Brother please invest in some legs lol the game looks good but the girls all have a fat ass and no legs. Kinda looks like they have BBL
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Idk, I suppose it's 20 min long at this moment (v0.1). Longer if you take your time to fap?
It's pretty condensed / pacing is quite fast, no walls of text or smthng.
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Yeah, but the ball was dropped a bit on the English, a bit too many mistakes really. Dunno the origin of dev, some of those are forgivable I suppose, but others were rather sloppy (which anyone could spot reading through it). Makes me wonder how much one actually cares about their game (in it for (all) the right reasons?) (Of course I'm giving the benefit of the doubt here.)
But well, let's see, I did enjoy it & the right ingredients seem to be there. They should get someone with proper English writing skills involved, otherwise I suppose I may be at it again when v0.2 arrives
(I don't mind proofreading, but can't / don't want to make hard promises time/availability wise (but shouldn't take too much time per episode I suppose, and I could do it on the fly while playing through it.))
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Oh, really? I'm not a native English speaker, so I can't judge all that. But for me, I could completely understand what was going on in each line, and I found the story really fun, relaxing, and even reflective at times.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying there aren’t any mistakes. I just mean that, at least for me, the dialogue was enjoyable, and it was totally understandable what the speaker was trying to convey.
I think it’s kind of you to offer to fix them, but that’s between you and the dev to figure out, haha.
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