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There's no date with Beth yet. Part 1 ends right before it.
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While the game is only starting, I really like it so far. It's a classic criminal caper that keeps the plot clear and the characters highlighted. It was easy to get invested. There are a bunch of English-as-second-language issues in the text, but they never get in the way of understanding what was intended so it was easy to live with them. Even the surrogate daughter, who initially had me nervous, turns out to be a vital part of the MC's backstory.
Nice work, I'm totally in for one last update!
Nice work, I'm totally in for one last update!
Hey, thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to improve my writing with every update, editing takes a lot of time and practice too. But yeah, if you're into AVN's and classic action movies, I think you won't be disappointed in the futureWhile the game is only starting, I really like it so far. It's a classic criminal caper that keeps the plot clear and the characters highlighted. It was easy to get invested. There are a bunch of English-as-second-language issues in the text, but they never get in the way of understanding what was intended so it was easy to live with them. Even the surrogate daughter, who initially had me nervous, turns out to be a vital part of the MC's backstory.
Nice work, I'm totally in for one last update!
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Yet. Otherwise total waste of a daughter. I realize not everyone is into keeping it in the family but at least having the option is nice. Same for NTR, I hate it, but the option is nice for those into that.
