This new little netorase/voyeur gem has already caught my eye and earned my support.
So far, the writing is great, and there are only minor grammatical errors. The MC and FMC’s relationship feels well thought out at the moment, and there's little nuggets of detail about the FMC’s personality that leave a comfortable potential for some Femdom content in the future, though, depending on what you consider Femdom, there are already some tones of it in the current content.
The friend of the MC and FMC is already shaping up to potentially being a big part of future netorase or netorare content, and personally, I feel like he's a trustworthy friend of the two so far, and I can't wait to see how his character develops as more content releases.
I suggest giving this fairly soft early version a try to see if the voyeurism and netorase fantasies catch your attention and make you want to see more.