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This image was one of the first I made to promote my kinetic novel. I made it years ago, having a clear idea of what moment it represented. In the next update, Christine will make this call.
Marian is one of my first OC. Her role in the novel is still not fully revealed. It will. Soon.
longjohngold
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The language throughout was pretty poor and I'm not sure if it's down to that or just the erratic writing style, but a lot of the time I wasn't really sure what it was trying to go for. I did found it pretty humorous that this bit at the start had multiple errors, though I should have really taken that as a sign of things to come.
Because that very sentence was inserted at the very end and was not revised
.With each update I try to improve the text but there is always something to fix.
Just now I finished a re-read from top to bottom and other typos (and renderings with errors) emerged.
I know perfectly well that this is an aspect that I need to improve.
Thanks anyway for reading it.
TurhaanKoitatte
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So everyone is fucking everyone. In other words, a complete nightmare and I'm not touching this.
Hi, unfortunately I am not yet able to make the Android version.
Searching on Google I found a conversion made by others. Not being involved in the creation and not having tried it, I don't know whether to tell you to download it. Maybe some
kind spirit on the forum will make a mod for Android.
I made it myself.
The link to the android version is in the main post
Ali ibn Hassan
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Well, what I can see...I'm a really slow dev
Merry Christmas!
Merry Christmas!
duke1989
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We are expecting you. Happy Holidays!Well, what I can see...I'm a really slow dev
Merry Christmas!
So… where were we?
It’s been over a year since the last update.
A few things happened IRL, I worked on other projects (mostly comics and illustrations), wrote a bunch of stories and scripts you’ll eventually see, and started digging deeper into both DAZ and AI. I also sketched out the long story I plan to work on after Bring a Bottle of Wine.
Which, I know—you’ll say—it’s still not finished. True.
But the arrival of AI changed the way I work quite a bit, and I needed some time to adapt.
The biggest change mainly affects the translation side: for the next update I’ll be using AI tools to retranslate everything from scratch, trying to refine the writing, clarify things where I think they’re unclear, and keep things blurry where ambiguity is meant to stay.
On the visual side, those of you who’ve been following me already noticed I’ve used AI a couple of times—once for a special scene and once to create a photo of two plumber twins (I’m a prankster).
In the meantime, an entire wave of opinions about AI has emerged—something that simply didn’t exist a year ago—and I feel I should address it briefly: as a creative, I’ll use whatever tools I feel are right for me.
Back to Bring a Bottle of Wine: while working on the ending (which had always been planned a certain way), I hesitated. I spent a lot of time questioning one specific moment. Once I clarified the true nature of the project to myself, that hesitation disappeared. I finally found a solution that works for me, for what I want to tell, and for how I want to tell it.
Thanks to everyone who’s been patient.
I’ll leave you now with Bang Bang and Natalie dealing with a hole in the wall.
See you soon!
It’s been over a year since the last update.
A few things happened IRL, I worked on other projects (mostly comics and illustrations), wrote a bunch of stories and scripts you’ll eventually see, and started digging deeper into both DAZ and AI. I also sketched out the long story I plan to work on after Bring a Bottle of Wine.
Which, I know—you’ll say—it’s still not finished. True.
But the arrival of AI changed the way I work quite a bit, and I needed some time to adapt.
The biggest change mainly affects the translation side: for the next update I’ll be using AI tools to retranslate everything from scratch, trying to refine the writing, clarify things where I think they’re unclear, and keep things blurry where ambiguity is meant to stay.
On the visual side, those of you who’ve been following me already noticed I’ve used AI a couple of times—once for a special scene and once to create a photo of two plumber twins (I’m a prankster).
In the meantime, an entire wave of opinions about AI has emerged—something that simply didn’t exist a year ago—and I feel I should address it briefly: as a creative, I’ll use whatever tools I feel are right for me.
Back to Bring a Bottle of Wine: while working on the ending (which had always been planned a certain way), I hesitated. I spent a lot of time questioning one specific moment. Once I clarified the true nature of the project to myself, that hesitation disappeared. I finally found a solution that works for me, for what I want to tell, and for how I want to tell it.
Thanks to everyone who’s been patient.
I’ll leave you now with Bang Bang and Natalie dealing with a hole in the wall.
See you soon!
