This is SO BAD it actually is fascinating (that's one of the reasons for 2 stars) and I will probably run it through to the ending (chap8p1). The fascination also is a reason for the long review, which a game like this would hardly warrant otherwise.
UPD: As you could read from the first sentence, I wrote this review while hadn't yet finished game. I was actually at around middle of chap6. Chap7 and Chap8 started to be better -- especially in sex scenes. Also Chap8 ties up most of the storylines, it's not as painful to read. So, in the long run game gets better. I kinda wish to update my rating to 3/5 due to improvement of scenes and the advancement of fetishes, but I still think the game is not fully there yet. Btw, note that others already said the game contains
prolapse scenes. I myself don't find them sexual, but also am not revolted, so this didn't influence my rating.
There is some good stuff as well:
1) The models are quite decent! I disliked some of them for some reasons (listed below), but in general the textures, faces and bodies are acceptable quality. Not top notch, but better than many you can see; sex animations, where they exist, are quite decent.
2) the story premise is a somewhat interesting. insofar as it is possible to follow the story;
3) the story is quite dark in a way that I found somewhat enjoyable.
All the good things together with fascination add up to the 2nd star.
Well... the BAD list is long, and various stuff has been written by other reviewers (with most of whom I agree).
My personal top bad things are:
* STORYTELLING
1) Incoherent and very very lots of dialogues-based story. Really. I dislike skipping unseen text, but here at some point I couldn't suffer any more and turned it on.
Consider that MC is interacting with over ~15 other characters, MOST OF WHOM TURN OUT TO BE IMPORTANT... and that he interacts with a significant subset of them EVERY GAME DAY.
2) Given that wall of text, one would hope that it would at least be good text -- dialogues that make sense; using the "show not tell" principle, for example. Instead we are having highly unrealistic, simplistic, juvenile speeches, highly unrealistic responses and behaviours... both from MC and other adult(!) and teen characters. This might be how a 12 year old imagines people talk. It isn't. Also there's a wall of text of what MC thinks. Which is mostly repeated stuff about revenge and protecting his own.
3) Multiple storylines converge and create a jumbled mess.
Technically possible to do, but not done in any good way here.
* VISUALS AND ANIMATIONS
1) Another VN with MC having horse-sized schlong. Not only it is unrealistic, boring and stupid, it would be painful, embarrassing and not in any way pleasurable for the ladies (and MC himself). Just don't. Enormous dicks are a male teen angst thing (which some don't outgrow). Nobody else cares.
2) Sex scenes would be much more enjoyable, if there were some more different frames, and looping. As it is any sex scene is like 5-6 renders (+maybe one loop) and is over in about 10 seconds. MC came, inserted dick and came in 5 frames. The actual frames and loops that are there, are quite decent though, and I did like the fact that models are moving during sex (breasts, legs, etc),also there is frame for showing MC cumming and afterwards. Also, it seems that more towards later chapters, the sex scenes improve in length.
3) Some particular models are weird. Starting with "landlady's" overly overly overly overly oversized boobs. Honestly, the poor woman has them to the navel. Not in all renders though, in some scenes, they look almost possible. Also, the black European(?) enemy-teen (Drake) is weird. I mean, I guess it is not impossible to have an European-style face for a black person (haven't seen anything like that in other games or in life), in this particular case it looks very weird.