Well, there are so many different reviews. I thank everyone who showed interest in my game and left feedback.
Yes, not everyone liked my story (if you really tried to read it, of course), but I think I should clarify one point.
My story is about a specific disadvantaged area where different people live, not just blacks. Everywhere there are prosperous and disadvantaged areas in which different people live... But my story is not about the state of city areas, not about stereotypes, but mostly about people.
Yes, the topic of stereotypes about the area itself is covered a little, but exclusively from the point of view of those who have just moved. During the course of the story, when the heroes find friends, it becomes clear that this is a delusion.
The heroes presented in my story are not bad people, they are smart and talented in different areas, with different characters, capabilities, motives and goals.
In “The Pride” there is only one typical street bad guy (and they are everywhere, it’s hard to deny), the rest are: a poet-musician who writes songs, a fitness trainer, an enterprising person who is already earning good money, and a very popular blogger with online support who has his own studio.
However, if you are offended by the attempt to talk about black people and you see only stereotypes in my story, I wish you to find a novel to your liking
Everyone who liked it is welcome!
Thank you very much for the feedback, I read everything and it inspires me, it launches my idea generator to the fullest.
There is still a lot ahead, I do not intend to stop.
