VN Ren'Py Abandoned Blacked or Bleached [v0.3] [Pallidus Nox]

[JoleenStar]

played it. hopefully this gets updated way more often than the original.

 

[eroticstag]

Ah I remember the html game. I am looking forward for future updates. I have a suggestion. It would be cool, If there is a choice to change the dick size of the MC, and it should affect the story.

 

[menatv]

Really like what you have done with it so far. I liked the original Black&Whited and think you have taken that game to another level. It is really well put together with images/video and story.

Thank you for taking on this project. Will definitely keep looking for updates! Great job!

 

[itshowyoumetme]

Good luck with the game and here's hoping there will be more content for bleached content this time around compared to B&W.

The one thing I would really ask though is try and keep the grind to a minimum. I'm pretty sure I was holding down ctrl for at least half of the game, only stopping for when new scenes were popping up. I get that you want gradual corruption and days going by, but just going over the same text and short videos over and over again just isn't very interesting content.

 

[R-No]

Godspeed developer!

 

[Henry73au]

played the game
got dom to about 40
but no real sex scenes, just masturbation to porn
Is that it?

 

[fredinator]

I think renpy is a good choice for this and this a good start. I'm looking forward to more content

 

[To fap or not to fap]

I am going to go and say it.
Where tha black girl`s at.
Now to be serious, cant wait to see that content, but so far so good. GJ developer.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

It is kind of ok so far but it is more of a voyeur game so far and jerking off to porn. Plus where the black women at. lol

 

[zARRR]

Will be there again the asian massage centre?
I always got upset that in BW wasn't developed enough

 

[sobr24]

Заебли с неграми, в топку всех!

 

[Trasher2018]

So much boring grind.... and stupid.

Why do you have to go to that drug dealer for no reason? You dont buy shit and he is a dickhead. So what is the reason to go there? Except for pure gameplay/grind reasons - there is no motivation for the MC to do so.

Then the GF - add different texts and scenes or pump up the value ... its just for the grind that we only get +5. There are no scenes for 10/15 ... corruption, so you just could raise the value and nothing would change on that side.

And all the empty locations. Try to hide all of them until you have something to do there. Best would be to always hide them and to just show locations with something to do (but that would show how little there (currently) is) - or until the first time you have to go there (e.g. the backyard).

Then the UI - there are 4 different font on screen all the time ... WHY?



And maybe try to reduce the UI a lot. Its not a HTML game anymore ... so dont just copy that look.

Something like this ... just thrown together during the break.

 

[Jstforme]

One major factor "stories" like this seem to gloss over are the black women. All white women need to submit to their black masters, blah blah blah...before you know it, every white girl is waiting in line to be degraded and owned by BBC (and of course, every black guy comes with a 12 inch cock ).
Black women would have a HUGE problem with that new narrative...it would be cool if a Dev would be bold enough to include a plot point like that....like maybe that's what gives black guys their confidence and big dicks (because of black women). Now that black women have been virtually abandoned by their own race, they all swoop in taking the white guys for mates instead. Before you know it, all black men and white women are living on welfare, miserable with kids that do what kids do in ghettos...and white men with their black beauties are rich and prospering like never before.

 

[Pallidus Nox]

played the game
got dom to about 40
but no real sex scenes, just masturbation to porn
Is that it?

For the demo, Yes. But more Dom content will be added next update.

 

[Pallidus Nox]

I am going to go and say it.
Where tha black girl`s at.
Now to be serious, cant wait to see that content, but so far so good. GJ developer.

Next update will have more bleached content to balence out the blacked content.

 

[DarkDaemonX]

Why can you only enter other bedrooms once, wouldn't it make sense to snoop around in her room again, as long as she isn't in it, as often as you can, and maybe take a pair of panties from her in one off those snooping "sessions"?

And why limit it to just Alexa's room, why not Kyler's, and Julia's?

And then you can also add a wardrobe to the PC's room, to make wearing the panties and other clothes possible, each piece of clothing would add a stat boost, some might even come with a trade-off with stats getting boosted at the cost of other stats getting lowered, then you can make scene variations based on how high or low those stats are, sometimes even unlocking unique scenes, of course that would mean those stats can be boosted somewhat in other ways too at some point, just getting a taste of it with clothes at first.

 

[m4pII]

I admit that I liked the original game more, especially the personality of MC.
He was insecure and weak, he was beaten and bullied, but at the same time there was a huge motivation to change him and avenge his insults)
Here, already in the prologue, you can become a pumped-up alpha male and beat the main bully.
A bit boring..

 

[Pallidus Nox]

Why can you only enter other bedrooms once, wouldn't it make sense to snoop around in her room again, as long as she isn't in it, as often as you can, and maybe take a pair of panties from her in one off those snooping "sessions"?

And why limit it to just Alexa's room, why not Kyler's, and Julia's?

And then you can also add a wardrobe to the PC's room, to make wearing the panties and other clothes possible, each piece of clothing would add a stat boost, some might even come with a trade-off with stats getting boosted at the cost of other stats getting lowered, then you can make scene variations based on how high or low those stats are, sometimes even unlocking unique scenes, of course that would mean those stats can be boosted somewhat in other ways too at some point, just getting a taste of it with clothes at first.

This was just the demo, I have more spying/snooping around their rooms planned for future updates.

I want to add a wardrobe just like the one in the original game, that does what you just explained.

 

[DarkDaemonX]

This was just the demo, I have more spying/snooping around their rooms planned for future updates.

I want to add a wardrobe just like the one in the original game, that does what you just explained.

I'm definitely staying around for future updates then, I hope that will remove some of the railroading as well.

 

[Centrophy]

So much boring grind.... and stupid.

Why do you have to go to that drug dealer for no reason? You dont buy shit and he is a dickhead. So what is the reason to go there? Except for pure gameplay/grind reasons - there is no motivation for the MC to do so.

Then the GF - add different texts and scenes or pump up the value ... its just for the grind that we only get +5. There are no scenes for 10/15 ... corruption, so you just could raise the value and nothing would change on that side.

And all the empty locations. Try to hide all of them until you have something to do there. Best would be to always hide them and to just show locations with something to do (but that would show how little there (currently) is) - or until the first time you have to go there (e.g. the backyard).

Then the UI - there are 4 different font on screen all the time ... WHY?
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And maybe try to reduce the UI a lot. Its not a HTML game anymore ... so dont just copy that look.

Something like this ... just thrown together during the break.

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I did find seeing the dealer day after day pretty weird. I mean, he's not selling anything most of the time and the PC isn't buying.