VN - Ren'Py - Brighton City Empire [v0.06] [Fatality17]

Review of version 0.02....wait, friggen .02??? Release the hounds! OK Had to review this, and very surprised at what I found.

First - big, thic, MILFs (who look like MILFs, lots of them, heavy makeup, porn logic, and suspension of belief, Graphics are good, not epic, but they are good.

Gameplay, VN, a bunch of choices that seem to do some changes with dialogue

Bugs - encountered a couple exception errors, ignored and continued

Story - kind of amazing that the dev got one in there with all that was going on, but there is a story, and backgrounds to all the characters.

So now my narrative review - jeez, holy crap. For a Version 0.02 more content than some at .80. Spoiler below:


Now I have no idea where the dev might go in future...this is like the first couple releases....cause everything has already happened...

Sex scenes are right away, and plentiful throughout. Animations, lots of variety and well done.

I was tired after going through this, lots of impregnation, thicc women and milfs.

MC is a stud, nice guy, HUGE dick - but strangley with all the thicc women it kinda works and doesn't look too weird.

Most of the time I would say "Dev, slow down" but heck he got the story in and did a great job at this early release.

Only complaints I had - jeez the mansion was just too far, looks like he moved into some Dubai location and its just not needed. AND - my biggest one, every sex scene, every womans face has her tongue out for the entire encounter, every pic. Tone that down, the tongue out, crosseyed look doesn't need to be on every scene, it takes away from the entire feel.

There's not much substance to the story or plot and it's just trying to increase as many sexual encounters as possible with big titted women with ridiculous proportions. You can make choices around the encounters and interactions with the ladies, but they're all the same shallow bimbo.

Going for sexual content with big titty bimbos would have been fine if it wasn't for the poor, grainy renders.

The Daz models and lighting are all set poorly, making the images look quite muddy. It's tough to look at and is made by worse by the very choppy, barely animated sex scenes. There are like maybe 5 frames per second of 'animation'.

And there's also the option to set relationship 'names' for the purposes of adding incest back to the game.

What a fun hidden gem. I was hoping the project would continue as I was wondering what direction it was headed. The story is fun as I am genuinely a sucker for underdog stories. Loving all the Thicc and unique characters as well. Looking forward to further chapters.

I've played well over 300+ Adult Games on this site and beyond I can safely say as far as PORN goes, this is a solid one. I'm a bit biased because I have a breeding kink but if that's also your thing this is the one for you. I'll be going over what I like to call; "The Big 6" that I use to rate pretty much everything I play or watch:



1. Theme/Concept/Story:

Simple obviously, it's a typical Adult game with the focus of porn as at it's forefront. This isn't a BAD thing, because the theme is focusing on porn, rather than story like games such as Leap Of Faith, Summer's Gone, or The Falling to name a few random ones. If you want something deep and meaningful, this isn't for you, as the story mainly focuses on just a college guy trying to get some pussy while becoming a star football player. It's about as much of a filler premise as Milfy City.



2. The Writing:

Again, nothing to gawk at. It's as simple as it needs to be, while still making sense enough for the given scenario, as unrealistic as it is. There's a lot of worship, focusing on the god tier MCness but if you don't have a problem with that, you'll be fine; did you want to play as a loser? The jokes that are there are fine I guess I'm not very humorous myself but it's definitely nothing ground breaking let alone even noticable if it is there. Nothing much more to say for this section, just your A typical porn focus writing, but NOT 2, robots fucking, keep that in mind more on that in the Characters section.



3. The Gameplay:

So I actually really like this aspect, it's your run of the mill choice game, but there are a LOT of choices to shape your character. Whether or not they have any ACTUAL impact (other than dialogue changes or ending paths) in the future is up for debate, but just having the options there make the experience much better. The phone is something I see in a lot of games and I will ALWAYS despise it's interface. But it's options were easy to get used to, with lots of potential for future interactions such as texts, calls, etc. Nothing really noteworthy I just wanted to point out the CHOICES.



4. The Art:

It's a basic 3dcg game, but has CRAZY proportions. Now I know there are a lot of copium huffers out there that dislike unrealistic proportions, too large penises, or anything of the sort. To all of that I say; FUCK those people, they don't deserve the air they breath for whining about something they could easily avoid if they just went out and got some real pussy or dick. You want realism? Go touch grass. You want fantasy? Play porn, I don't see those same people whining about a pornstar's penis or butt injections. Just look at the fanbase of nearly any black dude or Nickiibaby (personal best ass I've seen). Anywho other than proportion debate how about the renders themselves? Facial structure, hair, etc. To that I've DEFINITELY seen better, yet I've also DEFINITELY seen worse. Depends on your overall preferences, I personally could care less about Milfs and their looks, there is a large majority of that here. But there are also younger looking blondes like the cousin we've yet to see that I ADORE the look of. Hell they all look different at least, a lot of games use the same models or even have their final result characters ALL HAVE THE SAME FACE just with different hair, boggles my fucking mind. The MC looks good too, which is nearly ALWAYS a problem with a majority of MCs in adult games. Moving on...



5. The Characters:

So the characters are again basic from a personal perspective, but sometimes that's all we need. I do however like that they each have a level of difference I've seen between them in terms of pasts, personalities, etc. The chick on the bus was tomboyish no bullshit. The sister was sweet yet hardheaded. The mother was kind and caring yet sexually curious of the MC's sexual curiosity. The Ex girlfriend was a down on her luck spoiled? princess feeling vibe, come to worship you as a shoulder piece once again. The rival's cougar mom is ferice and unwavering in her decisions, and ravenous in her sexuality. And the MC of course acts pretty much however you want him to based on the choices you make. He can be a play boy, a sweetheart, neutral, all of them, some to others, some to none, the list goes on.



6. The Porn:

Best aspect of the game hands down, and the bread and butter of why I regard this game highly; it does it outstandingly. So far you don't have a choice on how the sex scenes play out, and we probably never will due to the rendering that it would take, but overall they have a wide variety of angles FOR each scene, which kind of makes up for the lack of said positions. The other nice aspect are the choices you can make during the sex scenes. "A picture is worth a thousand words" well that also applies in the reverse way if you do it well, and I can happily say that the descriptive nature of the sex scenes are arguably some of the best I've seen in a game. Less random grunts of approval or moans of ecstacy, and more dirty talking and descriptive picture building for your mind to run wild with the imagery already in front of you. And finally the BEST aspect of this entire game for me personally, of ALLLLL the games I've played throughout my life, I can only COUNT the amount of games that have this kink on my fingers; the breeding kink. It sores HIGH above all other kinks of mine and I'm sure most people here, and it is OPTIONALLY prevalent throughout this game, and I LOVE it. I got a bit down bad but I digress, it's a really noticable and welcomed addition to what I feel like is a dying kink. You'll see TONS of PREGNANCY games but NOT BREEDING, they are very different kinks, and most breeding kinks you DO see (well done) are unfortunately hidden towards the END of the games. The ONLY ones I can remember off the top of my head that have this kink done well (for anyone wondering) are Breed Town, Breed Town 2, or ANY of ZaneSFM 's work. There is also maybe My Legacy, but this one is much more descriptive and instant. There's even some cock worship in this game and welcomely once more, some very niche balls worship (another big one of mine) so honestly this game just checks all of my boxes for prime fap material, which I'd wager is the point of this game in the first place.









Overall this game FOR ME is a 4 out of 5 and I'll rate it as such. The SECOND you play the first day, you should have an excellent gasp that it's NOT story or writing driven, and all about sex, which is FINE; it completes that ascept well.

If I could list SOMETHING to improve for @Fatality17 , it would be adding a level of great story telling, more realism WITH all of the stuff you've been exceeding with in here already. Maybe something to think about for potential future games, if not; you're already doing great, keep up the good work!

Should any of you have any complaints or ways to convince me to lower said score or add your input in a negative or positive way; feel free to reply, if not, fuck off. Thank you for reading my long as monologue, and have a wonderful day.

Link to my thread version of the review which has all the Game/Creator/Instagram Mentions above

This is the type of first update that should be more common place, one that's worth playing on its own. If you've seen the preview images and don't like the hyper sexual characteristics that will decide whether this is for you or not, this game is hyper sexual, the sex comes fast and you can argue that animation or models aren't the best but I would take that any day over witnessing a single handjob. Spoilers but in the first update alone you can breed 3 different women and many more are set up.

The writing also does what it needs to do, sets up the scenario so its hot without feeling mindless

I like it, there's potential. If you don't like outrageous proportions probably not the game for you. It goes right to the sex which is appealing, and I think the models are sexy. And the MC seems pretty likeable, which is somewhat rare. Overall I'm into it.

There are some coding issues though. Like I tried watching the gallery and it gave me an error.

Visual novel where you play a musclar stud with huge dick. You are 18, just finished high school and starting college on a football scholarship. You are offered a variety of women (who are all extra thicc with huge asses and tits). You have the option to individually reject each one (clearly labeled) if you are not interested in them.

When you fuck them, you have the option to pull out, creampie (no impregnate), or breed. It is nice that dev actually gives choices.
Have an option to opt out of anal sex if you are not into it.

The "voyeurism" tag refers to optional peeking at love interests when they are changing. There is no cuckoldry involved at all.
You are not even subtle about it, the girls notice and love the attention.

No grind, no bullshit, excellent game so far.

Really enjoyed playing the early version, sexy women, fun game to play, already has quality of life features like a gallery from the start.

Will drop a star mildly because the renders are older style, although they are also all unique which is great, but mainly because animations were wonky at best and bad at worse, the dev should either improve them notably or just drop them altogether and focus on multiple still images.

Do know the dev is going for thicc thic, if that's your thing look no further, I love it, but if that's not your thing why are you here the preview pics were pretty clear lol.

4 of 5, not sure it has the makings of a great game but it's already a good and fun one.

it does what it says on the tin ... the writing and story is childish like a horny 14 year old who wants to bread everything and wont take no for an answer ... the animations are bad outdated like 3 years ago ... nothing really makes any sense and its kind of offputting ... but if you like big assed floatation devices called lilo lil you may well like it ... but i wont recomend it ... i suggest the dev re wries it and tries harder

Great start with enough content to get me hooked.
MC with a giant horse cock gets to fuck loads of hugely well endowed ladies.
Right up my ally!
University setting with a superstar MC that girls literally want to immediately get impaled on his massive schlong. What's not to love? Bring on more girls I say!
Story 3/5 - Nothing unique but enough for a good fap
Graphics 3/5 - Huge tits and asses, not overly realistic but that's okay.
Gameplay 3/5 - Choices to make you seem either slightly caring or just after a sex slave but doesn't really seem to make the girls any less eager to fuck.
Animations 3/5 - Not great, could be a lot better but I know that's hard work for the dev so I'd opt for more girls over spending time getting animation better.
Content 5/5 - For a first release it gets straight to some great sex scenes and introduces you to many girls that will no doubt be hopping on your cock before too long.
Sex scenes 4/5 - Pretty good but as I said could be better animated.
Fapability 5/5 - Great for a first release.

Overall I love these types of games. Really looking forward to more updates.
Great work!

Really good so far, I am enjoying the visuals and honestly I know the proportions are not everyone's cup of tea but I am a real fan of them, and I hope it stays that way in the future while there isn't a lot unique shown yet it does a fairly good job at the standers mixed with the visuals that It is a really enjoyable experience

I had an enjoyable experience playing this game. It's great that the developer put a lot of work into creating the game, and that the English is well written and proofread. The fact that the story offers good character development is also a positive aspect of the game.
While the renders are a bit grainy, it's great to see that this did not detract from my overall enjoyment of the game. As I do prioritize a good story over just good visuals.
Additionally, the fact that the game offers choice-based options that allow you to shape the main character's profile is a huge plus. This adds an extra layer of depth and customization to the game, making it a more engaging experience overall.
Overall, I had a positive experience playing this game, and it offers a compelling story with well-developed characters. The minor issue with the renders does not detract from the overall experience, and the choice-based options add an extra level of engagement to the game.

This is for v0.01
Well where to start....
I haven't posted much or rated too many games/novels on here but. this is very well put together. Yes it may be "Quick" with getting to the sex side of things but man, it's fine by me.
I commend the dev for the hard work and time put into this. The graphics are fairly good and the story is interesting. I'd say it's definitely worth the time to try this out. Big jugs and butts are fine if the story is interesting. No issues with lag while the animations are running, thankfully. (I have an older computer)
The names of the characters are good so far. That to me makes things nice.
I'd say i like the choices given to reply to various NPC's
And HUMOR!!! I enjoy a little humor here and there like most people, so thanks for that!!
Decent file size for the amount of play time.
Nice looking models even though they do tend to have the same plump body style. If you like big "guns" and "cabooses" then this is for you!!!
Anyway, I believe this may be one I shall support in the near future
I'll rate this high because I really did enjoy it