Zar

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Thank you for your feedback Darknesssilent. The story is simple: you play a weak young man, and if you want to follow the Whited path, you will have to teach him how to be an alpha. The game is in its infancy, so there is still little content, which has given you the impression that you can't do anything at the moment. As the story progresses, you will be able to mentally arm yourself before rebelling and, if you wish, take ur revenge...
Personally I think it would work better if you gave the MC a chance to try and stand up for himself, instead of having him give up every time... this doesn't mean the MC should win early in the game, but if you made a choice of skipping out on going to the rival in the morning, only for the rival to show up after school and take the money by force instead, the player would feel like they where resisting.

As it stands, the early game totally invalidates the players choices on the whited route through the main chars actions.
 
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Daishi

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Personally I think it would work better if you gave the MC a chance to try and stand up for himself, instead of having him give up every time... this doesn't mean the MC should win early in the game, but if you made a choice of skipping out on going to the rival in the morning, only for the rival to show up after school and take the money by force instead, the player would feel like they where resisting.

As it stands, the early game totally invalidates the players choices on the whited route through the main chars actions.
Yeah, be better to just have RNG be active... sometimes the wimp does win.
 
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bas

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Big Eiffel Tower just wanted to let you know that I've removed the "gay" tag, as we only tag on what's currently in-game. You're welcome to put a note in the OP with "planned future content" and include this if you like? Thanks :)
 
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Gandalf78

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Maybe you should have said something that We need to download the Online File or better said We need to be a Patreon!!!
 
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texasterry

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I just played the game and liked the concept behind it. But I have some constructive criticism to offer to the developer about the point system. In life, the hardest thing is to accomplish is usually something that you've never done before and don't know how to do. And usually there is some level of justified euphoria associated with it after you first succeed.

I played the 'Whited' path so my suggestion is for it. I don't know if the same logic applies to the 'Blacked' path, but it probably does...

First, for example, not all accomplishments are created equal. So the player feeling up his girlfriend SHOULD NOT offer the same number of 'points' as that of suggesting to your friend to 'change' the type of porn you are watching.

Second, just as the player has to watch increasingly 'dirtier' types of porn to 'release,' so too should the points be treated similarly. A big points windfall for the first time the player does something new, less points the next time, still fewer the next and so on (as there is much less 'risk') until you've done it enough times that you only get a single point each time thereafter (since it has now become 'routine.') Just like you did with the porn watching mechanic. This should help reduce the 'grinding' required to progress that annoys a lot of gamers (myself included.)

So, in short, 'riskier' and 'new' or 'newer' activities offer more points than 'familiar' or 'old habit' activities.

Anyway, good luck with the game.
 
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MrBee

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can anyone comment on playing the patreon build? Is there any decent content added from the public build making it worth it? anyone know if Dev is willing to go the non consensual route with some options (in MCs favor)?
 
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Big Eiffel Tower

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I just played the game and liked the concept behind it. But I have some constructive criticism to offer to the developer about the point system. In life, the hardest thing is to accomplish is usually something that you've never done before and don't know how to do. And usually there is some level of justified euphoria associated with it after you first succeed.

I played the 'Whited' path so my suggestion is for it. I don't know if the same logic applies to the 'Blacked' path, but it probably does...

First, for example, not all accomplishments are created equal. So the player feeling up his girlfriend SHOULD NOT offer the same number of 'points' as that of suggesting to your friend to 'change' the type of porn you are watching.

Second, just as the player has to watch increasingly 'dirtier' types of porn to 'release,' so too should the points be treated similarly. A big points windfall for the first time the player does something new, less points the next time, still fewer the next and so on (as there is much less 'risk') until you've done it enough times that you only get a single point each time thereafter (since it has now become 'routine.') Just like you did with the porn watching mechanic. This should help reduce the 'grinding' required to progress that annoys a lot of gamers (myself included.)

So, in short, 'riskier' and 'new' or 'newer' activities offer more points than 'familiar' or 'old habit' activities.

Anyway, good luck with the game.
Thank you for taking the time to share your impressions and ideas. You put the right words on something I've been feeling for some time. I will work on this aspect of the game that is clearly missing!
 

Big Eiffel Tower

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can anyone comment on playing the patreon build? Is there any decent content added from the public build making it worth it? anyone know if Dev is willing to go the non consensual route with some options (in MCs favor)?
The Patreon build is wet. :sneaky:
 

DrPoods

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As of the 4.2 Public Release, how many scenes of the dreams about the girlfriend are there?

Went as far as the "hand down the pants" at which point you wake up. Does it go further?
 

Big Eiffel Tower

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As of the 4.2 Public Release, how many scenes of the dreams about the girlfriend are there?

Went as far as the "hand down the pants" at which point you wake up. Does it go further?
You have reached the end of the dream :)
 
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texasterry

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Thank you for taking the time to share your impressions and ideas. You put the right words on something I've been feeling for some time. I will work on this aspect of the game that is clearly missing!
You're welcome. I've always found that a fresh pair of eyes can sometimes be helpful to point out some things that we may have overlooked/been too close to see given our time spent on a particular project. I didn't know if my comments would be useful or annoying given how far along you were.

But I'm still guessing that the pittance of time required for me to compose my impressions of your game pales in comparison to what it took to write/code/find images... etc. ;)
 

Fearnought

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Is there any actual TF yet?
From what I have seen the game is still very light on content(it's good thought), and you don't have ability to actually shift personality of main hero in any derection yet, so no TF content present as of right now.
 

dspeed

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This is one of these games that has a high chance of failing but for the wrong reasons. The game seems popular, it seems to be scratching an itch and it seems to have a developer who is talking to his audience. However, it seems to be in that zone where everybody is still waiting on a few releases to come out on here to judge it before supporting, but no releases will end up coming because of a lack of support.

I hope not. The game seems to have potential.
 

Big Eiffel Tower

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This is one of these games that has a high chance of failing but for the wrong reasons. The game seems popular, it seems to be scratching an itch and it seems to have a developer who is talking to his audience. However, it seems to be in that zone where everybody is still waiting on a few releases to come out on here to judge it before supporting, but no releases will end up coming because of a lack of support.

I hope not. The game seems to have potential.
You posted this the day a release came out ;)

Seriously, I don't know what the future of Blacked & Whited is, but after 4 months of development neither my enthusiasm nor my passion has diminished, quite the contrary. For the moment it's a great adventure, with awesome encounters, and I will not stop :p
 
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