место или это будет учёба или просто повседневность? Если это не проспойлерит игру то мне интересно.
Персонажи для игры сделаны в стиле который задумал автор. Я это к тому что в некоторый играх сделанных в HoneySelect 2 все персонажи похожи на стандартных и почти не изменённых. Тут видно что этим персонажам старались придать свой стиль и индивидуальность. Сам делаю игры и тоже создаю персонажей с максимально разнообразной внешностью.
Смотрел теги и насчёт этого пару вопросов. Слишком много разнообразных интимных тегов для игры где основная час будет это история, а не интим. Так же прочитал что при плохом выборе персонаж может вести себя как негодяй. При этом всё что может последовать после этого выбора в тегах значиться как не запланировано или неуверенно.
Надеюсь уже есть хотя бы пару кадров из студии которые можно показать для примера того как будет выглядеть игра.
Насчёт женских персонажей и их телосложение. На той картинке которая представлена на мой взгляд не очень толстое телосложение. Просто обычное. Чуть ниже пару картинок из игры которую я делаю, там есть женский персонаж фигуру которой можно назвать толстая. Видно что не супер толстая как в обычном представление, а просто отличается формами от других женских фигур.

I read the comments and description of the game. To be honest, I don’t understand everything, but it looks interesting.
Separate timelines, a little fantasy, characters and different paths. The character's path home. As I understand it, the ending of the game is approximately ready according to the script. Maybe I misunderstood or missed it in the description, but I don’t understand in what atmosphere the game itself will take place. That is, where will the main character be, will he end up in some place or will it be studying or just everyday life? If this doesn't spoil the game, then I'm interested.
The characters for the game are made in the style intended by the author. What I mean is that in some games made in HoneySelect 2, all the characters are similar to standard ones and almost unchanged. It is clear that they tried to give these characters their own style and individuality. I make games myself and also create characters with the most diverse appearances.
I looked at the tags and had a couple of questions about this. There are too many different intimate tags for a game where the main hour will be history, not intimacy. I also read that with a bad choice, a character can behave like a scoundrel. Moreover, everything that may follow after this choice is listed in the tags as not planned or uncertain.
I hope there are already at least a couple of shots from the studio that can be shown as an example of what the game will look like.
About female characters and their physique. In the picture that is presented, in my opinion, the physique is not very thick. Just ordinary. Just below are a couple of pictures from the game I’m making, there is a female character whose figure can be called fat. It can be seen that she is not super thick as in the usual presentation, but simply differs in shape from other female figures.

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[Mystic Paragon]

Читал комментарии и описание игры. Честно говоря не всё понял, но выглядит интересно.
Отдельные временные линии, немного фантастики, персонажи и разные пути. Путь домой персонажа. Я так понял финал игры примерно готов по сценарию. Может не так понял или пропустил в описании, но мне не понятно в какой атмосфере будет происходить сама игра. То есть где будет главный герой, попадёт в какое то место или это будет учёба или просто повседневность? Если это не проспойлерит игру то мне интересно.
Персонажи для игры сделаны в стиле который задумал автор. Я это к тому что в некоторый играх сделанных в HoneySelect 2 все персонажи похожи на стандартных и почти не изменённых. Тут видно что этим персонажам старались придать свой стиль и индивидуальность. Сам делаю игры и тоже создаю персонажей с максимально разнообразной внешностью.
Смотрел теги и насчёт этого пару вопросов. Слишком много разнообразных интимных тегов для игры где основная час будет это история, а не интим. Так же прочитал что при плохом выборе персонаж может вести себя как негодяй. При этом всё что может последовать после этого выбора в тегах значиться как не запланировано или неуверенно.
Надеюсь уже есть хотя бы пару кадров из студии которые можно показать для примера того как будет выглядеть игра.
Насчёт женских персонажей и их телосложение. На той картинке которая представлена на мой взгляд не очень толстое телосложение. Просто обычное. Чуть ниже пару картинок из игры которую я делаю, там есть женский персонаж фигуру которой можно назвать толстая. Видно что не супер толстая как в обычном представление, а просто отличается формами от других женских фигур.

I read the comments and description of the game. To be honest, I don’t understand everything, but it looks interesting.
Separate timelines, a little fantasy, characters and different paths. The character's path home. As I understand it, the ending of the game is approximately ready according to the script. Maybe I misunderstood or missed it in the description, but I don’t understand in what atmosphere the game itself will take place. That is, where will the main character be, will he end up in some place or will it be studying or just everyday life? If this doesn't spoil the game, then I'm interested.
The characters for the game are made in the style intended by the author. What I mean is that in some games made in HoneySelect 2, all the characters are similar to standard ones and almost unchanged. It is clear that they tried to give these characters their own style and individuality. I make games myself and also create characters with the most diverse appearances.
I looked at the tags and had a couple of questions about this. There are too many different intimate tags for a game where the main hour will be history, not intimacy. I also read that with a bad choice, a character can behave like a scoundrel. Moreover, everything that may follow after this choice is listed in the tags as not planned or uncertain.
I hope there are already at least a couple of shots from the studio that can be shown as an example of what the game will look like.
About female characters and their physique. In the picture that is presented, in my opinion, the physique is not very thick. Just ordinary. Just below are a couple of pictures from the game I’m making, there is a female character whose figure can be called fat. It can be seen that she is not super thick as in the usual presentation, but simply differs in shape from other female figures.

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One of the main themes of the game is a surly slice of life, but that doesn't mean he will end up in university all day. Unity (the city) is different from the home that the MC used to lived; there is a crime, gang activity, and corrupt government all over the place. He will eventually get involved with them somehow, for the sake of survival and finding the truth about his existence in that world. So it's quite a lot of mixed bags of themes: establish the relationship with your new family and friend (henchwoman), go to unversity and romance the girls (they have their own faction), beat the crap out of anyone that's in your way, awaring of things that are not easy, like it looks to, involving and working with the government (police) and criminal organizations to access in-dept information as mercenary. Yeah, it's something like this in the first episode of the story.

I don't understand what you're trying to say about the tags, and it might come from a misunderstood translation, so I think I will explain it in the simplest form of writing.

1. You can choose to be good, ambivalent, or evil, depending on your choices.
2. No bad choice leads to unplanned tags; mostly, it is evil behavior and actions from MC.
3. For the incest tag I don't understand what you mean at all.

I hope this helps clarify your question in some way.

This is in game pictures (before MC generation/no edit yet).

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[voronkov]

I don't understand what you're trying to say about the tags, and it might come from a misunderstood translation, so I think I will explain it in the simplest form of writing.

Вероятно не точно переведено. Я пытался сказать что исключили теги как раз те которые подходят для персонажа когда выбрал быть плохим парнем.
Картинки хорошие!


Probably not translated accurately. I was trying to say that they excluded the tags that were suitable for the character when he chose to be a bad guy.
The pictures are good!

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Вероятно не точно переведено. Я пытался сказать что исключили теги как раз те которые подходят для персонажа когда выбрал быть плохим парнем.
Картинки хорошие!


Probably not translated accurately. I was trying to say that they excluded the tags that were suitable for the character when he chose to be a bad guy.
The pictures are good!

They are no different in contents from being a good or bad guy. I mean, why can't a good guy like something as aggressive or rough sex as a bad guy, especially if they are the same person who just has a different decision?

In this game, good doesn't mean weak or submissive, but rather something noble and respectful. In the same way, being evil doesn't mean he doesn't have a heart and soul; he still can show affection in his way (he's not a robot, lol), which has nothing to do with personal preference.

But I'll make sure they'll be able to close the unwanted contents for players at the start of the game.

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Hi, minor update heres. I just made my first dev sigs and the game banner that I will use on this site for the Prologue and EP.1.

I am not yet good at design and editing, as I never learned before making this game, but I intend to make it better with every update. (The banners and the girl characters will evolve as time goes on (show character development every episode, as well as my skills.)

1st Banner of this game


My First Dev sigs/ I just want to make it, nothing much,(Show off my sweetest child, *cough *cough )


If there is anything you wish to advise me on, feel free to leave a comment anytime.
I appreciate your kindness.

 

[| Vee |]

Hi, minor update heres. I just made my first dev sigs and the game banner that I will use on this site for the Prologue and EP.1.

I am not yet good at design and editing, as I never learned before making this game, but I intend to make it better with every update. (The banners and the girl characters will evolve as time goes on (show character development every episode, as well as my skills.)

1st Banner of this game
View attachment 3617703

My First Dev sigs/ I just want to make it, nothing much,(Show off my sweetest child, *cough *cough )
View attachment 3617719

If there is anything you wish to advise me on, feel free to leave a comment anytime.
I appreciate your kindness.

I like them both.

You can also request wallpapers/banners/Signatures, etc. here GFX REQUEST THREAD. Will save you time. Remember to check how you request as there is template of how to request. You can use my template here if you want.

 

[Mystic Paragon]

What a weird thread......how to download this game? There's no download links!?

My man, I think you misunderstand something. This is a development thread where it only presents ideas and how the progress of an ongoing project is. I appreciate you having an interest in my game, but it's not ready for release(prologue) in public yet. So you might need to wait longer, about 2–3 months from now.

TL;DR: It's a dev diary; show concept and art before releasing the game; no game yet.

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Oh yeah I haven't notice this......wait! Yazzy is here too?! wow
Well I have got some questions can I ask you it's about your game.......

Yes, that is also the point of having this thread. Feel free to ask.

 

[Mystic Paragon]

My questions sir.
1st. Game is nothing when MC is not good, so my first is how is MC personality.
I hope not a simple MC, if he have decent personality then I'm in, If he's a coolass then I'm absolutely in! If he's a badass then I'm Abso-fucking-lutely in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2nd. How will be lis? Their attitudes I'm not even gonna talk their Beauty damn!! Girls looks so fucking cute *ahem* sorry these vulgar words, their attitudes towards MC.
3rd. How's the story? Fantasy, superpower, sci-fi, graphic violence (if MC's good at fighting then just ummmmmmmm...
4th. Kinks and fetishes futa/trans oh god not this one please exhibition, groping, spanking, filty kissing ,lesbian.
That's it for now, I will ask more If I remember.
Sir Mystic Paragon I still haven't gotten my answer it's fine if you're busy.

Q1: MC Personality
A: The personalities of MC are mainly cunning and manipulating, whether in the good or evil route. His characters are categorized as anti-villain, where he does bad things for the better good or destory everything in his path just to save someone he loves. He is confident and cool; people respect him in every route possible.

In the prologue, you will see him at his highest point and, at the same time, at his lowest point, where he starts to realize his life and mistakes and tries to change them. Your choice is whether you want him to be a better person or even the worst one.

TL;DR: He's very adaptive and does things that he thinks are right for the situation. He's not badass all the time , but when he does, he's fucking cool! (he's quite silly and funny)

Q2: LIs attitudes toward MC
A: I'm not going to lie; every possible LI is quite a strong individual woman where they are the leader of their group or faction, so it's quite obvious that they are not going to be so submissive to anyone. Their view of MC as a talented and capable guy who is also mysterious. They have different attitudes toward MC in the first episode; some are confused, curious, hostile, and even... in love.

I hate annoying things, so I'm not going to make LIs have an unacceptable personality or trait that I don't like.

TL;DR: All girls have a small red flag, but they are acceptable ones. Once you are in a relationship with them, they will turn a whole green flag.

Q3:How is the story?

A: not quite fantasy even on the surface, no fantasy race, no magic, no supernatural power(in public), fantasy things are more like a myth and legend in the background of the story.

The game theme is mainly sci-fi mixed with religion and cult stuff. (Not too wild and not focused on sex, I promise.) You can imagine the setting of the game as the game Cyberpunk2077, but not that advanced in technology yet.

graphic violence? Yes, but not the main focus. MC is quite good at fighting (he's intelligent, maybe).

TL;DR: Sci-fi X religion theme, mainly focused on romance girls; MC is a fast learner and very adaptive; you will see him run operations for cops and gank a lot.

Q4: Kinks
A: Yeah, there will be none of the kinks that you mentioned above except the spanking; it's still considered If someone supports that idea, (It's acceptable, but honestly, I don't like it, but there will be chokes and rough sex for sure because I like it. XD)

Sorry for my slow reply. I'm a slow writer.

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Yes, LIs will not throw themselves at MC quickly for sure, but I'm more afraid that there will be massive blue balling(slow burn) in the early game for players because I want to lay the foundation for world-building and create bonding between MC and LIs first.

In my plans, the prologue is about MC, and his background, in Ep1, which is longer than prologues 2–3, will be the introduction of his alternative timeline, world, culture, and LIs. then there will be a start having a lewd scene in Ep2, Ep3, establishing a true relationship with LIs, and so on.


This is MC. (depending on how he dresses/he's an actor)
spaming MC in 1 2 3

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Well, he is mixed Asian-European, so I guess he can look like this.

 

[mrnewbie123]

Vi

 

[Mystic Paragon]

What the hell!?
He looks like a psychopath (in a good way)
Damn! Awesome can't for the update but take your time okey?........

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You are absolutely right; he is indeed a broken man but can still be fixed by the love and care of LIs.

We can fix each other; that is the slogan of this game.

 

[Wombat of Combat]

It says that Finn had an identical twin sister. Wouldn't they have to be fraternal twins, if one is male and the other female?

 

[Mystic Paragon]

It says that Finn had an identical twin sister. Wouldn't they have to be fraternal twins, if one is male and the other female?

The identical twin brother and sister cases are very rare, but cases where those two are normal without defection are rarer.
Normally, in a case like this(the first one), some of the twins will have Turner syndrome, Swyer syndrome, etc., depending on how the embryos develop.

I saw this on the internet when I was doing research on the things I'm interested. It quite matches the case of what MC and his sister are into.

"Deletion mutations occuring in twins after the spitting of an XXY zygote. One embryo loses one of the X chromosomes and the other embryo loses the Y chromosome. The twin that lost one of it’s X chromosome will develop into an XY male and the twin that lost it’s Y chromosome will develop into an XX female."

Surely, in a real case such as this, there could be a defect in the newborn twins. But I'll say that in the game in which you play as the main character, your timeline, Finn and Fortune are perfectly healthy and living like normal person.

but I might consider changing it (identical to fraternal) due to the fact that people do not understand or are familiar with the case (like the reason why you ask me this question).

 

[Wombat of Combat]

The identical twin brother and sister cases are very rare, but cases where those two are normal without defection are rarer.
Normally, in a case like this, some of the twins will have Turner syndrome, Swyer syndrome, etc., depending on how the embryos develop.

I saw this on the internet when I was doing research on the things I'm interested. It quite matches the case of what MC and his sister are into.

"Deletion mutations occuring in twins after the spitting of an XXY zygote. One embryo loses one of the X chromosomes and the other embryo loses the Y chromosome. The twin that lost one of it’s X chromosome will develop into an XY male and the twin that lost it’s Y chromosome will develop into an XX female."

Surely, in a real case such as this, there could be a defect in the newborn twins. But I'll say that in the game in which you play as the main character, your timeline, Finn and Fortune are perfectly healthy and living like normal person.

but I might consider changing it (identical to fraternal) due to the fact that people do not understand or are familiar with the case (like the reason why you ask me this question).

Interesting. I've never heard of those syndromes. Good research. I just looked it up myself. Maybe you could incorporate some exposition of the syndromes into the story? Could add more depth, and even teach us something .

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Interesting. I've never heard of those syndromes. Good research. I just looked it up myself. Maybe you could incorporate some exposition of the syndromes into the story? Could add more depth, and even teach us something .

In the late part of the game, the final season, there will be a telling story about how different the timeline can be, for sure.

Not all alternative versions of MC like the one you will played are perfect, or something like that.

In case you misunderstand, in the game Finn and Fortune are not in those syndromes I mentioned; they are the rare cases where twins are born without anomalies.

 

[FeelGud]

Best of luck with your game!

 

[Deleted member 7530943]

Mystic Paragon hey man, I wanted to your pfp in my social media account, this one:
But I did some changing just a little bit, nothing special at all.

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But still I wanted to ask how you like it?
I know it's nothing special, but still it's look good or not?

 

[Mystic Paragon]

Mystic Paragon hey man, I wanted to your pfp in my social media account, this one: View attachment 3764304
But I did some changing just a little bit, nothing special at all.

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But still I wanted to ask how you like it?
I know it's nothing special, but still it's look good or not?

Yeah, sure. That's profile picture is quite old; I don't mind if you use or change it at all. Feel free

 

[Deleted member 7530943]

Yeah, sure. That's profile picture is quite old; I don't mind if you use or change it at all. Feel free

big THX.