Let's be frank this game is nothing but a click fest to show off porn/hypno gifs/videos. The story rushes into things so fast that it makes no real sense. There is no real sense of progression in it. You just go through the daily and weekly routine until you get to the next point.
My first question to the developer is, what the fuck is up with all the fades and blurs, it gets really annoying real fast. You just get into this rhythm that you end up knowing where all the buttons are before they even show up. If the fades where faster maybe it wouldn't be an issue.
The next thing is the writing, now I'm not one to harp on anyone if English is a second language but I really recommend finding an editor or writer, which I do btw, either way it's not horrible, you can still make out what is meant to be said, it can just be a little jarring.
And another question, why did the call girl stuff get dropped after the boobjob? I get that she was only doing it for the boobs, but then her outlook on things after the boobs tells me she probably wouldn't stop, but instead we are left with clinic work ($25), landlord maid ($30), Babysitter ($35), and webcam ($25), every day, that's it. Where as call girl was making $50, $100, or even $400 in a single event. Hell the clinic money went down too before the tits you made anywhere from $35 to $50 in a day, now it's a flat $25, that is like punishing your players for progressing in the story.
In the end, the game is short, I know it's unfinished, the visuals are nice, the story is ok at best, the writing isn't that great, it becomes a click fest, not even really a grind because aside from makeup you have nothing to spend money on, and to top it all off it punishes players for progressing in the story.
My first question to the developer is, what the fuck is up with all the fades and blurs, it gets really annoying real fast. You just get into this rhythm that you end up knowing where all the buttons are before they even show up. If the fades where faster maybe it wouldn't be an issue.
The next thing is the writing, now I'm not one to harp on anyone if English is a second language but I really recommend finding an editor or writer, which I do btw, either way it's not horrible, you can still make out what is meant to be said, it can just be a little jarring.
And another question, why did the call girl stuff get dropped after the boobjob? I get that she was only doing it for the boobs, but then her outlook on things after the boobs tells me she probably wouldn't stop, but instead we are left with clinic work ($25), landlord maid ($30), Babysitter ($35), and webcam ($25), every day, that's it. Where as call girl was making $50, $100, or even $400 in a single event. Hell the clinic money went down too before the tits you made anywhere from $35 to $50 in a day, now it's a flat $25, that is like punishing your players for progressing in the story.
In the end, the game is short, I know it's unfinished, the visuals are nice, the story is ok at best, the writing isn't that great, it becomes a click fest, not even really a grind because aside from makeup you have nothing to spend money on, and to top it all off it punishes players for progressing in the story.