VN - Ren'Py - Brighton City Empire [v0.06] [Fatality17]

I think this game is 5-star execution, the plot is bare bones, and the women are all bimbos that bend over as soon as they see your cock or your bank account, which is what this game is going for and there definitely is an audience for this market, that said.

The MC is a Gary Stu to the ultimate level, there is absolutely no shot a top recruit QB would be half as "smart" as this guy is. Obviously, the author has the power of hindsight to make the MC rich beyond his wildest dreams feasibly. Obviously you aren't playing this game for logic, so I can give it a pass, it's just slightly annoying sometimes, I think it would be a lot more fun if we were just some dumbass qb prospect trying to save the football team from mediocrity and fucking bitches, but that whole plotline is like, lost now.

The game is good, but I would not say this is a great game, it sets out and accomplishes the goal, but it combines a tech bro mc billionaire with a jock athletic star, and it jumps like fifty sharks.

If you like bimbos though, play this game.

Really fun and good game with beautiful women and unbelievably sexy bodies they are all sexy and beautiful but my favourite so far is the forbidden fruit ( the mother) i cannot wait for the next update

Literally my favorite VN! Ever. I'm always checking to see if there is any updates, and truly wish I could afford to support the development. 10 out of 10. Biggest thing I'm looking forward to is seeing pregnancies develop, and then re-breeding the girls; on repeat.

Simple story told without pretentions and without a idiotic or wimpy mc.
Thicc as fuck models and a fuckton of characters.
No stupid sandbox, minigames or find this pixel to collect this image.
This game has it all.

Just caught up with this one, and its really good.
Of course, of you dont like "thicc" girls or big tits/asses dont bother, but if you do this is one of the best games around. Recommended 100%
Good amount of girls (maybe too many tbh, but usual problem with these kind of games), they are likeable and sex scenes are hot. Story is decent but it isn't the focus of the game of course, it is about going around and meeting/fucking thicc women, and the game delivers that very well.
The only negatives would be that there is not as much anal as I would like and sometimes you can miss some scenes due to not taking some "not very obvious choices" but the "cheat mode" fixes that problem. There's also some characters that I would have preferred were virgins (the "not-sisters" and Aspen) which weren't but no game can be perfect, I guess.
Overall a great game, and eager for more.

If you like the proportions, this is a pretty great game with lots of dirty talk, including breeding, love or lust/dom focus, rough but improving animations, a somewhat interesting story & MC, and plenty of no-nonsense sex scenes with a large variety of thicc girls.

Though I'd strongly recommend downloading the easy mode mod as which stats you need for particular scenes is unclear, and what stats each option gives seems pretty random too. Lowering the stat requirements to sex scenes and leaving the dialogue as personal flavour is generally gonna be a lot more enjoyable.

Always looking forward to more, good job dev.

This game gives you exactly what it says on the tin. MC comes from an incredibly poor household, gets a shit ton of money in an inheritance, and sets about creating his own business empire. I appreciated the fact that when asked why he had all these plans for al the money he got, he actually had a believable reason. If you want a game where you pick up ALL the women, with a decent variety in how you interact with said women during sex scenes, this game is for you. The only reason I'm giving it 4 stars instead of 5 is because the sex scenes need polish. Each scene has some lines of dialogue, then an animation (which is a few images repeating), the it stops and you get some lines of dialogue over a still image, rinse and repeat. Personally, I'd like more dirty talk in the scenes, but that's just a personal desire and not something I'd knock a star off for.

All in all, if you find the models attractive, I highly recommend the game. If the sex scenes got polished up some, I'd genuinely give this 5 stars, no question.

Edit: The sex scene animations smooth out a LOT as the game goes on, so I have a lot of faith in this game ending up at 5 stars.

I love this game! Perfect combination for me: harem, thick women, chad/horse cock MC, lots of money (not some weak wimp, with average dick), breeding/pregnacy, fast paced (not some slow burn nonsense), great renders, beautiful LI's and lots of them.
Lots of MILF's (love that), i would like to see some GILF's too (ye ye i know im pervert ).
Good music, i would like to hear some SFX during sex scenes, i know lots of ppl are not a fan of this, but it could be implemented as option in menu.

Biggest weakness of this game in my opinion are the wonky animations, if developer polish animation aspect and make longer sex scenes, it ll be perfect game!

Cannot wait for more! Easily 5/5. Keep up good work man!

How do you take a good model and ruin it? Add a McDonalds menu to it. These were all supersized into the next galaxy. What would have been a stunner is now hideous to look at. Don't get me wrong, I like a nice well proportioned thicc woman. More cushion for the pushin. But these? I feel like I am strolling around the stockyard in Fort Worth looking for heifers to take home to the farm and breed to the prized bull. They have been taken way to far into the extreme. The first few were funny but now stomach churn is all I feel seeing them.

As for the story, its good but it is not really that fresh. The sudden inheritance and even the bitcoin thing has all been used before. The investments have too but this time they were more elaborated on. So yes, the story is certainly a plus.

All in all this game is well worth a play and I only knocked a point for the Ginormous trouser snake on the MC and the beach ball boobs and stovk yard booties on the females. They are so big they just are not attractive any more. If you are good with that, then game is a gem to play. I enjoyed playing it but was put off by the appearance of the models only. The MC is not even revolting to look at until he takes of his trousers and has a grown bodybuilders forearm sticking out in front of him. Come on? A baby's arm was too small for you?

A great game set back by going to far on the bodies in the game.

I love this game. Don't get me wrong, the animations are horrible and need a lot of work and the dev went nuts with MC's tool. But, it hits a soft spot; big assed, big titted curvy milfs "a lot of them". Who doesn't like that, right?!
The story is simple but decent and most importantly, you don't have to jump through hoops to get to the sexy content.

I like this VN. With that being said, here's the review.

Story--- It's a bit far fetched, but it's enjoyable. Revolves around a young, up and coming football star that gets a scholarship. I won't spoil anything else. I give it a 4/5

Characters--- Even though the ladies are well endowed, they have depth, balance and room for growth. I give them a 4/5

Scenes--- There are some that portray the MC as way taller than needed. Meaning that when in some scenes, the MC is looking down on the others. Like he's standing on a large box, or is 14 feet tall. It doesn't happen often, but it is there. Also the scenes where the guy is talking on the phone to people takes way to long to transition. To me, it's a bit frustrating.
So I give it a 3/5

Summary

Honestly it's not a bad VN. Tons of ladies, tons of things happening and this is only the beginning. Fatality17 is doing a good job with this creation. The humor is quite good as well.
I recommend this VN for it's humor and story. Lots of women as well.
Good luck to Fatality17 and I look forward to new releases.

The game is oveall great. Whats already in the game is enough for me to say this. The game has a solid foundation on its idea and premise. Sexy busty female characters, Harem, Romance, Looking to build a family and a better future for them.
I recommend to give this game a try

- The Female Characters (Love Interests) are amazing
The design is godly. Big lips, big tits and big ass. Sexy outfits, makeup, hairstyles etc...
Personality wise they are different BUT there are some clear pairs that the dev wrote in mind. The dynamic between some of them when they speak/fuck/interact with the MC is written very well.
The female characters are the best thing about the game by far.

- This is a Harem game with romance
While there is some amazing dirty talk, flirts, sweet talk etc... relationships are the core of the game.
I love when the female characters act slutty for the MC, some of the peaks of the game for sure.
However do NOT expect anything extreme here, I doubt that the dev will allow sharing with other male character or pimping.
Tho seems the dev is very open to lesbian action tho

- The stroy is all about family in a way
MC is build a very nice harem, and he inteds to provide for them. Its one of the few harem games that actually has Family as a driving point. Getting more money for a better future for his women (and possibly kids)

- The sex scenes need work
Most of the sex scenes in the game Continue Automatically ... as in they play out and swtich angles without player input.
This is a inconvenience since if you find an angle you like, you can enjoy it very much.
There are some very good ones tho, especially as the game progresses. Camera Angles get better, but still the dev avoids showing certain ones, like clear doggy style ones or direct blowjobs where we have full view.

Warnings/concerns/Key notes
Lesbian stuff is Optional in a way, but very present. This can potentially take a very sad turn.
There is NO NTR in this. Pure Harem.
Sharing is probably only going to be done for lesbian stuff. No Pimping or whoring out the girls.
The best you can hope for is if MC buys a strip club and tells his women to work there, but even that is a reach.

Overall, I highly recommend this game
Is very well written romance wise, dirty talk wise, character wise, plot wise.
Events flow very nicely and you dont feel bloated.
THIS IS A POWER FANTASY

[v0.03]
I don't even know where to begin... I have no idea why this VN has a 4+ star rating.

The plot is insane, with awful pacing and plot points that come out of nowhere and don't feel minimally earned because the MC is just given everything he needs and an annoying Gary Stu, the women all have the same basic personality and set up, the grammar is awful, the dialogue is either pointless business strategizing or dumb jokes, there's tons of unneeded descriptive text that could and should be replaced with images (it is a visual novel, after all), and the animations range from awful to decent. Also the scenes with people on the phone right at the end of the current version have them moving their lips before speaking, so it looks like everyone's chewing gum.

There were some things I did like, though: the focus on breeding with the body types to match, the variety of girls (I think there may be too many of them, but they are definitely varied), the tons of different choices that let you shape both the MC's personality (to a degree) and his relationship with the girls, and the personalized sleeves look really good. That's about it and why it doesn't get 1 star.

On a final note, I don't know what it is about having a college athlete as a protagonist, but I have yet to see a VN actually explore that instead of immediately veering off to a completely unrelated plot.

Oh, also couldn't help but notice the names Rachel gives for incels are identical to those of some of the people who reviewed the game negatively. Funny coincidence, that.

It's not a bad game by any means. I enjoyed what's available so far. It's a rags-to-riches story with the MC finding himself in the crosshairs of the elite as he unknownly steps on their toes. It's pretty fast paced so you won't have to wait too long to get to the sexy parts. If you have a fetish for impregnation and/or excessively voluptous women, this is your cup of tea. That said, I was a little confused about why the MC was all over the news for a football scholarship. Then again, there's a woman with J-cups or something who is able to move around unassisted so maybe I shouldn't think so hard on it lol. All in all, I'd give it a 4.5 out of 5

Animation: Figures are bombastic but the animations need a little bit of TLC,
Story: Simple, nothing crazy and helps create content for the viewer,
Scripting: also simple, this isn't a game for realism
This game is for those who love thicc and double thicc woman. It delivers early and delivers quickly. Fun game and easy to enjoy

holy shit this game. in a world with idiotic free roams. mini games and stories about saving the world or whatever the fuck a trashy ass game like this is all i needed. also holy shit the sister.
dev, add more bimbos and netori!

Best game ever please carry on i would like anal and incest please dont give up this game have a unique story very tempting and amazing but the real part is the taboo one
thats why i gave you ten out of ten thank you so much for your hard work
always waiting for next update

The Story writing is exactly what I like to see aswell as the Art.
I am investet to see how the Story develops and what else will be aded.
+ really good customer service from the dev when it comes to problems with Patreon/dc perks.

I came into this game with zero expectations. I was prepared for anything.

What did I get? A game that made me go "Oh, it's over already... I want MORE".

The graphics aren't this, or that, sure. Couldn't care less.
The characters have absurd proportions? So what? It's a fantasy. It's an alternate universe. It's a fucking romp. I found that those proportions made the game an even better story, by NOT trying to take itself so serious.
There are orthographic and grammatical errors, yes, it's true. All of that can be fixed in half an hour or so, so what? I found that otherwise, the story made sense, showed some sophistication (as in it's not a 13 year old writing a porn fantasy), and the story even as depth (it surprised me, really). The choices and the dialogues were written with very good humor, sometimes a bit over the top, but, it made me laugh.

So, in result, my dear @Fatality17 I could only wish that all the beginners had has much talent has you showed us. I don't really ask that you improve this or that, it will happen naturally, the most I would ask is for you NOT give up, you have a great game and a great story and you seem more than good enough to carry it to the stars.

I liked this game very, very much.

I was hyped by positive reviews and curvy babes on the screenshots and was disappointed.
Story: there is some effort for worldbuilding, but it's either too much or too little to get what's going on in this world. I've just read Dev Notes here and it says more than the game does, which is confusing. Other than that, there is no plot, just a power fantasy.
Gameplay: I don't feel choices matter, most of the time you're dumped on 4 options that would change text during the next sex scene. Hato to say it, but a kinetic novel would be better than the choices we get.
Visuals: that saddens me the most because I was downloading it out for sexy bimbo girls. Unfortunately, the renders are of poor quality, grainy and messy. Animations are years behind, looping 3 frames at best.
Overall, it's not horrible, and there is a lot of content for a version number this low, but I wouldn't recommend it