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Amin_sun
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the female mc looks like FMC in the Navigating The Rift kinda
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Version 0.2 fixes will include:Hi dev. I really like this first edition. Here are my pointers:
- Like others said: text speed. We all don't have much time to play those games. Fast forward in your game means losing possible CCTV footage, so the text should be instant to help us out.
- I am a sucker on a "status information" page. At the same time, they had sex 42 times in 5 years? That is ... less than once a month... Ouch! lol. Maybe make it a year into marriage?
- I like to see stats that are 0. She might not be a virgin, but there are areas for a antagonist to be the first. It may even be a secret/unspoken competition between the 2 males. I like that.
- I hope that in all influences you'll receive, you won't go NTS, it's 2 different fantasies and NTS will break a lot of NTR lovers.
- I also hope for slow-ish corruption. Once the woman goes all the way, I lose a lot of interest since there is nothing more to "save", the tension of losing is consumed.
- I hope to see outfits, lots
EDIT: I love the eyes.
Great start!
- Removal of the CPS system.
- Adjusting text color with brighter tones and a white tint for better readability.
- Fixing other UI blending issues.
(Half of these ^ are already fixed.)
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"They had sex 42 times in 5 years? That is... less than once a month..."
- lmao, there are actually a few misspelled stats that were supposed to be higher, but yeah, mostly low stats. I guess this is not an ordinary couple.
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I have no plans for NTS at this point. If it is added, it will be in the very late versions of the game and will be kept very minimal. Personally, I’m not a big fan of NTS either.
I'm aiming to make this somewhere between slowish and fast (some days of the story will be very short, and others longer), as this is a practice game, but we'll see how things evolve.
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Filipis
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As long as NTR is the primary path, lesbians or straight NTR I am fine with. Lesbian NTR could be delicious as well.
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That’s why pregnancy is the ultimate conclusion for NTR stories; the antagonist tries to claim the last bit of the woman for himself (the womb), and you can create this push & pull of the FMC giving in or resisting the temptation.Hi dev. I really like this first edition. Here are my pointers:
- Like others said: text speed. We all don't have much time to play those games. Fast forward in your game means losing possible CCTV footage, so the text should be instant to help us out.
- I am a sucker on a "status information" page. At the same time, they had sex 42 times in 5 years? That is ... less than once a month... Ouch! lol. Maybe make it a year into marriage?
- I like to see stats that are 0. She might not be a virgin, but there are areas for a antagonist to be the first. It may even be a secret/unspoken competition between the 2 males. I like that.
- I hope that in all influences you'll receive, you won't go NTS, it's 2 different fantasies and NTS will break a lot of NTR lovers.
- I also hope for slow-ish corruption. Once the woman goes all the way, I lose a lot of interest since there is nothing more to "save", the tension of losing is consumed.
- I hope to see outfits, lots
EDIT: I love the eyes.
Great start!
AttilaTheHun
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Nah, this one has Caucasian facial features, and her eyes are very mesmerizing.
Amin_sun
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What I meant was that this character's model reminds me of her. Otherwise, yes, you are completely right
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SenSec3D
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I feel like I'm still too new to animation and also need to improve my basic rendering skills over time with more experience. If I added animation now, I would probably just mess it up badly. So, at least for now, I have no plans to add animations to this game, but anything is still possible in the future.
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If you're not good at it yet, you should have done a different genre.
but, this doesn't make any sense.
Filipis
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Are you serious? The amount of entitlement and disrespect in that sentence is astounding.If you're not good at it yet, you should have done a different genre.
but, this doesn't make any sense.
These are Adult Visual Novels, and if you think they absolutely need animations to portray erotica properly you are delusional; a well-posed and well-lit render with high quality is worth more than a scruffy animation.
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Please, keep going. You have captured a raw and powerful human experience—the fear of betrayal and the painful search for truth. The characters feel alive, the world feels real, and the story you're weaving is absolutely captivating. Don't give up on this project. This is a story that needs to be finished, and you are telling it with incredible skill and heart. We are all rooting for you.
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that game broke my heart.
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I would encourage you to hold fast to your artistic integrity. As a project gains popularity, it's natural for the audience to request various alternate outcomes. However, the strength of your game lies in its clear, focused premise. You defined this experience as an NTR story, and diluting that core vision to appease a wider audience would ultimately weaken the unique and compelling narrative you're building
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You're already onto something truly great here. It reminds me of what made a game like 'Navigating the Rift' such a huge, unforgettable hit. The real genius of that game wasn't just the betrayal itself, but the masterful way it built a suffocating mystery around the main character.
That game absolutely nailed the heavy NTR feeling because it created a perfect storm of dramatic tension: you, the player, are a helpless witness to the full, devastating picture of his wife's cheating and corruption. But the MC himself is lost in the dark. He isn't completely oblivious; instead, he's haunted by that slow, creeping gut feeling that something is fundamentally wrong. He's living in a world where the puzzle pieces of his life no longer fit together, and he can't understand why. That specific feeling—the paranoia, the self-doubt, the agonizing process of a man trying to solve a mystery he doesn't even know he's in—is the most powerful element.
If you can capture that same intense, paranoia-fueled atmosphere, where the suspense comes from his near-misses and growing dread, and then blend it with the unique ideas you already have, you won't just be on the right track—you'll have a psychological classic on your hands.
First, please, whatever you do, stick to pure NTR. I know it can be tempting to listen to feedback and add NTS (the 'stealer' fantasy), but they are totally different things. NTR is about the tragedy and heartbreak of losing someone, and throwing in the other guy's perspective can completely ruin that feeling for the core audience.
That brings me to my second point: the slow burn is everything. The most intense part of these stories is the process of corruption itself. It's that knife's-edge tension where you feel like there’s still something left to 'save,' even if it’s hopeless. That feeling of watching something precious slowly slipping away is the entire point. Once she has completely crossed the line and the 'fall' is complete, a lot of that heart-pounding tension is gone, and so is my interest.
That game absolutely nailed the heavy NTR feeling because it created a perfect storm of dramatic tension: you, the player, are a helpless witness to the full, devastating picture of his wife's cheating and corruption. But the MC himself is lost in the dark. He isn't completely oblivious; instead, he's haunted by that slow, creeping gut feeling that something is fundamentally wrong. He's living in a world where the puzzle pieces of his life no longer fit together, and he can't understand why. That specific feeling—the paranoia, the self-doubt, the agonizing process of a man trying to solve a mystery he doesn't even know he's in—is the most powerful element.
If you can capture that same intense, paranoia-fueled atmosphere, where the suspense comes from his near-misses and growing dread, and then blend it with the unique ideas you already have, you won't just be on the right track—you'll have a psychological classic on your hands.
First, please, whatever you do, stick to pure NTR. I know it can be tempting to listen to feedback and add NTS (the 'stealer' fantasy), but they are totally different things. NTR is about the tragedy and heartbreak of losing someone, and throwing in the other guy's perspective can completely ruin that feeling for the core audience.
That brings me to my second point: the slow burn is everything. The most intense part of these stories is the process of corruption itself. It's that knife's-edge tension where you feel like there’s still something left to 'save,' even if it’s hopeless. That feeling of watching something precious slowly slipping away is the entire point. Once she has completely crossed the line and the 'fall' is complete, a lot of that heart-pounding tension is gone, and so is my interest.
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