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I did it based on a story I read. I'm sorry, but there were no choices, and what choices do you want to see in a story like this?
I did this for two reasons. The first is to see how it works, creating a visual novel. I downloaded Daz3d, and to avoid making renders with no purpose I made them as a story. The second reason is that there are very few stories here that I like and I wanted to do it the way I like it. A story about an innocent girl, interracial sex, and male domination. Yeah, you can tell there's a lot of things like that, interracial stories about cuckold men and their slutty girlfriends. But all these games look too grotesque to me and the women in them are mostly sluts from the start.
I've stopped liking games with a lot of choices lately. You have to skip a lot of content just to see a scene with the character you like, what's the point of that? Here you see what the story is about and if you don't like it you just skip it.
Just sayin', you came to a game thread that is clearly tagged "kinetic novel", and then spam the thread with comments complaining about it being a kinetic novel. Don't want "NPC MCs", filter out the kinetic novel tag, and you won't see games without choices(unless they're not properly tagged, it happens).
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Wow!!!, what an excellent start. Love that pregnancy will be included. Hoping that drug use and prostitution will be as well. How about Mike's father or brother getting a piece of Tiff too?
Jerome finds a job in a club for Tiff and they use and abuse her. This is GGGB on steroids. So looking forward to the next version.
Game looks nice and great set up.
But without a male protagonist fiew, you miss out on putting yourself in someone else's shoes.
But without a male protagonist fiew, you miss out on putting yourself in someone else's shoes.
I'm a bit confused... she was finger-fucked, but her hymen wasn't broken? I suppose you could assume it was already broken, but that feels like a missed opportunity for more drama. This story would benefit from a stronger focus on the girl's feelings. The logical, detached narration isn't too out of place, and it actually makes lines like "This feels so different from dancing with Mike" really stand out. But personally, I'd rather see her blushing and quivering at the sight of Black guys instead of reacting so indifferently.
On the visual side, this is truly exceptional. I wonder if the creator has experience in filmmaking.
(Sorry for posting this from my dev account. If the game's creator is found, I'll be first in line to support them. I'm desperate for more.)
On the visual side, this is truly exceptional. I wonder if the creator has experience in filmmaking.
(Sorry for posting this from my dev account. If the game's creator is found, I'll be first in line to support them. I'm desperate for more.)
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Fingering won't necessarily break a hymen, but you can't tell what level of fingering was done here anyway (i.e., if there was any/much actual insertion).
Is this the dev? Sounds like it:
For everyone who didn't know already, this is visual novel version of a fantastic erotic story called "Taking Tiffany" posted on Literotica like 8 years ago by tbear64. It is one of my favorites and tbh the VN does not do it justice enough. It makes me happy people are creating VN of fantastic stories though.
For reference, here is the link to the story:
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It’s NOPE. Using emojis doesn’t add to your point by the way. Not going to explain Netorare to you as you clearly do not have the capacity to understand.NOP.... your entire statement has toilet paper logic content (LOL..motherfuker whas- The MC is the female that's why she is going to cheat. )
- Jul 7, 2017
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It's one thing to be inspired by the story and it's another thing stealing someone's story and making it into game and charging for it. Just like those Devs that take pictures of pornstars and putting them into their games without permission and charging. It's illegal.
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I didn't specify this to avoid spoilers, yes you can accuse me of stealing the story, but that wouldn't be 100% following this story. And it's hard to take that story and completely transpose it as a visual novel. There's very little dialog, so a lot of things have to be made up.
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Racists.... you mean those people that always have black cocks bigger than white cocks in their games? Those racists? I could care less what race the woman is, I personally would love to see more black women in games with white, black, hispanic men doesn't matter to me but when you call white men racist because games have a clear bias towards black men and people are getting tired of it that makes you an idiot.
Some of the complaints I don't agree with, but I ALWAYS agree with people being allowed to make their comments just like you did. Did you post anything useful? No, your entire post was about attacking people for not liking the racism in this game. Well done.
Are you planning to go further and use the remaining parts of the story? It's certainly graphic enough.
The story reads like an answer to the anti-BBC crowd. Sperm described as little Massai warriors..
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I didn't start this to quit after the first episode. But of course it won't be as interesting for those who read the original story. Although the original story is not well intended for a visual novel. A lot will need to be added and some events changed, but the overall plot will be the same. But it's probably right to ask permission from the author of this story. I don't know if he'll even answer or not. I don't see how it would hurt him if I did something based on his story.
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i read the story, and i really hope you don't follow the story as a complete "script". it gets real dark pretty soon. even so, good work, and good luck on the rest of all 3 "chapters"
whatever you do, it will be your own choice.
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