VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Book 5: Untold Legend of Korra [v1.0] [Muplur]

Finally I can teach Korra a lesson for being such a fucking disgrace to the name "Avatar". Jesus fucking Christ. I hate Korra and that cartoon so fucking much. My blood boils when I remember I live in the same era as that fucking piece of garbage.


Pros:
+ You can turn Korra into a filthy slut with no shame or self-respect
+ You can cuck Korra by corrupting and fucking her girl
+ Good art style, well drawn, consistent
+ Interesting plot that doesn't seem out of place in the Avatar universe
+ Good characters, especially Lin and the Spirit girl
+ Reasonable amount of grind
+ Well written
+ Good amount of content
+ Animated (with drawings, of course)
+ Good sex scenes without too much text

Cons:
- Not enough physical punishment for Korra


You guys might've realized that I kinda don't like Korra very much. However, this doesn't make my review biased. The game is still a good game and the inspiration from Akabur is very well executed.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.2...

Originally Reviewed on 01/07/2018

Looks very much like a parody of The Avatar, but unsure about it right now, as it is a small bit confusing...

The visuals of the characters are 2D hand drawn, and look good so far... The backgrounds, albeit not many, are also hand drawn and look unique and creative... The city map looks easy enough to use, but instead of the UI being menu driven or having buttons for activities, it is text based...

The script for the most part is readable, but has a bit of broken English as well as a small amount of spelling/grammar errors... The plot is a bit hard to figure out at first, because as the player/reader you are presented with a vague letter followed by passing out, followed by thrown into the story... Of course, that may be entirely intentional, perhaps to cause confusion, because the male protagonist doesn't really know 100% what is going on after that, anyhow... The main story, from what I could gather, is that the protagonist is a Guru who is asked/ordered to take control of Korra (the current avatar) and teach her obedience... How will that take place? Don't know, as that mechanic doesn't seem to exist yet... So not sure if it will be a Domination path, a Relationship path, or something else, perhaps even a mix...

At the end of the 0.2 content the author has a lot of dialogue between the protagonist, in a somewhat humorous method... He/she sounds like they plan to bow to the whims of their fan base, who has apparently asked that the game/VN have less dialogue and more sex scenes... And it sounded like the author plans to comply with that request... I'm unsure if that request is just coming from folks who were hoping for such an early version to have sex stuff, already in it, which this early version doesn't, and therefore complained about it? For me, it's kind of sad, that so many of these more recent erotic/adult visual novel/games are allowing their fan base to dictate content, with too much creative control... Wish more authors would stick to their guns, make the product the way they want to, without pandering to the desires of a minority of folks, just because they spoke up...

Overall, even with the broken English, this game/VN shows promise... There was a little bit of confusion in the beginning, but it is very early into development... I really do hope it doesn't become just another purist porn game with very little dialogue/monologue or good story elements... Only time will tell... I may check back on this one several versions down the line, to see how it's developing... Hopefully we get to see more humor, as this is a parody after all...