TonyMurray

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We know us, the MC stopped the door from closing to go back through and presumably follow the girls in this update
If they (the operators of the facility) get it anywhere near right, they'll see it on the cameras and remotely close one of the doors so MC can't follow them/catch up with them. I don't know whether I want that to happen or not though, in terms of story/game progression.
 

BMN1234

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Jan 24, 2020
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This is my first attempt at creating a VN.
I figured the best way to try and learn all this stuff was to throw myself in at the deep end and learn as I go. I'm happy to share my progress here because I'm getting valuable feedback (good and bad), which is part of the learning process and will (hopefully) make me better in the long run.
I have no plans to create a Substar/Patreon account now or in the future because, as I've posted previously, this is a hobby for me and just something I do for fun.
It's pretty good for your first attempt, so you're a quick learner. It's honestly smart that you don't have a patreon or substar, because those platforms have been downright puritanical with how they view "taboo" subjects, so your game would either never get approved or even worse, go by unnoticed for a while until some fuckwad decides to report you because they felt like it. If you ever decide to change your mind, I think your best bet to get donations would be places like ko-fi or buymeacoffee if you still wanted to keep making games with themes that the major places would deny you for, just have to tell people to donate anonymously; I think any unnecessary attention isn't good, so those places don't need to know you're making AVN's.

Keep up the good work though, I'm really enjoying the suspense as well as the naughty parts. All the girls you chose and/or made for this look very tantalizing. You have any plans to either expand on this cast of characters with a sequel after this is done or make something else? Any particular interests or favorite media you'd think would make for a good setting?
 
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louisamay

Newbie
Jan 2, 2021
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This is my first attempt at creating a VN.
I figured the best way to try and learn all this stuff was to throw myself in at the deep end and learn as I go. I'm happy to share my progress here because I'm getting valuable feedback (good and bad), which is part of the learning process and will (hopefully) make me better in the long run.
I have no plans to create a Substar/Patreon account now or in the future because, as I've posted previously, this is a hobby for me and just something I do for fun.
Well, good Lord, you emerge from the deep end with an expert butterfly stroke! I too wanted to find out how to support you but discover that you embody the true, original meaning of "amateur", 'amatorem'; one who cultivates and participates but does not pursue it professionally or with an eye to gain. So rare, and so so delightful. Thank you, my friend, and please do keep it up!
 
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