- Mar 10, 2020
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Hey I appreciate the criticism. For setting it to not true, I'll see if that works however I believe that is what I started with and it wasn't triggering due to never being set as false. I'll double check and fix it in the next patch.I had to manually trigger the meeting Natalie event myself when using an existing save as you only set $metnatalie to false in the intro. Would checking that $metanatalie is not true rather than is false fix this?
I like most of the content added since you've been working on this, I'm not a fan of the delays in text appearing though. I know you removed it from the strip club scenes but you decided to keep with it for texting Ana. It takes maybe a second to read each message or admire the photo and then I have to wait another two for the next one. Maybe it's for immersion as I know you have text chimes playing but for those of us that play with sound off that doesn't add anything.
Natalie's introduction also felt kind of out of character for the MC to me, he went straight in with the thoughts of how she could look better, which I'm sure he probably thinks for a lot of people but it's not quite as pronounced maybe? I feel like he was fairly quick to show her pictures of others without trying to discern how accepting of the bimbo aesthetic she would be.
Hope you don't think my criticisms are harsh, like I said I'm enjoying the content and am grateful you've taken over the project.
As far as Natalie is concerned I appreciate the feedback and got something similar in testing feedback. What I was going for is you can see the hesitation by the MC, however Natalie is driving the show due to her "unhappiness" with how people treat her due to her body. Shes the one who wants it, not the MC. Thanks for being honest. I took a different approach, maybe requires some edits.
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