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Its Ok, thankschanged the OP and moved to games tell me if the engine is different
Its Ok, thankschanged the OP and moved to games tell me if the engine is different
Yeah, I'll fix that by the time I release the first version of the game, which will be shortly. I will take advantage of Easter.I'm going to be honest, I clicked because there's a sexy nun in the screenshots. There isn't much to say about the game so far and the English isn't the worst I have ever read but you keep referring to the female characters with he and him pronouns when it should be she and her that you use.
The "grandmother landlady" also has the issue where she has black lines on her forehead in some scenes which is a common problem with DAZ that can easily be fixed before you start the render or fixed in post using something like Photoshop or GIMP.
Is dead.
He lived there before, remember he knows Sofia.Interesting start - but the English needs a lot of work, all the he/she him/her mistakes need fixing as it reads really badly.
It says that your "family" moved after the murder - yet the MC knows his way around?
Also... evil nuns - me like
I think they used a translator, it's a common error I've seen with machine translated works.Girls are..." She"....Guys are..."He". Kind of weird when you're reading. Understandable though to make mistakes when English isn't a first language. English speakers like myself are always big shits about people who make mistakes
could be kissing without sex yet.This just got tagged [incest], yet I don't see any sexual related tags. Is there actual incest in this yet? Else the tag should go under planned, but not on the OP. Or if there already is, the appropriate [anal/oral/vaginal/hand/foot/tits-sex/-job/-fuck] tags should be added.
I have discord.Hispanic language translated to English, with out the translator actually speaking English.
Male=he, female=she, You need a grammar technician, and they aren't free.
Also, you got a discord yet?