Thanks for the feedback, I accept all criticism and appreciate the praise.
First - English is not my first language, I'll try to avoid grammar issues in the future. Just use the translator or som.
About inconsistent character speech... Long story short, I just wanted to make a first impression of a Slan as a God(he is) and show appropriate behavior, but later in the story, they were to become friends. So I guess I just sped up things.
About aunt tits - I was working on them a lot and yea... I'm still dissatisfied, agreed with you.
Aunt and Slan models are good but main characters - shitty.I know. Will work on that.
Thanks again.