VN Ren'Py Bright Lord [v1.01 Rework] [KissKiss Studio]

[XerxesBlack]

OKAY, so. I am the new proofreader and story editor on Bright Lord. If you have joined the discord you already know this.

So, for the past 5 weeks I've working on rewriting and proofreading the script so that it serves the high quality of the game devs renders and story.

Yesterday, after I handed over the initial 15hrs of editing work the game from demo to 0.3 release, I took a day off.
Only to come back and see that a beta tester had leaked it before I had a chance to do a final correction alongside a playthrough as I had only been editing the script from images and not a finished version.

This sucks. Because it means there is a leaked version with subpar story edits (my part of the game development). Thus, making people think that my work is subpar and thus in the future I would lose $$ as people would question my abilities if I offered to work for them for paid work.

Anyway, I am still editing a final edit with game playthrough and hopefully you guys will support the dev for 0.4 or if he decides to release with my final edits on his patreon. Thats all his decision.
But, having spent 20hrs on these edits its a bummer to see some leak it befire its finished especially since its my first game work and KissKiss Studios first game.

Please pop over anf toss a coin at our patreons because this has not been a good day as a writer or game dev for us.

 

[DA22]

OKAY, so. I am the new proofreader and story editor on Bright Lord. If you have joined the discord you already know this.

So, for the past 5 weeks I've working on rewriting and proofreading the script so that it serves the high quality of the game devs renders and story.

Yesterday, after I handed over the initial 15hrs of editing work the game from demo to 0.3 release, I took a day off.
Only to come back and see that a beta tester had leaked it before I had a chance to do a final correction alongside a playthrough as I had only been editing the script from images and not a finished version.

This sucks. Because it means there is a leaked version with subpar story edits (my part of the game development). Thus, making people think that my work is subpar and thus in the future I would lose $$ as people would question my abilities if I offered to work for them for paid work.

Anyway, I am still editing a final edit with game playthrough and hopefully you guys will support the dev for 0.4 or if he decides to release with my final edits on his patreon. Thats all his decision.
But, having spent 20hrs on these edits its a bummer to see some leak it befire its finished especially since its my first game work and KissKiss Studios first game.

Please pop over anf toss a coin at our patreons because this has not been a good day as a writer or game dev for us.

It happens and has happened before to other devs. At least you have been open about it, so most will be understanding about it and play again. One thing if it happens again is report the post with the report function at right bottom of post and ask mods to add alpha release to name of the game and a warning to OP that it is an pre-leaked alpha and what is missing from the expected release version in the leaked release.

 

[AL.d]

They are still being "corrupted" I would say. I get what you mean and yes mind-control in itself isn't corruption, but through 3 Acts we've already seen a change in the girl's behavior towards the MC.

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Corruption implies a permanent change. It can be slow and gradual but it still needs to be there even after the mind control thing stops. The only instance where I noticed that, was the Emily moment you mentioned. And still that was mostly MC being a selfish prick who keeps leaving before any of the girls finish. No wonder all of them are stressed and frustrated with MC "blueballing" them all the time.

 

[KissKissStudio]

0.3 FINAL

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MAC

 

[johnson803]

where can i find chloein other game

 

[KissKissStudio]

where can i find emily in other game

What do you mean?

 

[johnson803]

What do you mean?

i mean chloe character is very similar to character in other game but i forget the name of that game

 

[KissKissStudio]

i mean chloe character is very similar to character in other game but i forget the name of that game

could be The office. The hairstyle is used by a lot of games, but the face is what diffrent

 

[-KC-]

OKAY, so. I am the new proofreader and story editor on Bright Lord. If you have joined the discord you already know this.

So, for the past 5 weeks I've working on rewriting and proofreading the script so that it serves the high quality of the game devs renders and story.

Yesterday, after I handed over the initial 15hrs of editing work the game from demo to 0.3 release, I took a day off.
Only to come back and see that a beta tester had leaked it before I had a chance to do a final correction alongside a playthrough as I had only been editing the script from images and not a finished version.

This sucks. Because it means there is a leaked version with subpar story edits (my part of the game development). Thus, making people think that my work is subpar and thus in the future I would lose $$ as people would question my abilities if I offered to work for them for paid work.

Anyway, I am still editing a final edit with game playthrough and hopefully you guys will support the dev for 0.4 or if he decides to release with my final edits on his patreon. Thats all his decision.
But, having spent 20hrs on these edits its a bummer to see some leak it befire its finished especially since its my first game work and KissKiss Studios first game.

Please pop over anf toss a coin at our patreons because this has not been a good day as a writer or game dev for us.

That sucks, I am former staff, play tester to several games & a professional proofreader so if you need help that doesn't leak shit, PM me.

 

[Abhai]

where can i find chloein other game

i mean chloe character is very similar to character in other game but i forget the name of that game

there are probably a few games with "chloe" character/assets,
one of it could be mansbestfriend (sarah, the best thing there by far btw)
p.s.yet you should try your luck in finding it by posting this question in games identification/recommendations part

0.3 FINAL

Mega PC

Mega MAC

uhm, sorry to ask - are those final, or 3c versions?
hadnt been able to track it all last night, yet isnt 3c a previous version?

 

[RandyPhoenix]

We have any penetration scene with side or main girls?

 

[KissKissStudio]

We have any penetration scene with side or main girls?

not yet

 

[KissKissStudio]

there are probably a few games with "chloe" character/assets,
one of it could be mansbestfriend (sarah, the best thing there by far btw)
p.s.yet you should try your luck in finding it by posting this question in games identification/recommendations part

uhm, sorry to ask - are those final, or 3c versions?
hadnt been able to track it all last night, yet isnt 3c a previous version?

The the final. The 0.3c is out dated

 

[Abhai]

The the final. The 0.3c is out dated

perhaps you should name it as a "d" or "final", to avoid confusion - when one unrar those files it says "3c"version.

 

[KissKissStudio]

perhaps you should name it as a "d" or "final", when one unrar those files it says "3c"version.

Yeah I forgot to change the name for it

 

[Abhai]

Yeah I forgot to change the name for it

np, i have updated my previous compressed version with the 0.3final update patch (assuming there are only script changes, right?), so perhaps you could link OP-compressed to that post again.
and hopefully that will be the end of bugfixes - as ive said even the first leaked version went well in my playthrough (dont care much about gallery, and few minor things )

 

[wep]

OKAY, so. I am the new proofreader and story editor on Bright Lord. If you have joined the discord you already know this.

So, for the past 5 weeks I've working on rewriting and proofreading the script so that it serves the high quality of the game devs renders and story.

Yesterday, after I handed over the initial 15hrs of editing work the game from demo to 0.3 release, I took a day off.
Only to come back and see that a beta tester had leaked it before I had a chance to do a final correction alongside a playthrough as I had only been editing the script from images and not a finished version.

This sucks. Because it means there is a leaked version with subpar story edits (my part of the game development). Thus, making people think that my work is subpar and thus in the future I would lose $$ as people would question my abilities if I offered to work for them for paid work.

Anyway, I am still editing a final edit with game playthrough and hopefully you guys will support the dev for 0.4 or if he decides to release with my final edits on his patreon. Thats all his decision.
But, having spent 20hrs on these edits its a bummer to see some leak it befire its finished especially since its my first game work and KissKiss Studios first game.

Please pop over anf toss a coin at our patreons because this has not been a good day as a writer or game dev for us.

The game is already in another league compared with the first release.
KissKiss and you are doing a great job.

 

[Belnick]

so will saves work in real release that is not alpha? I noticed all saves in alpha release had removed mom with [m], brother with [br], sis with, son with [so], dad with [d] etc...
also nothing that could be changed in the saves as names are not set there....

 

[Belnick]

We have any penetration scene with side or main girls?

mouth pen with a side girl, bj with a side girl and then grinding with main girls

 

[KissKissStudio]

so will saves work in real release that is not alpha? I noticed all saves in alpha release had removed mom with [m], brother with [br], sis with, son with [so], dad with [d] etc...
also nothing that could be changed in the saves as names are not set there....

Nope the saves don't work because of variables and you need to type who they are to you. I did it so Patreon won't ban me, cuz they look outside the Patreon too. They go look for your game on other sites and if they find incest they ban you I need to edit some comments too. Cuz if i say something that is against there rules insta ban too