VN Ren'Py Blacked Tiffany Ep.1 [EP 1] [R1k0]

[cyberSpacePirat]

@R1k0
It's a nice game, I hope that you'll finish it.
Are you going to follow the original story, or are you planning to add something (some school action or something like that)?

 

[R1k0]

@R1k0
It's a nice game, I hope that you'll finish it.
Are you going to follow the original story, or are you planning to add something (some school action or something like that)?

Episode 2 will follow the original story, I don't see how anything can be changed there because then it will be a completely different story. It's too early to talk about it now, but in the next episodes it will be possible to do scenes that were not in the original, including the college scene.

 

[Ciaran8023]

Just scrolled past this and I have to say, I've heard of Breakfast at Tiffany's but this escalated REAL fucking fast.

 

[R1k0]

Just scrolled past this and I have to say, I've heard of Breakfast at Tiffany's but this escalated REAL fucking fast.

Not quite sure what you mean, but "real escalated" will only be in the next update. This visual novel is an experiment for me where I can fulfill my fetishes.

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[cyberSpacePirat]

Isn't it spanking with a Mexican guy?
It doesn't matter as long as the update is coming soon.

Any similar stories like Taking Tiffany that you liked?

 

[TonyMurray]

I think it should be obvious who it is. This scene will not be exactly like the original. There's too much in the original for one scene.

I don't read much, tried to find something similar to TT but couldn't find anything as good.

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My only concern for the game is that the story (TT) moves way too fast after the club. Elements of it would be fine, but using too much could ruin the corruption vibe and move too far into assault territory - it's already gone past slow corruption with what we get in the club, I would say. It will be interesting to see how you handle this, as for me, the next update could make or break the game. I look forward to finding out which it is.

(Obviously I'm just talking with regard to my own preferences, if it does follow the speed/vibe of the story, that's fine, it just might not be one that I continue with beyond the next update.)

 

[Dealbreaker]

There are important elements of corruption already implemented in the TT-story - she states several times explicitely that she likes and accepts it, he asks her, she comes back out of her own volition, her physical reactions etc. So the original story is a mix of assault and corruption. But I agree in so far that I wouldn't be against a SLIGHT shift of the emphasis towards the latter, I think the game could profit from that. It's just a matter of wording, dialogue, her reactions. Maybe also how she communicates with her fiance, which could make obvious that she is not interested in getting out of the situation at all and that her view of the fiance changes. Nevertheless, in contrast to the overwhelming majority of "BBC games", it remains important for the original character of the story, that it doesn't just go like "there's a BBC and I can't think about anything else anymore" (which is also no corruption process but instantly), but that her corruption is a reaction to the assault, not a "choice" or preference-based decision like that of a groupie or a nymphomaniac, but remains a submission. Otherwise it wouldn't be this kind of story anymore. Just my opinion.

 

[R1k0]

My only concern for the game is that the story (TT) moves way too fast after the club. Elements of it would be fine, but using too much could ruin the corruption vibe and move too far into assault territory - it's already gone past slow corruption with what we get in the club, I would say. It will be interesting to see how you handle this, as for me, the next update could make or break the game. I look forward to finding out which it is.

(Obviously I'm just talking with regard to my own preferences, if it does follow the speed/vibe of the story, that's fine, it just might not be one that I continue with beyond the next update.)

No, it's not gonna be the usual game about corrupting the female MC. I don't have the talent or writing skill to write a completely different story just with the same characters. It isn't my intention to make a long story, and I think the pacing of the narrative is just right. I think that's what happens in real life too, when something happens that turns everything upside down and life will never be the same again. If you have read Taking Tiffany then my visual novel will not even be interesting to you, the plot will be the same. Further in 3,4,5 episodes I can give free rein to my imagination and add anything, but this is in the distant future.

 

[TonyMurray]

No, it's not gonna be the usual game about corrupting the female MC. I don't have the talent or writing skill to write a completely different story just with the same characters. It isn't my intention to make a long story, and I think the pacing of the narrative is just right. I think that's what happens in real life too, when something happens that turns everything upside down and life will never be the same again. If you have read Taking Tiffany then my visual novel will not even be interesting to you, the plot will be the same. Further in 3,4,5 episodes I can give free rein to my imagination and add anything, but this is in the distant future.

Ah okay, good to know - I wasn't sure how much deviation there would be (obviously there would be some, as you've mentioned in previous posts). I'll still see how it goes, because it can be very different visually to how it is in just a written story, and the overall vibe might suit me better. If nothing else, the aftermath of the club will hopefully be really hot!

 

[Alliterati0na]

No, it's not gonna be the usual game about corrupting the female MC. I don't have the talent or writing skill to write a completely different story just with the same characters. It isn't my intention to make a long story, and I think the pacing of the narrative is just right. I think that's what happens in real life too, when something happens that turns everything upside down and life will never be the same again. If you have read Taking Tiffany then my visual novel will not even be interesting to you, the plot will be the same. Further in 3,4,5 episodes I can give free rein to my imagination and add anything, but this is in the distant future.

Hey so how is the next Ep. coming along?

 

[R1k0]

Hey so how is the next Ep. coming along?

I think it will come out next month.