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"CJ"LongDong

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Unofficial Bugfix v2 for v0.035 for all quoted bugs in the Spoiler (for original and compressed version)

Only use this with v0.035!!!

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Copy/extract the content of the attached archive into the "game" subfolder and overwrite when asked.
 
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Ifartedtoolong

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Aw no Riley content.:cry: When creepy looking man child and Alice are getting ready for bed the lines dim the lights down baby and I'm exhausted are spoken by Hailey instead of Alice or creepy looking man child.

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Sonico

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Yup, Alice is perfectly fine. Hell I like Riley and I'm not usually one for trap content. Hina is probably the weakest of them to me and even then she's good. Just overshadowed.
Don't know what made me laugh more - Hailey's carrot in the morning or that Alice's buttchecks are still bright pink and even though she's in a transparent negligee and black thong her husband manages to miss it.

edit: my bad, it was still the night, at the end of chapter 3.

Ok, loving the potential in Amanda too.
 
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BoltonGuy35

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For someone that has such a don't give a shit attitude and is as bad as the mc is portrayed, he certainly is taking his time getting his dick wet?
I mean hailey has pretty much begged him to get his 'carrot' out and he doesn't!!
Waaaaay to much about butt stuff so far, it's clear the dev has a thing for this but there is two holes ya'know!!
Good story but with the way the mc acts he should have had at least a wank of someone by now.
 

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Don't know what made me laugh more - Hailey's carrot in the morning or that Alice's buttchecks are still bright pink and even though she's in a transparent negligee and black thong her husband manages to miss it.

edit: my bad, it was still the night, at the end of chapter 3.
Eh, even if they were still pink I doubt Oliver would have noticed. On the beach or in the bed Oliver barely even looks at Alice. Hell the only time he does seem to focus on her is during the conversations in the living room. He's in the 'we're old, our horny days are past, everything is a staid peaceful existence' energy going on. Like something out of the 50's bottom drawer books where the milkman is boning the stay-at-home wife with the husband oblivious. How deep in denial does someone have to be not to notice something is going on with Riley? Yeah he screams FOOTBALL!
 

Smilingjack4

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I like some buildup personally. Sex scene is meaningless, it's all about corruption that makes it good
Of course the buildup is good, but now I see how from my frustrated tone of writing you'd believe I think otherwise.
So just for the record, the buildup is great, the problem is that there is nothing but buildup so far, unless you count the fooling around, which I don't because it is not a satisfying enough punchline for all the buildup even if we only count the character it was for. In fact, to me, it's more buildup, because that's the narrative purpose.
We have taken the first 2 steps on a corruption arc with 5 different characters now, something needs to move along because the pacing is dragging horribly.
 
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