Digteren
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SEXATRON ULTRA
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It's an ok start. I think certain scenes could be moved around to create build up and improve the flow. I'll need to see more to really tell.
Not bad not bad!
Typical game with same element but I still like this type of cliche game.....lol
Typical game with same element but I still like this type of cliche game.....lol
Noble_Undergrounder_of_Ea
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All of the characters have the exact same birthmarks. Same placement, same size. That is weird, and lazy from an art direction perspective. I guess that set of birthmarks is really hot to the artist?
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Juerhullycin
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Aside from the numerous typos and syntax errors:
You might want to use variable names for characters, and then call those variable names in dialog so there are no misspellings. It would also allow you to skip the coloring on the character names if you so chose. Biggest example: The mom's name is Emilia. The other characters seem to call her Emily a lot, and then also there is this interaction:
The mixed case ultimately shows this isn't calling a variable at all, not even an incorrect or secondary variable for Emily vs. Emilia. It's one of those code things that is annoying once, but will save you a bunch of time as your game progresses in the future.
Not game breaking or a deal breaker for trying to get through the game as it is today, but something to consider before you get too deep into your code base and the changeover would be a huge pain.
*Edit: Some mis-named interactions shortly thereafter: This conversation is happening between Sofia and the MC after Olivia leaves the room:
And this one should be the MC:
You might want to use variable names for characters, and then call those variable names in dialog so there are no misspellings. It would also allow you to skip the coloring on the character names if you so chose. Biggest example: The mom's name is Emilia. The other characters seem to call her Emily a lot, and then also there is this interaction:
The mixed case ultimately shows this isn't calling a variable at all, not even an incorrect or secondary variable for Emily vs. Emilia. It's one of those code things that is annoying once, but will save you a bunch of time as your game progresses in the future.
Not game breaking or a deal breaker for trying to get through the game as it is today, but something to consider before you get too deep into your code base and the changeover would be a huge pain.
*Edit: Some mis-named interactions shortly thereafter: This conversation is happening between Sofia and the MC after Olivia leaves the room:
And this one should be the MC:
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andrewong1980
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Desperately needs an incest patch so that we can at least look forward to the lewd content when it finally lands fifteen updates later...
Thedude715
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Kinetic novel tag missing, as usual no hate to people that like them but nooooooo thank you.
