Ren'Py Campus Bonds [v0.2] [MCVisualNovels]
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It has somewhere between 1:30:00 to 2:00:00 hours, depending on your reading time. It has 1893 renders.
- Mar 20, 2018
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Thank you for awnser, i was asking the total of the game because sometimes you see a game with 5k render and are 5k of BS that adds nothing to the story. I'll give it a try to your game.
Best of lucky with it!
Thanks, I hope you enjoy it! The first 2 episodes are pretty much intros and set ground for the future ones to come. As some people have said, the plot isn't really strong yet.
I think the three things I have for feedback are:
1. Sometimes the dialogue can feel too stiff, with how characters feel too robotic sometimes, with responses like okay, etc. So I feel dialogue could use some slight improvement. To go along with this sometimes starting specific topics, for example when sadies starts the convo at party, and others. Just feels like somtimes things could flow better in dialogue and how we get there.
2. Transitons feel, weird sometimes. Like the jump to Library, when you run into Francesca, felt off cause the scene jumped randomly. The kiss with Francesca felt out of nowhere to an extent.So some scenes need better jumps to new scenes or transitions.
3. Finally the sex scene menus. The menu comes up after it runs through the whole scene, then you have to click each option before you can cum and finish the scene.i think either, having the menu at the start, or putting rhe cum option instantly in there so we don't have to go through the same scenes again that we already saw during sex.
Other then this solid game, really like some of the characters and excited to see where these relationships go.
1. Sometimes the dialogue can feel too stiff, with how characters feel too robotic sometimes, with responses like okay, etc. So I feel dialogue could use some slight improvement. To go along with this sometimes starting specific topics, for example when sadies starts the convo at party, and others. Just feels like somtimes things could flow better in dialogue and how we get there.
2. Transitons feel, weird sometimes. Like the jump to Library, when you run into Francesca, felt off cause the scene jumped randomly. The kiss with Francesca felt out of nowhere to an extent.So some scenes need better jumps to new scenes or transitions.
3. Finally the sex scene menus. The menu comes up after it runs through the whole scene, then you have to click each option before you can cum and finish the scene.i think either, having the menu at the start, or putting rhe cum option instantly in there so we don't have to go through the same scenes again that we already saw during sex.
Other then this solid game, really like some of the characters and excited to see where these relationships go.
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- Sep 3, 2020
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exactly and I 100% agree because I can't read I couldn't explain what was wrong with the dialogue sometimes
honestly I'm just grateful that I can even play these games so I don't really focus on the dialog problems
- Mar 23, 2018
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I've found 7/8 photos at Noah's house party. Anyone have all eight of them?
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I must have because I can't click on anything. I've checked the bathroom, bedroom, hallway, kitchen, and both living room parts.
There are 2 photos near the drawer in the bedroom, 1 in the bedroom, 1 in the hallway, 1 in the kitchen, 1 near the sofa, 1 on the table next to the couch and 1 in the kitchen.
- Oct 29, 2021
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Nice game so far, good characters...and actually some likeable friends 
Some interesting ladys, thought most didn't get too much screen time so far.
Olivia and Tracy are my favorites so far, thought Alice also seems interesting.
MCVisualNovels can you say which are the LI's with paths ?
Some interesting ladys, thought most didn't get too much screen time so far.
Olivia and Tracy are my favorites so far, thought Alice also seems interesting.
MCVisualNovels can you say which are the LI's with paths ?
Hey! Thank you for the nice words. Right now, I'm kind of circling around them because I have plans for all of them but not all of them deserve to be LIs. What I can say is that there will be 7 LIs from which 6 are already set. There's the last one which I'm not entirely sure who to give it to.Nice game so far, good characters...and actually some likeable friends
Some interesting ladys, thought most didn't get too much screen time so far.
Olivia and Tracy are my favorites so far, thought Alice also seems interesting.
MCVisualNovels can you say which are the LI's with paths ?
- Oct 17, 2022
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Hey.
Just recently got some time to play the game. So here's some feedback from me as well.
Also I didn't get through the thread yet, so if some issues were already mentioned here - my apologies.
1) I like the story-pace, relaxing, enjoyable, nothing major really happens at least as of right now, but it feels like there will be big boom soon)) heh, intriguing
2) While I am usually indiferent to lewds in games, - story and characters always come first, but, damn, animations here are really of a high quality, and very "juicy", hot.
Also I remembered small non-lewd animation when we are in a cafe with Sadie - she takes food, chews it, I don't really see this type of animation that much, so I was watching it for a while like mesmerised heh.
Going back to lewds - this whole thing with repeating all positions to finish got me confused a bit, toke some time to realise that we have to try every position again including the one before this menu appears.
On top of that - it would be fine if it was only about repeating animations but along with that we also get the same dialogues over again, which kinda breaks immersion and kills the atmosphere a bit, at least it was like this for me.
3) I like how we can shape MC's personality in a 1st chapter, cool mechanics, so when some choices doesn't fit - it's greyed out.
4) In 1st chapter sometimes it was very noticeable how lifeless expressions LIs had in conversations, the one I remembered the most - talk with Cleo in a cafe, MC tells her that they met on a train, and she is surprised like "ohhhhh, right", but her expression barely changed, only lips moved a bit. Though it gets better in general in 2nd chapter, don't remember any such issues which is great.
5) I played 3 major routes (from my prespective):
- Sadie solo
- Tracy solo
- man-whore route (fucked both Sadie/Tracy at parties alongside with a party-chick blow).
So, on a man-whore path, at the beginning I chose Sadie over Tracy, and so Sadie helped me to get to the party when a bouncer stoped us.
BUT, during the next party (Noah's house) I got this convo with Tracy:
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And after the party at Sadie's apartment I got this talk:
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So, I guess some variables weren't counted.
6) Free-roams were fine, didn't have any problems with it, I like how some dialogues during free-roams change if you do events in different order. Pretty cool.
7) About the LIs (only my humble opinion of course)
I assume that 6 girls we have in a gallery are main LIs, so out of main LIs I like the most 3:
- Sadie
- Tracy
- Scarlett.
When it comes to look, Tracy would be my 1st one, absolutely stunning, unfortunately I guess it becomes a usual thing that every time we're with her we smoke weed and get "high" sex, probably so far that would be my biggest (and the only one) disappointment in a game or rather frustration. Cause it's smth that doesn't really appeal to me. Still love her character a lot though and gonna play her route.
Scarlett - damn, I like how bitchy she is, definitely my type hahah. Can't wait to get more scenes with her.
Sadie is so easy going and fun to hang out, just like Tracy, just without this whole drug stuff. I like the way she is.
8) Some choices are mystery to me - I mean, I have no idea whether it improved RP with a LI or not, especially with Scarlett. And while at this moment it probably doesn't impact story significantly - It will in future. I guess that's on me for not being perceptive enough, but it would be great to have some hint-system in a game.
In general I enjoyed playing it a lot, I hope everything works fine eventually and the game will continue.
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Great game!
Did you get inspiration from Being a DIK? I see a lot of similarities, I really love the college thematic, so keep up the good work!
Cheers!
Did you get inspiration from Being a DIK? I see a lot of similarities, I really love the college thematic, so keep up the good work!
Cheers!
Thanks! I'd be lying if I said I didn't, it's been my favourite game for a long time.