Others Broken Dreams Correctional Center [v0.1.12] [RahiMew]

[ddaisy]

It certainly could be written better but the way I see it submitting to Tavi during the first encounter is supposed to be only a momentary submission. At the start of the game she's meant to be stronger than you and she uses that advantage to force you to do something, but that doesn't mean you're agreeing to be her willing slave for the rest of the game by being submissive to her during your first interaction.

 

[anon1010]

It certainly could be written better but the way I see it submitting to Tavi during the first encounter is supposed to be only a momentary submission. At the start of the game she's meant to be stronger than you and she uses that advantage to force you to do something, but that doesn't mean you're agreeing to be her willing slave for the rest of the game by being submissive to her during your first interaction.

thing is you don't even have to meet her at the beginning of the game, by the time you meet her its very possible to be stronger than her even without cheats.

either way at the end of the day man if someone doesn't want to be on the submissive end of her content why would they interact with her?

if someone does want to be submissive to her why would they play through her content all the way?

even if you make sense of it lore wise its a porn game man, most people i imagine are just gonna ignore her after finding out you're forced to play one way or another with her.

it also feels inconsistent even the way you explained it, what about all the other characters we can beat even though were supposed to be weak at the beginning? who even says were supposed to be weak? You have the option to become convicted for theft and murder so its not unreasonable to think that you have some strength.

what about having the ability to beat Risha at the very beginning of the game? if you're so weak then why is there even the possibility of beating her especially when she's portrayed to be much stronger then Tavi?

Again the design choice (so far) with Tavi is just weird man.

 

[ddaisy]

Hey can someone confirm that there are only two endings of Dr Quinn's obedience training as a male, that is either permanent chastity or making her pregnant? I want to know if I can get out of the thing without having to pay child support

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I agree with you that it feels weird, that's why I said Tavi's content could be written in a much better way.

I have similar thoughts about Rahi's content though that's a smaller problem because Rahi is not necessary to progress the plot. You're expected to be more and more dominant toward her which feels awkward when you're trying to play as a submissive character.

There's not much more to say other than the game would feel more complete if you could progress along Tavi's plot line without agreeing to be her bitch.

 

[mcmng]

I'll give my two cents about the named character discussions:
Tavi's route is made for switch characters. Purely dominant or submissive characters will have trouble going through her route because they will be forced to play the sub (at the start) and then the dom later. Rahi's route is somewhat similar: switches will enjoy her content as a whole, while purely dominant characters will skip part of her training and purely submissive characters will hate the first part of the training.

 

[amorousa]

Is this exclusively furry or are there other character portaits

 

[anon1010]

I agree with you that it feels weird, that's why I said Tavi's content could be written in a much better way.

I have similar thoughts about Rahi's content though that's a smaller problem because Rahi is not necessary to progress the plot. You're expected to be more and more dominant toward her which feels awkward when you're trying to play as a submissive character.

There's not much more to say other than the game would feel more complete if you could progress along Tavi's plot line without agreeing to be her bitch.

yeah not trying to bash you for trying to make sense of it, just adding my 2 cents to it.

Rahi's type of character is fine because its clear that that character is meant for people who want to play a dominant role. Who is Tavi meant for? People who want to play a submissive role? Then why are you forced to become her owner down the line? People who want to play a dominant role? Then why do you have to submit to her to even start her content?

Like i said before though maybe she was just developed in a weird order and is intended to not force the player down a role later on in updates?

 

[ShadowedKnight50]

Is this exclusively furry or are there other character portaits

nope there are humans, dragons, demons, to name a few.

 

[medhathobo]

Really weird how the creators self insert is totally opposite from how self inserts usually are. Not a mary sue at all. Don't think I have ever seen a trainable self insert.

 

[medhathobo]

yeah not trying to bash you for trying to make sense of it, just adding my 2 cents to it.

Rahi's type of character is fine because its clear that that character is meant for people who want to play a dominant role. Who is Tavi meant for? People who want to play a submissive role? Then why are you forced to become her owner down the line? People who want to play a dominant role? Then why do you have to submit to her to even start her content?

Like i said before though maybe she was just developed in a weird order and is intended to not force the player down a role later on in updates?

I almost 100 percent agree. I think an argument could be made for switch or sub to the point of being so dedicated that the sub wants the old Tavi back, so the sub has to use domination on someone who was purely dominant. Still really surprised and confused me when my character I made just to go through Tavi's route suddenly has to be the master. Could be fixed with options to bring out the old Tavi though submissive actions only?

From a writing perspective though, I love Tavi's story a ton. Very fleshed out, creative, and had appropriate choices during the flashback.

 

[Daba]

Is this exclusively furry or are there other character portaits

You can menage in settings how much of any races & gender you want to meet in random encounters. Story NPC are all set as furries I think.
Click "Me - Encounters - Species" and you can edit your random encounters (gender, species, etc.)
You can even make 100% random encounters to be humans and set all furies to 0%. Worked for me.
Hope this helps.

 

[wannabe Goldstein]

Is there any body who likes Nova?
She's so adorable but a little pity for being a futa while can be impregnated.So I wish if there were some function to make Nova a pure female husky.
Then escaping with'em by taking our children with in a romantic way

 

[Skooky]

Is there any body who likes Nova?
She's so adorable but a little pity for being a futa while can be impregnated.So I wish if there were some function to make Nova a pure female husky.
Then escaping with'em by taking our children with in a romantic way

I love Nova, I'm a sucker for a tender dom. And yeah, I'm one of the rare breed of coommers that never really liked futas and herms.

 

[medassin]

new update

0.1.0 - The End of Tavi's Route Update


Heya ^^. I've been very busy writing the ending for Tavi's content. But it is done ^^. There is 250+ pages/ 80k+ words of new stuff with her. A whole novel of text.. But there are also new ways to bully/get bullied by the dynamic npcs ^^. And also the chain between your ankle cuffs is now visible and not just imaginary x3. Just like the leash


So yeah. Since the game can now be completed technically.. I bumped the second number of the game version. Now is as good of a time as ever to do that x3. Obviously a completable game isn't the same as a completed game ^^.


Does that mean next updates will start a new route? Probably not. Next updates will probably be kinda directionless as I come down from this writing frenzy x3. Trust me, I wrote a lot..


Hopefully you will like the ending. There is more than one and they are drastically different.




Full changelog
Added

• Tavi's route is finished! That makes the game completable from start to the end. Will you finally escape the prison? Who knows ^^. Complete her route and find out in one of the 3 endings that are all drastically different. At least 250+ pages/80k+ words of new content in this update
• You must be registered to see the links
  Visible chains and leashes been added in most scenes that mention them ^^. (Original mod by PeteTimesSix)
• Masochism skill for Tavi. Includes a little puzzle-like minigame where you have to cause Tavi just enough pain. Don't choke her too much
• Petplay skill for Tavi. Train Tavi to become a cute puppy.
• Optional Watersports skill for Tavi. Lots of golden opportunities there..
• Ability to let Tavi sleep with you. Comes with 6 lewd scenes and ability to deny her in each
• New activities to do with Tavi: Showering and Milking. With lots of options ^^
• Special 'magic tricks' scene that unlocks when Tavi's corruption is at 200%. Lets her grow a few things ^^
• A unique Tavi+Rahi scene that happens if both Rahi and Tavi have their petplay skill maxxed out. Complete with very lewd unique animation.
• A way to see your starting perks in the skills panel. (
  You must be registered to see the links
  )
• Lots of new animations. Getting on all fours got better transitions. Better hug animation
• Choking added to procedural sex. With ability to turn it into choke-fuck (animated)
• Ability to put breast pumps on dynamic npcs during procedural sex. They can do it to you too if you're lactating ^^
• Breast groping and 2 versions of breast feeding (dom -> sub and vice versa) added to procedural sex. With animations that automatically adjust based on the breast size/muzzle length.

Fixed

• Can't keep the stocks anymore if you unlock them with a restraints key
• Typos and bug

 

[Orphanus]

I almost 100 percent agree. I think an argument could be made for switch or sub to the point of being so dedicated that the sub wants the old Tavi back, so the sub has to use domination on someone who was purely dominant. Still really surprised and confused me when my character I made just to go through Tavi's route suddenly has to be the master. Could be fixed with options to bring out the old Tavi though submissive actions only?

From a writing perspective though, I love Tavi's story a ton. Very fleshed out, creative, and had appropriate choices during the flashback.

Yeah, kinda ruined the current game content for me, honestly. I had and have 0 interest in dominating Tavi & also don't see a good reason why suddenly I should be abusive towards her and flip her content on the head. Game just arbitrarily ruined the relationship that had been built up to that point which is fairly annoying giving that so far her route is the one that supposedly got finished. :/

 

[Furmilk]

Has there been any innovation in the pregnancy system since the integration of the pregnancy mod someone made?

 

[mcmng]

Petty insults are for those wishing comfort from other individuals like them. For someone talking about hypocrisy and constructive criticisms you seem incredibly defensive when someone criticizes you. So with out insulting you I'd like to pick out some grammatical errors you've made while concomitantly denigrating me on my "Reading comprehension".

First sentence it's a constructive criticism, though that's trivial. You also forgot to punctuate correctly on the second sentence.
Fourth sentence you spelled realize incorrectly.
Fifth sentence I can't believe you would every type such a mass of jumbled up garbage.
I hope this helps you realize that you aren't practicing what you preach as the saying goes. I don't hold any animosity towards you.

Irony is too strong on this one.
Nice way to avoid addressing any of my points and instead be pedantic about grammar and punctuation.
Not trying to insult? Was that South Park reference just accidental?
And yet again you misunderstand me. I don't want you to stop. Judging by the reactions we're receiving, other thread goers are enjoying this little show you're putting up. By all means, continue to embarass yourself, we're loving it.

 

[Makarovlocust]

Irony is too strong on this one.
Nice way to avoid addressing any of my points and instead be pedantic about grammar and punctuation.
Not trying to insult? Was that South Park reference just accidental?
And yet again you misunderstand me. I don't want you to stop. Judging by the reactions we're receiving, other thread goers are enjoying this little show you're putting up. By all means, continue to embarass yourself, we're loving it.

Do you think these people are your friends? They don't care about you or me what so ever. Also don't say I'm embarrassing myself while misspelling '"embarass". If you're enjoying this dialogue because apparently I'm humiliating myself then good. Life is too short to not laugh a little, but understand why I am trying to impress upon you why understanding your actions helps one perceive the world around them better. Take care my friend.

 

[mcmng]

Do you think these people are your friends? They don't care about you or me what so ever. Also don't say I'm embarrassing myself while misspelling '"embarass". If you're enjoying this dialogue because apparently I'm humiliating myself then good. Life is too short to not laugh a little, but understand why I am trying to impress upon you why understanding your actions helps one perceive the world around them better. Take care my friend.

Someone became too self conscious to try and keep trolling, eh? It's been fun while it lasted. And don't worry about me, exposing your pathetic attempt at trolling is rewarding enough, the reaction points are just an extra.

 

[BooringSeeker]

If you choose to start with Elsa's chastity cage, it is possible to complete the chain of Tavi's escape tasks before completing the Elsa's "experiment" and choosing whether to keep the cage forever or remove it. I think it would be interesting if this moment (Escape before possible release from the cage) somehow showed up in the ending.

 

[BooringSeeker]

In general, of course, the game sorely lacks the integrity of the characters in the narrative. They seem to exist only within the framework of one current meeting, completely forgetting everything by the time of the other.
You can meet Nova, making your way through the closed corridors for apples, then beat her in the arena, and after all this, approaching her in the corridor to get a dialogue, as if you are meeting for the first time.
You can try to escape with Tavi several times, get her as your slave, but when choosing her to meet with Elsa, she will behave like a self-confident bitch from the game's start.
And this happens to almost all the characters, which knocks me out of immersion and out of the narrative.