Hey Dev,
Look man, I'm just a filthy casual, so in all honesty what do I really know?
You're game is one, of a very miniscule few, that has actually held my attention without any real sexual content given chapter 1 is more of an intro with just a bit of light "work".
I still found the setup and overall narrative development extremely engaging. It was pleasant without being sappy and trite without seeming rushed, so for that kudos to you sir. One can tell you gave what you intended to do a fair bit of thought.
However, if I had one gripe, and know this is by no means me telling you how you should have gone about your business or in any way trying to dictate to you, it's merely a personal observation coupled with a sort of "let down feeling" if that makes sense?
The fact that the first real "sex scene" is one of Bailey sucking someone else's cock is really a bit of a bummer. Now I know the MC got a little hand action before that and you did pre-emptively point out that most scenes involving other people would only be trans on trans, but, honestly all of Bailey's firsts, to solidify player immersion should have been with the MC.
From reading the comments above I can tell many people had an issue with this I haven't actually played the Bailey/Bee scene and to be honest I don't think I will play the game further, not that the game is bad but rather it is that good that this particular blip has spoilt the entire feel of it for me.
None the less, all the best with your future endeavors Mr. Dev. Good luck.