Ren'Py - Abandoned - Blurred Lines [v0.3f] [Studio009]

A game with great potential! Really nice art. I loved mostly everything about it and the comics elements were really on the spot. The story is set up the way I like it to be and I really cannot wait for the continuation of the game.

Art is overall excellent but the quality noticeably drops for a handful of the drawings. Could use a re-work.

Dialogue feels natural and isn't annoying but needs some proofreading maybe re-writing in a few places. Casual banter between chars who are CIA agents crossing over into frat boy territory, horny teen girl saying way too many lines about how horny she is for the PC, etc.

I could take or leave the font. It's unique and stylish but occasionally hard to read.

Other than that this game is everything I expect from a porno gaem. Also the PC getting to fuck his insanely hot blond wife right off the bat is a very welcome departure from the usual parade of incel-ish contrivances for blue-balling/teasing I've come to expect in porno gaem stories. That alone takes this from a 4 (cus of the minor issues mentioned above) to a solid 5.

Wish the dev all the very best and looking forward to a lot more!