VN - RPGM - Completed - Black&White Photoshoot [Inceton]

short and to the point, and really hot, its NTR game obviously, and i am not sure how hot the game is, since its been a while for me that i played games at all.
but the wife going against the husband's wishes was extremely hot to watch.
i thought the thread would lead to more games by inceton but it seems it doesn't.

Okay, so this is a blatant ripoff off of Stormbringer's story The Wife and the Black Gardeners 2 (available as a comix illustrated by Kaos). That in itself is... GOOD - since we need way more Stormbringer content illustrated!

However, it desperately needs a re-implementation.

First, it's RPGM (though since it's a completely linear story most of RPGMs horrible stuff makes no difference here). Inceton has (wisely) moved to renpy later.

2nd: the male model and his butt ugly blindingly white underwear that looks completely unrealistic. Just replace the model entirely. A (freakishly) hung one wouldn't hurt.

3rd: tweaking the story - because Inceton kind of missed what made Storm's story so great. Sure they do get SOME of the interaction between husband and wife, but they let the wife become an uninhibited cock-crazed slut too much and too soon.

To give a higher rating than average (despite the GREAT source material) I would need to see:

* more renders with the wife, especially the act of undressing. Just "clothed", "in bikini", and "nude" isn't enough. Removing a garment is a very sexy pose! Have snapshots of when he's "accidentally" undoing her top, and her initial attempts to cover up (don't just go from clothed to freely nude in one step!) Have him spill out of his briefs, and simply conclude since his cock is out already he can simply drop them.
* when you shamelessly crib from someone else ( Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so it's not that I mind) why miss the opportunity to EXPAND the scenes (in the spirit of the original story of course). I like how the black worker walks in on them while she's nude, but there's precious little ENF reaction shots. Make it a bigger deal that she tells her husband to get rid of the worker. Make the worker and husband talk, him telling her to relax. Make his lecherous stare burn her! Add more dialogue where she begs her husband it's enough to better contrast to her reluctance to stop later on...
* and of course, play up the impregnation risk angle! After her husband cautions her it was inside her and she has a moment of lucidity, have her insist on him wearing a condom. He initially refuses but eventually agrees, but the husband can only offer too small ones. After the worker cums inside her the condom bursts, and the next time he simply refuses. He's still hard and still suggests more pictures, and while she makes him promise to pull out, he still cums inside her just shrugging when she complains.

Finally, I believe this was one of Inceton's earliest "games". I do wish they didn't make a hard swerve away from BBC cuckold content into mom-son incest tripe. This is their only interesting storyline AFAIK

Reading the previous comments is very informative.
Because I love bbc, extreme-sizes, impossible-fit, cuck, animation, 3DCG; I'm adding my positive + and negative - views on it....
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+ Some pix of bbc has veins.
+ Nice frontal, side, top, under, views of bbc.
+ Choice to 'replay' or 'continue' animation.
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- Most pix of bbc has no veins = looks more like banana-shaped carved wood.
- Bbc is not as big as everyone's comment before me seem to portray. = Girth is still thinner than a baby's head, and the dude didn't shove it all the way in.
- Comic (rather than 'Game') plays longer than 10mins = 30mins+
- Only 2 animations.
- Comic is a mix of 8-bit pixel images and 3DCG daz models, often overlaping the two - 3DCG on 8-bit background.
- It's worth only 1 playthru = Screenshot the images you love best as you go. -(button options listed below).
- There's no real worth for the display of 8-bit pixel images when the 3DCG images start appearing - story flix between the 2 types instead of leaving the player keeping view on 3DCG images. - And when it flix to 8-bit images, you have to wait 3 secs before story goes back to 3DCG image.. thus impossible to 'tap, tap, tap' really quickly to play story as fast as you want.
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Other notes to add:
+ Because it's a short story, and I had issues getting the app running, and it's said that it's not worth downloading anyway; I found an instant online version that you can play.
Here's the button options....
- Arrows = Walk. - (There is no opportunity to do this)
+ Enter / Space / Left mouse click = Speed text.
- Esc / X = Back / Cancel. - I never had nor needed to use this.
+ L-Ctrl = Hide text.
- Shift = Sprint. - Not what I thought it be - it just displays last text.
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/699586

Would have been 4 stars if it weren't for RPGM. Can't go back, can't save, can't skip. The VN itself is pretty good though. The story isn't very interesting, but that's not necessary. It's porn with a story, so it's a porn story.