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FatYoda

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I like it. Quite a bit honestly. You need to get your pronouns sorted out though...and that better NOT be the last time he sees his friends. I have unfinished business with many of them....and i hope it doesn't take long to bring them back cause we've been teased by Alise, Yume, and Helena's hotness for long enough. I expect Yume will have something to do with figuring out where he is.
 
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hope most of the women from the previous world are allowed into the new one, otherwise it seems the prologue was a waste of time.
I was going to suggest that but it seems the plan is to eventually return. It would be interesting if the old world has something bad happen to it in the time the MC was gone and now has elements from the new one present in it that he has to defeat.
 
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