- Jun 3, 2017
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So, I've have more than two dozen scenes behind me and I can already see where the main problem is.
( For this moment, I will ignore the fact that virtually every person in the city has some way to brainwash me... )
In all the scenes, I am put in a submissive role.
It doesn't matter how high my statistics are, or if it was I who took the first step.
I always allow others to do what they want with me.
I understand that the whole game is focused on this fetish, but if the game is played by someone who is not an absolute fan, very quickly it will start to be incredibly repetitive. I'm not saying this outright as a critique, because there will definitely be those who like it. I consider myself a fairly normal player without any specific relationship to any specific fetish. But I have to admit that after experiencing about a dozen scenes, I got bored because they all have an incredibly similar scenario.
You have good writing, decent pictures and interesting gameplay.
But your scenes need more variation if you don't plan to attract only a very specific audience.
How about some alternative variants of scenes where the protagonist takes control?
Trait "dominatrix", "amazon" (if you continue to exercise for a long time), our own mind control item/drug/magic or the ability to (even for scene purposes only) grow a penis and fuck a shit out of some women.
P.S.
Texts for sex scenes are written with a very "specific" way of expression.
( This is not a critique. )
You're a woman, aren't you?![Wink ;) ;)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
So, I've have more than two dozen scenes behind me and I can already see where the main problem is.
( For this moment, I will ignore the fact that virtually every person in the city has some way to brainwash me... )
In all the scenes, I am put in a submissive role.
It doesn't matter how high my statistics are, or if it was I who took the first step.
I always allow others to do what they want with me.
I understand that the whole game is focused on this fetish, but if the game is played by someone who is not an absolute fan, very quickly it will start to be incredibly repetitive. I'm not saying this outright as a critique, because there will definitely be those who like it. I consider myself a fairly normal player without any specific relationship to any specific fetish. But I have to admit that after experiencing about a dozen scenes, I got bored because they all have an incredibly similar scenario.
You have good writing, decent pictures and interesting gameplay.
But your scenes need more variation if you don't plan to attract only a very specific audience.
How about some alternative variants of scenes where the protagonist takes control?
Trait "dominatrix", "amazon" (if you continue to exercise for a long time), our own mind control item/drug/magic or the ability to (even for scene purposes only) grow a penis and fuck a shit out of some women.
P.S.
Texts for sex scenes are written with a very "specific" way of expression.
( This is not a critique. )
You're a woman, aren't you?