VN - Ren'Py - Casual Desires [v0.20] [ionDivvy]

Version 0.9b.

Way too much incessant dialogue! It's so tedious and irrelevant i just stopped reading after a while.

Sexy side characters. I'm not a fan of the MC model - her face looks like a plastic doll.

The dialogue choices don't seem to influence much, or affect story beyond showing specific kink scenes (often M-F or F-F?).

The MC's corruption feels sudden and artificial. At least there is a fair bit of sexual content. Often from the side characters.

Overall boring and not one i'll spend any more time on.

Bit on the boring side. Main girl talks to herself a lot, there are few scenes where she talks to other people, but it's not really worth pushing to see where she goes.

Character models are great. Love Haruka, even if I didn't see much content with her through the first couple of chapters.

Overall not my cup of tea.

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1. This one has some really nice 3dcg in it.

2. I am very grateful for the hard work.

3. It became the awfullest click fest of non important bullshit dialogue that I have ever had to click through.

I started the game paying great attention to the dialogue, expecting some sort of erotic content to pop up anytime, but soon learned that this would not be the case, and I began just hammering the space bar trying to get through all the laboriously long and unimportant dialogue in the hopes of seeing something erotic from the main character.

Which kind of finally does sort of happen, but by then I was so burnt out from the long winded dialogue that I found no pleasure in these very, very few erotic scene's.

4. Happy to have found this one, and I am glad many of you enjoy the full length tale of two cities novel that is in this one, but I did not find it that enjoyable (Lengthy dialogue wise).

I did however truly like the few erotic 3DCG scenes I found in this ( very well done, no animations though that I saw or was so bored and my mind did not acknowledge them. ). I was just to discouraged by all the mostly non essential dialogue to truly enjoy them as much as I should have. ( basically felt like I had finally removed a great burden once I had muddled through to the end )

Just my opinion every one has one

5. It is not totally finished though, and as best i can tell they are still working on it, so It might get better.

Just for me the long winded burdensome dialogue need to be toned way down.

I liked the artwork and the escalation of sexual experimentation by the characters was hot, but the rest of the game suffers terribly from being stupefyingly dull.

The characters are vacuous. Virtually all of their conversations center on the weather and food. Even characters who are supposed to be best friends have absolutely nothing interesting to say to one another. They don't gossip, argue about social issues, or discuss any topic that might be remotely interesting to the player.

Each character is embarking on her own path of sexual exploration. This should provide for all kinds of potentially interesting developments, but there is no story progression or any discernible plot, at least as of chapter 9.

I understand that "real life" can also be quite dull and uninteresting, and I'm guessing that the developer would say this dullness is deliberate in order to evoke realism. Even so, good characters need to be fleshed out in a way that people find intriguing. What motivates these characters? Who were they before we met them in the game? If we could get more of a glimpse into these characters' inner lives and if the dialogue could include real conversations between people who are supposed to be friends, then all the stuff that happens in between the lewd scenes would be as interesting to look at as the sex.

I would also echo what some reviewers have noted about the overly large penises by the male characters in this title. These guys are all lugging giant donkey cocks around. It's absurd. Just as there is some variety in breast size and body shape among the female characters, it would be nice to have a better spread of schlong sizes among the males.

Version Played: 0.81

Right off the bat, this featured some gorgeous renders and has one of my all-time fav themes of corruption from a female MC perspective.
In practice, and as another player pointed out, it sadly falls flat. The MC detachedly narrates what's happening and her reasoning and decisions to slut it up leads very much to a decidedly "men writing women" experience. To its credit, the frequency and intensity of those decisions are left up to the player including the ability to play a girl-only experience. Now, I'm certainly not expecting Nobel Prize in Literature tier writing, but something about it just feels off and the MC never really sells me on her desires or real sexual enjoyment either. Oddly, the two side girls (Violet and Luna) have slightly stronger writing and motivations.

Positives:
+ Main girls are all very cute (MC Rita is kinda weird-looking, but still really cute)
+ Lots of care paid to the renders (I especially love the care given to putting the girls in different clothing)
+ Great sex situation renders and some really hot scenes


Negatives:
- Writing for female characters feels off
- No gallery/event viewer
- Dudes are all a little too hung -- if everyone is huge, no one is huge
- No bush...(the writer even goes out of their way to say why on one girl...)

At the end of the day, the game is still very much recommended for fans of this kind of content and the care put into everything is evident.
It just needs that extra push to really take it up a notch.

Like it? Try!: The Chloe 18 series (though also unabashedly "men writing women" Chloe comes across as much more secretly(?) depraved and into what she gets herself into), Good Girl Gone Bad (this might be the "Queen" of this genre due to the depth of choices and quality of writing)
Note to Devs: Might be a little hard at this stage, but if you have access to women who wouldn't be weirded the fuck out by it, you could ask them for tips to make the characters (particularly Rita) more believeable.

This game does a lot right - beautiful CGs, hot female MCs, interesting scenarios, etc. However, the characters are poorly developed as they come across empty/robotic. For example, the introductory character motivation of the primary MC is "I am an adult now, therefore, I should be sexual." I'm not expecting the devs to be Shakespeare, but this game could be something truly great if the writing was improved.

review against v0.7b

I don't have a bad thing to say about this game.

I know that's a weird way of starting a review but I was really expecting something to make me stop after a spell, and nothing ever came. So the fact I've got nothing bad to say is a big fucking plus for the game in general

I had a look and thought it was a bit "cute-y" and would probably fall into the trap of wanting a pay off immediately so your MC is riding everything like a beast into battle within 10 lines of dialogue but the pacing is sound. It's your standard girl coming (heh) into her own simulator, you've got the option of playing it as a wee innocent flower or going a bit more hands on. I went hands on cause I was curious to see how the character would change and it's actually not bad. There's hints she's actually been a bit.....deviant like and is looking to try new things so her suddenly becoming a model and showing a bit of an exhibitionist streak is not that absurd to suggest bad writing.

The game itself actually revolves around a bundle of different girls, two of which you control (I think...). I'm unsure if the game is better for that or whether it would have made more sense to stick with one character and pad them out but again, the pacing is solid that jumping between character isn't jarring.

Visuals are good, the writing is enjoyable and the pacing is such that you're not wading through a hundred scenes just to see some tits.

Definitely one worth following

Played the game for about 2 hours. Not a bad game at all. 5 years ago it would have been in my top 10.

The storyline progresses in a somewhat jittery fashion. The mc starts doing life events without much prior introduction to the characters or those parts of her life. The few sex scenes I saw were alright, but the mc's face seems a bit... off to me. Which is odd, as I don't feel the same for the other characters I have seen so far.

So, I would say it's worth a shot, but there are more engaging games available at the moment. Best of luck to the devs!

Version Reviewed 0.7b

I finished playing through this version but I needed to take some time to consider my review as I couldn't pin down why the game wasn't particularly engaging.

There are games that are a slow burn...but the story is engaging enough to move it along. Games where you are caught up in the story. But there's no real conflict here to move the story along. It's more along the lines of "should I engage in xyz corrupt action or not."

The lack of conflict becomes more apparent as the game progresses. The MC isn't dealing with any conflict within their own thoughts. She wants to experience new things and is determined to do so. There are no repercussions for her actions which would be a source of conflict. Consequently, the game is a bit boring to get through. There's not much going on here while the MC considers how she is going to corrupt herself...and she does a LOT of thinking on her own. You do have some choices as to how you'd like to proceed as the MC (and her friends) wish to corrupt themselves with both men and women.

The graphics are very good, the gameplay in terms of choices are acceptable. Kudos to the author for the concept of having a number of intelligent female protagonists that have self-agency. I can't recommend this game but I can't trash it either.

If I had to describe this in one word, it would be "meh."

Graphics - 9/10
Animations - n/a
Story - 5/10
Characters - 5/10
Engaging - 5/10

Amazing game. It has a great development, with a beautiful exhibitionism fetish. It has good options for paths the player can choose to follow. The design of the female characters is wonderful, Luna is super cute. I look forward to seeing more and more lesbian scenes among these adorable characters.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
-Nice Renders
-Nice Story
-lots of different scenes
-like the animations
-Long Game Play

Cons:
-Nothing

Conclusion:

loved playing this game,lots of different paths and scenes and pretty ladies,and boy are they horny.
my favorite scenes was I believe chapter 7 with the swinger couple,play it a couple of time through.
v0.6 was really worth the download.

Promising all I like regarding corruption and young innocent girl willing to fall into depravity.
I also like the pace of the game (I do not like when the pace is to fast) : innocence takes time to be corrupted...

Nice game! Not the best one I ever played but in its genre (female MC corruption) this is definitely one of the better ones!

What makes this game different from most female protagonist games is that the MC is not just some naive passive girl who's being abused by everyone. Instead you play an inexperienced but also kinky, naughty and curious young girl. All the lewd stuff that happens is initiated by yourself. None of that "Oh no, I'm being groped by a stranger! What should I do?'" bullshit. Very refreshing!

On top of that the female characters look adorable as hell! And the renders are high quality as well. The rhyme was not intended, but still poetic you can tell.

Lastly the story is... well pretty much what you can expect from a female corruption game. It's not great but still relatively good. The build-up is slow and steady (the way it should be) and the double protagonist adds a nice touch. While Rita's corruption is still going slow we got Violet to provide for the kinkier stuff.

(Review based on 0.4b)

I was pleasantly surprised with this game. It's about female protagonist that willingly explore her sexual fantasies. Sometimes it's nice to play a game without blackmail and without MC being way too stupid. Still, it has some minor problems, but overall I liked this game so I hope it will continue to deliver.


Pros:
- Very likable characters with personalities (Not some dumb sluts for sure). The female protagonist done right.
- Multiple protagonists fits this game, but right now I wish they were more integrated with each other.
- The pacing of sexual exploration is nice (a little bit slower than usual)
- Models are cute. Graphics are okay
- Lesbians. Right now there is no content, but there is a lot of lesbian potential in this game.

Cons:
- Plot. It's not bad but sometimes the story doesn't know where it's going. It's more like slice of life stories and I don't like that very much
- MC model is weird. Sometimes her head looks strange. Maybe it's her eyes idk.

Overall I recommend this game 4/5

(0.4 review)

I'm really enjoying this game.
PROS
- well written story
- good dialogues
- believable characters
- unique models
- meaningful choices
- and overall the game has a good vibe going
CONS
- not really a fan of the big eyes, but I got used to it. and the latest characters (for instance Luna) are a lot more realistic

Very good quality game about young girl that starts to explore her perverted desires. It's a VN with small degree of choice, but story unfolds in very appealing way and it is definitely a game that I'll love to revisit.

Beautiful graphics of the main character, at the moment a good construction of the storyline and well-written dialogues (at least for this genre). A very promising start))
But not too fast updates. Hope this gets better in the future.