Homie, I not long started playing the game game has some serious spelling or sentencing issues, like it's clear enough for the to mostly understand what's happening most of the time but it definitely feels like it's written by someone who doesn't speak English as their primary language.
It just makes it a little difficult to read sometimes because I end up reading the dialogue again and my brain takes a moment to process what the Dev was meant to say, there are also occasional spelling errors, I don't stress to much about punctuation as I'm not an expert reader and most of my reading is through discord and social media.
I mostly just need the dev or a team member to go through the game especially early game and fix some of the spelling and grammar errors and try to make things make a little more sense.
There are a rare few cases so far where an NPC is talking but it's the MC's name or another NPC's name displayed instead.
As a side note for future games, try not to use Italics for thoughts and inner monologues, it's not as easy to notice from the regular plain texts compared to Text inside bracket or maybe have the Characters name to say (MC thinking) (Alysha thinking) (Mònica thinking)
It just makes it more obvious to see that dialogue is a characters inner thoughts without straining our eyes to notice text leaning 2° degrees to the side
For an example this text in the image below is
"Okay, Please put me down, I want to ask you for something"
It doesn't make a lot of sense but I get what the Dev meant to say, it should be something like
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask you something?
Or
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask something of you"
There are a lot of instances in the game where things are worded weirdly or just make way less sense because a word is like 2 or 3 words behind where it is meant to be
