VN Ren'Py Captive Consciousness [v0.2.0a] [TinyDogStudio]

[TinyDogStudio]

Releasing v0.2.0 at about halfway completion, hence the "a" for alpha. The mother and daughter only got a story update this chapter, so focus was primarily on lewd scenes with Hailey (pink hair) and Maya (gym girl). Maya's pool scene requires both Hailey and Alice to be on Captivation route for future story purposes (MFFF), otherwise it's a shower scene. Hailey's fingering scene requires Clarity route (non-camgirl decision route).

Scene with Alice (blonde) is currently underway and the teacher scene is in brainstorming stages right now. That will wrap up v0.2.0. Hope ya'll enjoy...

 

[onefingersalute]

hmmm im not sure if i played this yet or not me wonders but me willing to play old yee VN

 

[piraterauf]

I saw the horror tag and was very surprised.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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[boobsrcool]

With how messy his office is, and with the way he looks, can't help but think the Dev based this guy off of Dave Meltzer of The Wrestling Observer. Hey, if he starts giving AEW Matches Billions of Stars, then I know for sure.

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[Forestmarko]

My good lad dev.
You either use their thoughts or use the narrator - using them both is just pure bad writing.
Narrator the way you are using him will only serve to break immersion - if you absolutely need to use him, do so to point out things that cant be done through characters (eg, I can see that she crossed her legs, you made a slide for it.. I really dont need the extra text..)

Right from the start you have a prime example (several really.. but one is enough):

Spoiler: bad narrator example

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You got something interesting cooking here, dont ruin it by insisting to follow outdated rules for book writing - AVN really arent the same

 

[MagicMan753]

I like this game, but am very conflicted. I really want a Harem, but don't want it to be about corruption and stuff like that. I want a harem full of love not corruption.

Idk, the corruption aspect being the only way to get the harem is kind of off putting, disappointing, and a letdown. Really wished this was changed.

 

[goulet1995]

Releasing v0.2.0 at about halfway completion, hence the "a" for alpha. The mother and daughter only got a story update this chapter, so focus was primarily on lewd scenes with Hailey (pink hair) and Maya (gym girl). Maya's pool scene requires both Hailey and Alice to be on Captivation route for future story purposes (MFFF), otherwise it's a shower scene. Hailey's fingering scene requires Clarity route (non-camgirl decision route).

Scene with Alice (blonde) is currently underway and the teacher scene is in brainstorming stages right now. That will wrap up v0.2.0. Hope ya'll enjoy...

will it be possible to be on the harem route but not have lesbian/bi stuff during threesomes

 

[mdmnsjs1]

well theres a bug right off the bat at the beginning of this update it has a list of 5 girls 2 are in develoment and one of mine is blacked out ive clicked the other 2 and then theres no way to progress from there

 

[Krepax]

A strangely... captivating AVN this one (yes, pun intended! )

Although, I do share the criticism about the writing or the plot (I've seen weirder stuff lurking in here for a long time!) but the tempo, the presence of a narrator and some other quirks. A little rewriting of certain passages would probably make the first chapter a bit more... welcoming to the reader.

Overall a rather good first effort from the author.

 

[Raziel_8]

I like this game, but am very conflicted. I really want a Harem, but don't want it to be about corruption and stuff like that. I want a harem full of love not corruption.

Idk, the corruption aspect being the only way to get the harem is kind of off putting, disappointing, and a letdown. Really wished this was changed.

Yeah, i'm not a large fan of corruption myself, especially for Hailey, where the corruption path is being a cam-girl...that's really not what i want for a harem.

 

[Punto]

I like Sharron

 

[Punto]

I can't get any further here?

 

[ShamedAgain]

Game crash during Naomi's school help assignment request:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While processing text tag {/i} in 'And her breasts look massive...{/i})'.:
Exception: '/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "dialogue.rpyc", line 832, in script call
  File "dialogue.rpyc", line 832, in script call
  File "dialogue.rpyc", line 832, in script call
  [Previous line repeated 2 more times]
  File "dialogue.rpyc", line 3889, in script
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 2573, in execute
    Say.execute(self)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 615, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\exports\sayexports.py", line 132, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1455, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1106, in do_display
    display_say(who,
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\character.py", line 803, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 301, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2215, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2879, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 1381, in draw_screen
    surftree = renpy.display.render.render_screen(
  File "render.pyx", line 486, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 900, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 900, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 900, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 754, in render
    child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 900, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1457, in render
    surf = render(child,
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 900, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\text\text.py", line 2604, in render
    virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\text\text.py", line 733, in __init__
    self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
  File "H:\Media\Games\Porn\CC-v0.2.0a-pc\renpy\text\text.py", line 1275, in segment
    raise Exception("%r closes a text tag that isn't open." % text)
Exception: '/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.3.3.24111502
Captive Consciousness v0.2.0a
Tue Feb 18 20:26:00 2025

 

[TinyDogStudio]

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Appreciate the feedback. Honestly I agree it's weird writing lines like that with the Narrator saying things for the character. I don't think it flows well either. It probably wouldn't hurt to lean more into character inner thoughts and rely less on the Narrator.

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I hear you. As far as corruption stuff goes though I think things will remain pretty vanilla. In my mind at this time I just imagine the captivation "corruption" route meaning girls will participate in MFF or FF scenes. But I don't have any dark or sinister plans for them like some other more intense corruption games do. I may ultimately end up removing the corruption tag from planned genres. I will have to see how the story goes.

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At this point enough people have said they don't like the camgirl bit that I may just remove it completely. I really only planned on it being an excuse to have the main character and her break the ice over sexual topics... Maybe would have one or two scenes where she uses it as an excuse to do stuff with the MC. After that it would just be a thing of the past. But I get how people find it distasteful to even have her consider it at all. I will have to think about some alternate thing... maybe just selling nudes on OnlyFans or something isn't as looked down upon... maybe non-nude and no-face?! I don't know.

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Weird! I made sure to enable some flags so that those options should be greyed out. The game is supposed to automatically proceed at that point. But that is the end of the update anyways! It just returns to the Main Menu from there.

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Thank you! I have fixed the italics bracket.

 

[fajiker145]

At this point enough people have said they don't like the camgirl bit that I may just remove it completely. I really only planned on it being an excuse to have the main character and her break the ice over sexual topics... Maybe would have one or two scenes where she uses it as an excuse to do stuff with the MC. After that it would just be a thing of the past. But I get how people find it distasteful to even have her consider it at all. I will have to think about some alternate thing... maybe just selling nudes on OnlyFans or something isn't as looked down upon... maybe non-nude and no-face?! I don't know.

Could it not include her showing her holes to anyone with an internet connection? I doubt most people see much difference between camgirls and onlyfans whores.
Make her be curious about porn or something since you really just want the mc to find her masturbating or something dumb like that yeah?
Either way I hope we can avoid her and still get on the harem route.

 

[Raziel_8]

At this point enough people have said they don't like the camgirl bit that I may just remove it completely. I really only planned on it being an excuse to have the main character and her break the ice over sexual topics... Maybe would have one or two scenes where she uses it as an excuse to do stuff with the MC. After that it would just be a thing of the past.

Ah ok, so it was only supposed one or two scenes, well that is a bit better.
Thought, if you wanted it only to break the ice why not use something as the MC catching her watching porn, seeing her browser history, or speaking about her friend who is a cam-girl ?
Encouraging her to do her to do cam-shows just so she feels comfortable speaking about sexual topics seems a bit like putting the cart before the horse.

Make her be curious about porn or something since you really just want the mc to find her masturbating or something dumb like that yeah?

I mean, in the latest update she doesn't seems to have a problem to wear a see through nightie infront of the MC and him masturbating her...she doesn't seems to be that shy, or that it would be a problem speaking about sexual topics after that.

 

[Krepax]

Does anyboidy else mentioned that Hailey's in the flashback looked very cute? Much better with long dark hair... I hope it will be possible in a future to see her go back to her hold style.

 

[Rockero_69]

Hi TinyDogStudio Have important questions, will there be content and a harem ending?
and is the content forced or can it be avoided? by this I mean some fetishes or tags that are sometimes presented in the game that are not to everyone's liking such as lesbians, ntr, femdom, etc.

 

[dedalo_69]

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