Very well written, and I'm a sucker for stats and whatnot so this has definitely caught my eye. Super ambitious, hopefully using the AI images will help alleviate some of the burden as fleshing this all out fully will be quite some undertaking. Really enjoyed what's there so far.
It was well built too, I appreciate the options to customise things like how the space is used in addition to the usual font size and whatnot.
Might be nice if we could rename characters. I appreciate the fantasy names and all that, but it's much easier for me to keep track of who is who when I can name them in a way I'd naturally associate them.
I'm not so into the battles. The way the screen keeps flicking between the battlefield and an individual mob/character for each action is quite jittery. It feels it might be better to keep the overview and just scroll the actions below/to the side/in the middle or something.
"Serin is Liora's:"
Would be helpful to know their genders in advance when answering that one... did appreciate it was very easy to edit after the fact though.
"Rylan's technique increased by 0.1!", "Rylan's perception increased by 0.1!"
Not what I called him.
This dialogue is repeated... both after the encounter and at the start of chapter 1 at breakfast.
I was kinda annoyed I had no player control over the MC when he decides to attack the demon... felt a bit railroaded there, but kinda see how it was needed for the story.
Only slight concern is the 'humans tend towards submissive corruption', I want the MC to be corrupt as hell, but not really so submissive, like all the sweaty sock stuff isn't really my jam... but I have negative interest in any pure love whatsit.
Anyhoo, in summary super promising, really want to see where this goes and I hope there'll be a lot more choices and whatnot going forward. I hope it's not a simple as demon dude gets a girl or the MC does... like the muscly neglected one it'd be kinda nice if the MC used her feelings and kinda pushed for her to just be open to anything as a way to vent himself (as I imagine blondie won't be putting out any time soon) and shared her with his demon bro.