I like the update... I see you read the post
First of all, I´m not a nativ english speaker, so sorry for any errors.
I really like the game, it remembers me a bit of
SunshineValley from
Gildan (not that I say it is a copy, but from the spirit); or something like
CSO.
If I can give a tip: It is great to have some early content to appease the critques. But maybe later rework the Julia (road hooker) Scene. Why? You need some progression for MC, for that I would just add a condom... Something like a tier System: (1) Sex with condom, (2) Sex without a condom + pull out, (3) Sex without a condom and CIP. But maybe change it later when you have time, like update 0.7 etc... It is just a minor thing.
@
Prickly Team: Can I ask you something? As I ask a fellow developer (see
here):
(1) Why add Character Stats? I like the good vs evil idea, because it change the dialog a bit, which is a easy and a GOOD way to add content. But why add something like Chrisma, Intelligence, Strangth? Currently I don't really understand what you are going for with the skill mechanics? Because they fall often under two extrems:
(a) Fast skilling to the top. Where you add "build x.x.x.x.5" and you are already max out. And for the rest of the story it doesn't really matter (present-day Summertime Saga or
World of Sisters is a good example for this). Which ask the question: why waste resources on it?
(b) A disguesting grind, which leads me go on a search for config.developer and set "config.console = True" or
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to cheese my way out of it.
(2) Do you want add a story and a plot to the game? Or will it be character based short stories? I would go for the first, that way you have a bigger difference to SummerTime Saga (which is more or less just short stories). What I mean with it? I mean, make a main story, an main arc in the game. Something like:
Prologue:
MC comes to camp, and meets some of the characters. Forgets swimsuit. Rose makes a prank on Lucy (like in the game). MC finds out that Camp Hill Range has a rival:
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for snobby rich kids. MC meets meangirls from the rich kid camp (on the other side of the lake). One of the hot meangirls flirts with MC (Amber), the boyfriend (Bradford) of the girl gets angry (a young Ted McGinley look-alike). He will be the main rival for MC.
Act 1:
Annual Camp Olympics will come soon. MC must win the
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, the girls must win swimming-, beach volleyball, music-contest, carnival games, etc... or the Bruce Campbell look-alike 'president of the universal/american camp administration' will shut down camp hill range. Sheila and Director are desperate.
Act 2: Preparation at Camp hill range. MC tries to help the other character, wacky hijinks accrue: MC gets injured, hot nurse (
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) helps him, gets boner during the examination, how embarrasing.
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, MC must get money for the raft (MC must win singing/striping contest at local radio/streaming-station (model is already in the map), Julia helps him. Hot nurse makes Sex-Ed course, paints a stylized uterus on her stomach, shows how condoms work, shows her diaphragm. She is a trooper.
Side Quest: The meangirls raid the girls of the camp. Girls must come together and plan revenge. Rose and Lucy work together to raid in 'face camo strips' their stuff back. Rose of course wears her pink outfit, just with the face paint.
Rose and Lucy work together and make it. Rose finds out, that Bradford is in the camp. Which is also the guy which leaked fotos of her (see prologue). Rose goes back and planes revange. Rose apologizes to Lucy, we dont know if Lucy accept it.
Side Quest: Maggie must find the courage to play the flute in front of audience. Ashley tries to help her. Suggestion from Ashley: She need to flash her naked ass, so that she is no longer afraid.
Side Quest: MC must get a bikini for his sister. Finds one, its to small for her, looks like a 1/4 bra.
End of Act 2: MC finds out - with help of Julia (voyeur scene) - that the Bruce Campbell look-alike is in cahoots with rich kid camp (Bradford). Everything seems lost.
Act 3: Camp Olympics starts. MC gets sabotaged before the race. Snobby rich kids from the camp firewood raid and steal the unterwear of MC, Sister, Tiffany, etc.. MC must run the race almost naked only with his
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and an old orange life vest. Snobby rich kids get arrogant, because the think the already won. They make a party, MC and crew raid the party, steal some clothes. Rose takes her revange and makes some embarrassing fotos of Bradford.
Meanwhile: The other charcters (Lucy) win some of the their contest (beach volleyball, pie-eating, etc..). Camp Firewood starts to cheat in the rest of the carnival games and wins. All comes down to the raft race.
The 'president of the universal/american camp administration' try to blow up the river. Rose almost stops him, thats why the explosion re-routs the river through the house of the 'president of the universal/american camp administration', your team of misfits wins, as they bouce through the house to the finish-line.
Bradford comes in second. Camp Firewood losses. The 'president of the universal/american camp administration' is angry af. Goes to Bradford and tells him what happends. Bradford tries to hit Rose, but in the last second Lucy kicks his balls. "nobody hits a friend of mine". Bradford lies fetal postion on the ground and blames Lucy for assault. Rose comes by and shows the foto and dreads him to make the foto public. But she will not come down to his level, if he just shuts up. Bradford gives in. The 'president of the universal/american camp administration' is still totally wet (form the explosion) and must give the director and Sheila the tophy. Camp Hill Range wins. Freezframe on Nicole which holds the trophy.
Endcredits: A slide show with still Pictures (with the name of the patreons) of girls playing beachvolleyball (tits flipped out). Girls get splashed with water = tits show through. MC gets slinter in Boner Ashely takes it out. Craft falls down a waterfall, crew holds on barley, tits are out of course.
Something like this. I think if you go more the fun 80´s
Five of Kind route, it will be overall better. I think for example World of Sisters has some fun characters but it fells short in the story department (is feels more like skits), even I like the "MC falls and accidentally slips in his mom" .
Better would it be, if he just came in a sec, and she looks like "WTF" just happend. He flips out, she just calmy says to him "nextime at least warn me."
Personal note: I like that your Charackter have a unique hairstyle. Me personaly I like the style of the moms in
Gunpowder Cocktail and in
Bad Bob Saga. You mention in a later update that Mom & Sister wil be an option (update 0.10), thats I didn´t know If I should add incest to my second napkin pitch. If so just ask, I will think of something. By the way If you need a any help just ask, would be glad to help. Like writing a walkthrough or a german transplation. By the way I made a character chart and change the mom a bit, because I think she was to close to Shaila (the Ear-ring looks cool).