VN Ren'Py Beyond Tomorrow [Ch.2] [Dream Games]

[ItsNotUs]

I just started playing, but why does Sasha have QOS necklace around her neck?

 

[TheOriginalSchizo]

So now we're back to Chapter 2 Re-Rework. Will the story actually progress now, or will we have to endure another 10 reworks?

 

[Miranha157]

you forgot to mention that he has also had a meltdown here and deleted his account.

I heard he had an attack defending Ocean, is that true?

 

[Before I Forget]

ppl now complain about proper storytelling instead of (every) girl jumping the mc's bone?

i think the story is well done here - you need to build connections first
well maybe a quickie with kimi would have be nice

For me storytelling is always top priority for me. A lot of AVN fans here want everything quick and in a instant so much so that their minds are equivalent to a 30 second ad. They're like druggies trying to find their next high and if the story isn't super kinky then it's "blah, blah, blah".

However, one of my legit critiques with this story is that the Dev tries to sell it as if it's a Male protagonist game when it's really feels like it's a female protagonist game. The sister has way too many scenes for this to be a male protag story. In all honesty, I think that if the Dev is going to showcase her having her own dramas and scenarios then he should just let it be known that this is a multi-protag game or at least let you choose a MC. Heck, he may even get more fans that or maybe not.

I just started playing, but why does Sasha have QOS necklace around her neck?
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Either she's getting "Blacked" or this is just a continuation of people being cringe and jumping on trends and using verbiage they know nothing about.

 

[exile171]

The renders are good the history looks good , but this game needs another name.

Perhaps:

Nothing Beyond Teasing

 

[ItsNotUs]

Either she's getting "Blacked" or this is just a continuation of people being cringe and jumping on trends and using verbiage they know nothing about.

Lol

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Does the smart guy still have any incarnations?

 

[Monty10]

Is this game has swinging or ntr thing?

 

[Boehser Onkel]

sooooo

i think i am not wrong to assume the father is innocent but the grandfather beat the mother up back then ?

one thing bothers me - the mc is to soft in his reactions - simp alert

 

[MixQQ]

MC sister is not a LI and never will be. It's mentioned on dev discord.

She is useless character with forced lesbian trash. No idea what dev want to do here

 

[Boehser Onkel]

MC sister is not a LI and never will be. It's mentioned on dev discord.

She is useless character with forced lesbian trash. No idea what dev want to do here

telling a story maybe?

 

[Nucksal0036]

Suggest renaming [Beyond Sister]

 

[Dessolos]

MC sister is not a LI and never will be. It's mentioned on dev discord.

She is useless character with forced lesbian trash. No idea what dev want to do here

I saw it as story telling not forced lesbian content when I played it before the rework. Yeah I know one scene was a forced lesbian scene if I recall but I saw that as part of the story telling as it connected to her story. I was heavily into the sister from a story telling point of view. The sex part of it didn't matter to me. I actually was hoping for there to be 2 MC's at the time.

 

[Ragnar]

For me storytelling is always top priority for me. A lot of AVN fans here want everything quick and in a instant so much so that their minds are equivalent to a 30 second ad. They're like druggies trying to find their next high and if the story isn't super kinky then it's "blah, blah, blah".

However, one of my legit critiques with this story is that the Dev tries to sell it as if it's a Male protagonist game when it's really feels like it's a female protagonist game. The sister has way too many scenes for this to be a male protag story. In all honesty, I think that if the Dev is going to showcase her having her own dramas and scenarios then he should just let it be known that this is a multi-protag game or at least let you choose a MC. Heck, he may even get more fans that or maybe not.


Either she's getting "Blacked" or this is just a continuation of people being cringe and jumping on trends and using verbiage they know nothing about.

If you need more than 2K renders and 2 years to come up with a good plot to set sex scenes you're doing something wrong.
Look at games like Domino Beach, it's not super kinky, it tells the story of the MC and has sex scenes since its demo.
Some people may think verbal diarrhea is good story telling, but to me oververbose writers are boring most times.
You have to be a good writer to pull that up and we're not talking about Conrad McCarthy here.

 

[Krytax123]

I fully expect the MC to be out-reworked of the story.

Its about time for another chapter 1 + 2 rework anyway

2000 renders and no anmiations after such a long time and another rework is simply not good enough even when the visual quality is great

 

[Mellt]

which choices didnt matter?

Your choices or MC choices don´t matter sadly. Doesn´t matter which answer you choose or which choice you make throughout the game. it always leeds to the same ending.

 

[cooldevo]

which choices didnt matter?

Your choices or MC choices don´t matter sadly. Doesn´t matter which answer you choose or which choice you make throughout the game. it always leeds to the same ending.

As noted by Mellt none of the choices actually affect anything other than flavor text. I did a quick skim of the code so I may have missed an odd one, but so far:

• There's 25 decision variables tracked in Chapter 1 that have no impact, other than flavor text, within Chapter 1.
• There's 1 (one) decision variable from Chapter 1 that shows up in Chapter 2, and it's only flavor text (see below). Nothing else impacts Chapter 2.
• There's 38 decision variables tracked in Chapter 2 that have no impact, other than flavor text, within Chapter 2.

The only decision made in Chapter 1 that shows up in Chapter 2 is if you visited Susan at her office or not. If MC does visit her in her office he convinces her to take the day off and then when talking to Lillian he says he's going over to visit her. If MC does not visit her in her office, Lillian tells him about Susan taking the day off and the MC ends up going to visit her. Either way, MC ends up at Susan's apartment and the scenes plays out almost identically.

 

[Ray_D]

I just started playing, but why does Sasha have QOS necklace around her neck?
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Either she's getting "Blacked" or this is just a continuation of people being cringe and jumping on trends and using verbiage they know nothing about.

Lol

You must be registered to see the links

Does the smart guy still have any incarnations?

I'm surprised dream didn't take at least a minute to investigate this accessory.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I just started playing, but why does Sasha have QOS necklace around her neck?
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It looks like the developer unknowingly stepped on a black mine.

 

[Black Orchid]

It looks like the developer unknowingly stepped on a black mine.

"unknowingly" is a stretch. i mean look at the first user render that pops up. i'd wager on it being deliberate.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

"unknowingly" is a stretch. i mean look at the first user render that pops up. i'd wager on it being deliberate.

Don't sure, dude who know Dream said this