I agree, the code needs some serious debugging. I needed 5 restarts and lots of save game reloads to get all opportunities finished (still can't unlock the last .06 Kira memory - the event itself triggers but occasionally ends with an exceptional error for me *shrug*).
Some Wrong Turns on the way:
- No Cyber Bank > don't cheat money before you unlock it with the clothing quests (my first run went pretty far until I noticed...)
- "Schoolgirl" opportunity done but not finished > happened when I used a 0.03.5 save in 0.04, so I went back and made sure to finish every possible opportunity in 0.03.05 before switching to 0.04.0.01
- Kira not arriving > my workaround was using 0.04.0.01 until her arrival
- "Alpha" opportunity ends in friend-route, even so my dialog option after the grace period week was hostile > happened in 0.04.0.06 - so I reloaded the newer save in 0.04.0.01 just for the last dialog alone to finish correctly
Not actually an error but something I ran into: For those who have trouble with the kissing part of "Mentor" not showing up > it starts with a Lisa conversation while giving her a hand-massage.