Very good V/N
First the pros
Interesting story line, one that I haven't come across before so unique.
Good animations
Realistic proportions on the models which is a major plus.
No glaring errors in spelling and grammar.
Negatives
This one is nitpicking but a pet peeve. Over reliance on the word fuck. Common among AVNs and indicates lack of writing experience. There are several words or phrases for sex, mix it up some.
The dialog was often smaller than I would have liked.
More interactions between the MC and the girls would have been nice.
More sounds would have been a bonus.
The main reason I gave it 4 stars instead of 5 is that I felt the ending was a bit lacking. I get the Dev was probably wanting to wrap it up and move on but more time with the girls after the main part of the story would have been a big plus. Also only one of the girls was showing signs of pregnancy. More would also have been a plus. Unfortunately the ending doesn't leave much room for a sequel.
My bad, more than one of the girls was showing pregnancy at the end and somehow I missed it the first playthrough so I wanted to correct that. Still it would have been nice to see more interactions with them enroute to their pregnancies.
I look forward to seeing where the Dev goes next.
First the pros
Interesting story line, one that I haven't come across before so unique.
Good animations
Realistic proportions on the models which is a major plus.
No glaring errors in spelling and grammar.
Negatives
This one is nitpicking but a pet peeve. Over reliance on the word fuck. Common among AVNs and indicates lack of writing experience. There are several words or phrases for sex, mix it up some.
The dialog was often smaller than I would have liked.
More interactions between the MC and the girls would have been nice.
More sounds would have been a bonus.
The main reason I gave it 4 stars instead of 5 is that I felt the ending was a bit lacking. I get the Dev was probably wanting to wrap it up and move on but more time with the girls after the main part of the story would have been a big plus. Also only one of the girls was showing signs of pregnancy. More would also have been a plus. Unfortunately the ending doesn't leave much room for a sequel.
My bad, more than one of the girls was showing pregnancy at the end and somehow I missed it the first playthrough so I wanted to correct that. Still it would have been nice to see more interactions with them enroute to their pregnancies.
I look forward to seeing where the Dev goes next.