Sennistrasz
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- Oct 6, 2020
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I don't understand what you don't understand... it is pretty clear:Who even is the MC here? Didn't get to choose a name and choices seem to be just in general.
That could be a good idea for the next episode with her in the futurecmon dev. One more scene where her BF sitting on the cuck chair and watching how MC fuck his girl. This should be Main Event of this game! Perfect ending for this nice netori avn
Thank you LoGyMW, I totally understand no problem. I am glad that you enjoy my main project at leastCool premise for those who want it, personally im not into cheating or corruption which this is so i will pass considering you can't resist said things and will stick with your main project which i enjoyed so far
Thanks a lot for your feedbacks!OK, this first chapter was a fun little romp.
The girl was visually appealling, the setting is super hot and I'm sure it will lead to even spicier situations.
However, I have 3 big negative remarks to make:
-Kat's evolution was moving at a reasonable pace until the moment he decided to get naked to encourage her to do the same, and she was OK with that. That made absolutely 0 sense taking into account all the previous interactions, including the previous choice right before that point.
- Please, forget about those sexual pseudo-animations that repeat for a few times or force you to click several times to move on. If you want to make looped-render animations, make them into an endless loop that plaus at a normal speed, and so that a single left click ends them.
- Finally and most importantly, please, cut down on the verbose descriptions during sex scenes. It is nice to get an insight into what the characters are feeling and thinking, but in my opinion you went overboard with that. It ends up being really repetitive and overwhelming.
I'm glad to see you are considering feedback here, but I want to say that I altogether enjoyed the content in the most recent update. I will be sticking around to see where this goes.Thanks a lot for your feedbacks!
I see what you mean for the naked part. I wanted to accelerate the pace at some point but maybe I could have been a bit less « bull ».
And in my mind she was aroused by him so that could explain her shift. Maybe I should explain more what’s going on with her thoughts at this moment…
I agree with your other 2 points. Though I find quite difficult the balance between saying enough things to describe the actions/thoughts and saying too much.
But I will definitely improve for the next chapter!
Thank you, I am glad that you liked it!Perfect game for me <3
Thanks a lot psychedevil! I hope you will also like the next ones too!I'm glad to see you are considering feedback here, but I want to say that I altogether enjoyed the content in the most recent update. I will be sticking around to see where this goes.
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