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Holy shit, is that a Game Brick in the 4 pic? I had two of those as a kid.
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Is not terrible but all the scenes pass too fast, there is no transition to another part, is almost like all the game is skipping, 1 hour later, etc, there is a scene, and jump to another without any transition, no continuation of the last scene, like i said, is not a horrible game (there is stuff that i'm not a fan, i understand that those are for the "story" but i'm not a fan) but need a better development. Also another simple thing is not giving option to rename the mc, is a simple thing that can give a lot more immersion.
Thanks for the update. It's always pleasant to see progress in the creation of something as challenging as a KN or VN.
I believe in and support the unconditional and absolute right for any developer to create in whatever fashion they choose. What follows is merely my opinion, intended as feedback to the developer(s). Take it for whatever value you find in it.
The technical qualities are good, but this KV lacks a narrative and writing quality that enmeshes the reader in the story. A KN is an illustrated story so the strength of the writing is critical. The story didn't flow for me. The pacing felt off and it was a struggle to maintain focus.
It also doesn't help that, at this point in the story, the primary LI is, both physically and personally, one of the least attractive females in the KN. Unlike a VN where the reader usually gets to avoid interaction with characters they find unappealing, here the author exerts that control. While something of a fringe character can certainly be used successfully, my preference would be that atypical LIs be involved later in the story after the MC has been involved with more traditional LIs. Similarly the gang bang/orgy scene, give the MC was only a spectator, would have been better later in the story. I also found the inability to choose the MC's name a barrier to immersion.
I respect the level of effort to produce this and, despite the criticisms expressed here, I sincerely wish you the very best luck with the KN.
I believe in and support the unconditional and absolute right for any developer to create in whatever fashion they choose. What follows is merely my opinion, intended as feedback to the developer(s). Take it for whatever value you find in it.
The technical qualities are good, but this KV lacks a narrative and writing quality that enmeshes the reader in the story. A KN is an illustrated story so the strength of the writing is critical. The story didn't flow for me. The pacing felt off and it was a struggle to maintain focus.
It also doesn't help that, at this point in the story, the primary LI is, both physically and personally, one of the least attractive females in the KN. Unlike a VN where the reader usually gets to avoid interaction with characters they find unappealing, here the author exerts that control. While something of a fringe character can certainly be used successfully, my preference would be that atypical LIs be involved later in the story after the MC has been involved with more traditional LIs. Similarly the gang bang/orgy scene, give the MC was only a spectator, would have been better later in the story. I also found the inability to choose the MC's name a barrier to immersion.
I respect the level of effort to produce this and, despite the criticisms expressed here, I sincerely wish you the very best luck with the KN.
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Any plans for futa on male? I and many others are a fan of that!
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Seemed like an interesting, I was lured in by the futa tag.
The game itself is choppy, you'll be flung from one scene to another without context for any of it. Main thing that put me off playing further is the forced foot fetish. Not interested in it myself and I'm not really interested in playing as a character who has it. It will definitely limit the audience because being shoehorned into sexual preferences you don't have without any kind of choice is a great way to turn people off.
There are also vibes of femdom, nothing featured that I saw, but the over all vibe seemed to hanging in the air. I could be wrong on this though as I stopped once feet became the focus.
The game itself is choppy, you'll be flung from one scene to another without context for any of it. Main thing that put me off playing further is the forced foot fetish. Not interested in it myself and I'm not really interested in playing as a character who has it. It will definitely limit the audience because being shoehorned into sexual preferences you don't have without any kind of choice is a great way to turn people off.
There are also vibes of femdom, nothing featured that I saw, but the over all vibe seemed to hanging in the air. I could be wrong on this though as I stopped once feet became the focus.
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I've only found two games that really do this. Family Affair and Roundscape Adorevia. The problem I've had is that Roundscape is RPGM and I can't be bothered with that nonsense and Family Affair, you're partner seems to want to dominate you all the time. I hate being dominated to the point where it's ruining the whole game for me. Why can't there just be a nice dynamic with a futa character, where you're on equal footing and there's equal give and take? Why does it always have come back to domination all the time?
This turned into a rant sorry.
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Being this 0.4 I dont get the title for this game. Not much contend right now.
Not a fan of the Futa/trans thing but Kinetic Novel is ok. Since its a KN you cant avoid any fetishes in the game so be warned if you dont like whats in the current tags and planned tags. So its more to treat it like a porn movie.
Game starts MC having a dream of the students having a threesome, my guess its a foreshadowing.
Some stuff happens, then a orgy with Natalie, Tony and Cybil (Futa girl) with a plethora of guys happens. MC is present but I didnt saw him doing anything there. Not a fan either. Kinda disappointing. If there is already a orgy going on then let the MC be part of it.
Chapter ends by Eva sucking some dude off in the street corner. Also not a fan of it. So its more of a voyeurism type of game. Does it need a tag ? I dont know.
The only thing I liked was the milf Christine which you get to bang. But my guess is how the story goes MC could also get fucked by her with a strapon.
In all not a game for me but the scenes were hot.
Not a fan of the Futa/trans thing but Kinetic Novel is ok. Since its a KN you cant avoid any fetishes in the game so be warned if you dont like whats in the current tags and planned tags. So its more to treat it like a porn movie.
Game starts MC having a dream of the students having a threesome, my guess its a foreshadowing.
Some stuff happens, then a orgy with Natalie, Tony and Cybil (Futa girl) with a plethora of guys happens. MC is present but I didnt saw him doing anything there. Not a fan either. Kinda disappointing. If there is already a orgy going on then let the MC be part of it.
Chapter ends by Eva sucking some dude off in the street corner. Also not a fan of it. So its more of a voyeurism type of game. Does it need a tag ? I dont know.
The only thing I liked was the milf Christine which you get to bang. But my guess is how the story goes MC could also get fucked by her with a strapon.
In all not a game for me but the scenes were hot.
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Hi Valeriyo, thanks for your feedback and just small clarification for you:
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No worries. It's just preferences is all. Good luck.Thanks anyway for the feedback
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Oh damn you right. Eva is the black chick.
New girl looks cute/hot. Got this seductive Asian vibes. Sadly it starts of with sucking on another dick.
Is the whole gang bang thing going to be a recurring theme? Or was that a one time thing? The dream thing makes me think that we will see a lot more of this... I personally hope not but I would like to know. I don't mind it as a one off but as stated above if it's going to be recurring over and over that's not something I care to keep seeing or eventually participating in. I also hope that girl is not going to be a possible LI... I also agree with the earlier comment(s) about the whole foot fetish thing I personally find feet unattractive and the femdom so far it's light which is ok but I am wondering if it's going to get more aggressive or whatever? I think players should be given a choice to shape stuff like this as it's not for everyone. It's your story so up to you dev, but please without giving away any major spoilers let us know kind of what to expect so we can decide if we want to continue. Thanks and good luck.
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Hi WastedTalent! For this kinetic novel, the whole story and the ending are already written.
Sorry if some fetish are not your cup of tea.
The third chapter will be also the last one and, without spoilers, I can say that, no, there not will be another gang bang.
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Hi there developer:
Great game and I like the characters. An earlier poster provided detailed feedback about the story continuity from scenes to scenes and seems a reasonable comment. As for the LI, personally I like her very much, it shows you that the world is full of different opinions and there is no right or wrong.
I hope you continue with this "LI"character as is.
Great work.
Cheers
Great game and I like the characters. An earlier poster provided detailed feedback about the story continuity from scenes to scenes and seems a reasonable comment. As for the LI, personally I like her very much, it shows you that the world is full of different opinions and there is no right or wrong.
I hope you continue with this "LI"character as is.
Great work.
Cheers
I like what I saw the only thing for me would be that I hope to have Sex sound effects and animation during those parts and maybe some music during the other parts, but apart from that, I am looking forward 2 seeing more.