* Text for 'Enter Your Name' is hard to read. Another color would be a good idea.
* Ahh, Engrish.
* Gabrielle is usually a woman's name. Gabriel is the more accepted spelling for a male.
* Is it Gabrielle or Gabriel? Consistency is important.
* Given that so much of the dialogue is the MC's thoughts, perhaps using a font change to indicate that wwould be better than labeling the dialogue box 'Thoughts'.
* The 'Engrish' is really, really bad. Even knowing the developer is a non-native English speaker, I would think that if he or she or they want to make some money they could pay attention to such details for anything that they're making publicly.
* I assume there was a point to the test, or rather a point as to why the player has to take it? One that will be explained later?
* I hate to keep harping on this,, but the poor English makes the text difficult to interpret and also robs the characters of any sort of personality.
* I went to save the game and it loaded up the saves from another game. That shouldn't happen.
* This prologue seems pointless. Or worse, boring.
After playing through all of the content, I can honestly say I have no further desire to play this game. It's boring and lifeless, owing largely to the poor English, but also to the lack of meaningful events. It's just not a good effort.