V0.3
nicely done.
well structured and thought out. had i not been a fan of the saw series, the game, memento, usual suspects, shyamalan movies etc i might have been in for a ride. i do love a twist
art is middling and there is a little detachment with sex scenes, more fly on the wall than intimate. i need to see balls slapping hamster mouth (or bean if feeding the hamster) up close and personal before i gets me a chubby. that's just me though. like to be almost smelling the action.
could indeed be better looking but it doesn't detract too much from the read, which is the real strong point here. just looks a little dated.
the writing is very well put together. someone sat down and planned and it shows. not sure where this will go if it has a long term, which judging from the increasing hints is closing on the reveal, but it doesn't need one. it's solid so far, and if it plays out as i suspect it will, will stay with many fondly.
there is a similarity with another game being developed but this one gets on with it and gets it done. the other is having an identity crisis. the contrast is huge.
minor flaws aside, this is pretty damn good. some better imagery and intimate angles/close ups with the scenes, purely my personal preference, this would have me window cleaning my screen.
ticks all the kink boxes i like and kowtows to no bankers. sweet
if there was a spelling mistake i didn't notice, which for this site is so bloody rare it is rocking horse poo